Thursday, August 27, 2026

beneath a Saskatchewan sky

the yellow wheat fields

are endless beneath the cloudy morning

zigzagging and swaying in the strong wind

the land glows topaz and amber

with poplar trees rising from the soil


a flock of geese heads south

tracing the arc of autumn

the birds follow an ancient path

my eyes cannot see

but here, where there is not one city light


moose and deer graze

on rain-drenched grasses

a herd of bison gallops across the river

to the drumbeats of the ancestral land

hummingbirds and woodpeckers

trill among the bees and bugs


i do not disturb the silence

not with a hunting gun

not with my boots and jacket


instead,

i remind myself

that i am only a visitor here*


i tread lightly,

taking my trash with me

beneath a Saskatchewan sky,

the wind erases my footprints

as it has erased countless others before,

leaving only the land

to remember



*Inspired by the poem:  INSTRUCTIONS BEFORE VISITING EARTH
by James McCrae

Posted for dVerse Poets Pub- OpenLinkNight - Join us when the virtual pub doors open at 3pm EST.   Saskatchewan is a province in Western Canada.   I visited last week and I enjoyed my time under the prairie sky.


24 comments:

  1. It sounds so magic with such plains, there is something special with big open skies... a bit like the sea actually

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  2. This is exquisitely drawn, Grace. I especially admire; "a herd of bison gallops across the river to the drumbeats of the ancestral land." ❤️❤️

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  3. I can hear the silence drop in this poem with only the sky to witness footprints

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  4. Marveloso! Thanks for bringing us along!

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  5. This is a delightful poem, Grace. I always wanted to visit Joni Mitchell’s childhood home in Saskatchewan, and I’ve read about the sky and the yellow wheat fields. I love the use of colour and the flock of geese ‘tracing the arc of autumn’.

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  6. What a beautiful space you've invited us into, Grace. I want to be there and breathe it in, tiptoeing my way out delicately as you've written so marvelously here.

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  7. Lovely pastoral, Grace. Untouched by human hands is a good thing when it comes to nature. Maybe one day we will "get back to the garden." Happy you had a chance to visit it.

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  8. Been there, you evoke the landscape and the magic of the place really well. JIM

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  9. A gentle, thoughtful poem; I can feel the love of country in it.

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  10. Very Nice Grace, reminds me of growing up in Wyoming and the bottomless sky i lived under! Sounds beautiful! And such a lovely poem! 💛

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  11. Your words painted the scenery beautifully. I am always mindful when in nature trying to not spoil its natural landscape and inhabitants. Enjoyed all the references to the animals along the way. Thank you for sharing your adventure.

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  12. Such a glorious picture you paint, Grace. Yes, we are only visitors here, and that's how it should be.

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  13. What a wonderful picture you paint, Grace...

    i do not disturb the silence
    not with a hunting gun
    not with my boots and jacket

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  14. It's beautiful and magical how by reading this poem am also teleported to the nature. Love it!

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  15. instead, i remind myself that i am only a visitor here

    Fun to be visiting places nearby Grace which we often miss knowing they are always there for later!

    Hank

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  16. Beautiful, Grace! We have been through Saskatchewan in summer and it is beautiful to see the wheat and canola fields! Well done.

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  17. This is so gorgeous, Grace. I love the reverence towards Mother Nature in your poem, and especially that final stanza and how the wind erases your footprints. Beautiful.

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  18. The second stanza stays with me. Beautiful, picturesque poem!

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  19. Grace, you captured so much of the lovely landscape in the truly amazing (I'll call it an ode) to the beauty surrounding you. Lots of sighs here in Bend.

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  20. Oh my goodness, the peace, beauty and quiet that are portrayed here make me want to go there right away, But in a way, I'm there already, transported by the words, and in particular, "tracing the arc of autumn" stays with me.

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  21. I so love this Grace, especially the line - a flock of geese heads south tracing the arc of autumn so resonates for me.

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