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Monday, January 13, 2020
(again)
you are the opaline clouds salty foam from the roar of the ocean waves beating my wild moon heart and if i have to choose you (again) i'll embrace your dewdrops absorb your words as rain and brush your ash over my singed skin Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - Quadrille, hosted by De Jackson. This is a 44 word post with the chose word, ROAR. Thanks for the visit.
I love the echo of ‘(again)’ in the title and the poem, Grace, and the romantic beauty in ‘beating my wild moon heart’. I especially enjoyed the final stanza.
Love the title in parenthesis....almost like a voice within the parameters of a mountain canyon, shouting out the word....and then it echoes exactly the same back at the reader within the body of the poem. The parentheses make it really seem like an echo. And to use the word "again" which is what an echo does...well done! Plus romance too!
I do love the wild moon heart, I think I have one of those, as well. I finally saw the moon this morning on my way to work.(sigh) It had been hiding for the last two nights.
Ohhhhhhh, MY. That first stanza. Swooning over that "wild moon heart," as I have one, also.
ReplyDeleteLove the thought of this happening again... like waves coming back over and over.
ReplyDeleteA second chance, nicely penned
ReplyDeleteHappy Monday
Much✏love
I love the echo of ‘(again)’ in the title and the poem, Grace, and the romantic beauty in ‘beating my wild moon heart’. I especially enjoyed the final stanza.
ReplyDeleteLove the title in parenthesis....almost like a voice within the parameters of a mountain canyon, shouting out the word....and then it echoes exactly the same back at the reader within the body of the poem. The parentheses make it really seem like an echo. And to use the word "again" which is what an echo does...well done!
ReplyDeletePlus romance too!
Simply lovely.
ReplyDeletethere is a global feel to your poem even in its intimacy. you're taking all in, through time. profound poem
ReplyDeleteSimply gorgeous Grace.
ReplyDeleteOh to love (again)! This is beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteA return again and again. Can't be beat.
ReplyDeleteI like the description of words as rain to be absorbed.
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ReplyDeleteI do love the wild moon heart, I think I have one of those, as well. I finally saw the moon this morning on my way to work.(sigh) It had been hiding for the last two nights.
ReplyDeleteAah! The only thing that can make you crazy, yet you'd do it all over again. Fitting title.
ReplyDeletePat
Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteI just love, "absorb your words as rain"
ReplyDeleteNice!
Mind-blowing last stanza!
ReplyDeleteNice!
ReplyDeleteOh my! I love everything about this poem!
ReplyDeleteThis may be my favorite of yours.
I love "beating my wild moon heart".
ReplyDeleteGrace you are wonderful. I found a mild eroticism in this writing and am glad for it!
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