tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post9068192644175635206..comments2024-03-27T22:12:01.201-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: August moonGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-82406998589237567022019-08-15T10:43:22.329-04:002019-08-15T10:43:22.329-04:00Love the repeat of the first line. You have such a...Love the repeat of the first line. You have such a way with descriptive writing! A beautiful write!lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-41147101309595268732019-08-13T11:51:44.931-04:002019-08-13T11:51:44.931-04:00Love the repetition in the lead line of each stanz...Love the repetition in the lead line of each stanza. Your poem pulses with vitality!Frank J. Tassonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11034177573832896440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-45000248917537170052019-08-10T20:49:26.919-04:002019-08-10T20:49:26.919-04:00half moons, always balanced on the edge of yesterd...half moons, always balanced on the edge of yesterday ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-40876429020726981582019-08-10T07:28:43.360-04:002019-08-10T07:28:43.360-04:00Lovely and sublime. The stanzas do not proceed as ...Lovely and sublime. The stanzas do not proceed as much as magnify a deep image.Brendanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03983584155125369291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-50952322880304849522019-08-09T13:42:40.009-04:002019-08-09T13:42:40.009-04:00I caught a glimpse of the half moon, last night I ...I caught a glimpse of the half moon, last night I think it was. I can see why you would want to speak to her.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-76121611934264363752019-08-09T08:32:57.071-04:002019-08-09T08:32:57.071-04:00Great rhythm in this one. I really like it!Great rhythm in this one. I really like it!Phillip Scotthttp://www.phillipkscott.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-88118777427022628812019-08-09T06:31:29.544-04:002019-08-09T06:31:29.544-04:00I liked the repeating line. I hadn't thought o...I liked the repeating line. I hadn't thought of it before but a half-moon does cradle both shadow and light.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-40984830717866935282019-08-08T23:37:14.043-04:002019-08-08T23:37:14.043-04:00It has the gentle rhythm of circling...like the mo...It has the gentle rhythm of circling...like the moon. Kerfehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14679460865016032660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-70873088783622601882019-08-08T22:16:26.402-04:002019-08-08T22:16:26.402-04:00A great poem Grace! The repeated lines work very ...A great poem Grace! The repeated lines work very well!Dwight L. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07992133580674047782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-74906331257987177072019-08-08T18:54:04.831-04:002019-08-08T18:54:04.831-04:00Really lovely. Your repetition adds a beautiful s...Really lovely. Your repetition adds a beautiful sway to this poem. - JenJennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-7138289019673384422019-08-08T18:37:08.675-04:002019-08-08T18:37:08.675-04:00Nice poem about the August moon. Enjoyable read. Nice poem about the August moon. Enjoyable read. Arcadia Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02632127814188649845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-22787635428020198612019-08-08T18:16:50.197-04:002019-08-08T18:16:50.197-04:00Such beautiful imagery. I was transported in the l...Such beautiful imagery. I was transported in the loveliest way.H. Hennenburghttps://www.hennenburg.com/?s=looknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-25565602106500089192019-08-08T17:31:31.857-04:002019-08-08T17:31:31.857-04:00I like the sharper images contrasting with the smo...I like the sharper images contrasting with the smoother images, that seem to mirror the dark and light hemisphere cradles of the moons. It works well.Jade Lihttp://tao-talk.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-73234699931904432522019-08-08T16:04:20.843-04:002019-08-08T16:04:20.843-04:00Toni said prayer, but I thought song. Lovely image...Toni said prayer, but I thought song. Lovely images, Grace.Merril D. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07208799388236948565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-50057918285785549842019-08-08T15:50:56.336-04:002019-08-08T15:50:56.336-04:00The moon and tides, such an appropriate meeting.The moon and tides, such an appropriate meeting.Jane Doughertyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14700193165487305298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-85050072414515433882019-08-08T15:41:07.098-04:002019-08-08T15:41:07.098-04:00This reads like a prayer.Wise and sacred - the rep...This reads like a prayer.Wise and sacred - the repeating lines add to the beauty of it.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12299970145155468689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-72644776047044586422019-08-08T15:30:06.212-04:002019-08-08T15:30:06.212-04:00Somehow, in my mind, these seem to be the words o...Somehow, in my mind, these seem to be the words of a wise old native American chieftain. I think you channeled him! Beautiful.indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-75696260514840872702019-08-08T15:29:16.830-04:002019-08-08T15:29:16.830-04:00A beautiful write Grace, I love the imagery of ...A beautiful write Grace, I love the imagery of 'Half moon, cradle of shadows and light' xxxXenia Tranhttps://whippetwisdom.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-26744709175183709572019-08-08T15:13:19.482-04:002019-08-08T15:13:19.482-04:00I’ve been watching the August moon and you’ve port...I’ve been watching the August moon and you’ve portrayed her beautifully, Grace. I love the repeated phrase ‘cradle of shadows and light’.Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-2288345644510046762019-08-08T15:08:11.035-04:002019-08-08T15:08:11.035-04:00I love your description of the half moon Grace. I love your description of the half moon Grace. Linda Lee Lyberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669367010600000396noreply@blogger.com