tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post9063709179647242798..comments2024-03-29T08:01:55.910-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: If you come across the MessiahGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger41125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-18315722579035148342014-05-29T00:26:00.238-04:002014-05-29T00:26:00.238-04:00"If you come across the Messiah..." a po..."If you come across the Messiah..." a powerful line to cap off an equally powerful poemAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-63423077343365749722014-05-28T22:12:05.217-04:002014-05-28T22:12:05.217-04:00oh wow! I am blown away by this, Grace. Indeed, ...oh wow! I am blown away by this, Grace. Indeed, shall we recognize the Messiah when He is once more physically in our midst?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-17229697418821837842014-05-28T20:28:39.353-04:002014-05-28T20:28:39.353-04:00What a beautiful message.
This is my favorite par...What a beautiful message.<br /><br />This is my favorite part: "shadows hovering, ambivalent of dove's return"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-72647256139680473042014-05-28T20:05:32.927-04:002014-05-28T20:05:32.927-04:00"Would I know you?" I think that is suc..."Would I know you?" I think that is such a great question to ask...wonderful poem Grace.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-83716404642514504362014-05-28T18:28:20.489-04:002014-05-28T18:28:20.489-04:00This is very beautiful Grace. Would we know him? I...This is very beautiful Grace. Would we know him? I often wonder. A poem I will always treasure.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-88137044686022320052014-05-28T16:58:07.105-04:002014-05-28T16:58:07.105-04:00This was beautiful with many visuals for me. This was beautiful with many visuals for me. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-84807007394855040842014-05-28T15:25:25.990-04:002014-05-28T15:25:25.990-04:00Excellent Grace. This is perfect. Be on guard f...Excellent Grace. This is perfect. Be on guard for no one knows when He will return... nor what he looks like.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-5133611715859291302014-05-28T12:07:15.788-04:002014-05-28T12:07:15.788-04:00Excellent poem Grace...one of my favourites!Excellent poem Grace...one of my favourites!Cressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08781684841036567770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-67918423279758154992014-05-28T11:48:39.777-04:002014-05-28T11:48:39.777-04:00The yearnings for survival and salvation. Searchin...The yearnings for survival and salvation. Searching for the savior the Messiah in form or in emotional support. Is the aim in many of us. Great write Grace!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-17569471546475231382014-05-28T11:35:39.460-04:002014-05-28T11:35:39.460-04:00I love this! You wove the words from the list sea...I love this! You wove the words from the list seamlessly into something beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-11754002281796992192014-05-28T10:31:29.786-04:002014-05-28T10:31:29.786-04:00So beautiful!.....if everybody could think so....l...So beautiful!.....if everybody could think so....loved this...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-19508383276150126702014-05-28T08:46:30.909-04:002014-05-28T08:46:30.909-04:00many congratulations for the publications.many congratulations for the publications.Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-42451617696725992362014-05-28T07:40:37.484-04:002014-05-28T07:40:37.484-04:00I love the scene you painted here with these beaut...I love the scene you painted here with these beautiful words. I don't think many of us would recognize him because we probably have these preconceived notions in our head of what he would look like.Optimistic Existentialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507986337866049924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-53585590119022804232014-05-28T07:09:34.065-04:002014-05-28T07:09:34.065-04:00Oh wow an excellent poem, some days you do wonder ...Oh wow an excellent poem, some days you do wonder where he is... really well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-86079328840002324612014-05-28T06:18:34.966-04:002014-05-28T06:18:34.966-04:00Enjoyed this one ...we have to find that messiah.....Enjoyed this one ...we have to find that messiah..:)) Arathi Hariharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142420236345157881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-53689662725849259672014-05-28T00:26:10.265-04:002014-05-28T00:26:10.265-04:00Love the Rock lyrics: /what if God were one of us?...Love the Rock lyrics: /what if God were one of us? Just a slob like one of us, just a stranger on the bus trying to make his way home?/ This poem is both epic & personal; enjoyed the spiritual challenge, the proposals, the choices;<br />nice job; excellent rendering poetically. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-75632366456994288032014-05-27T21:16:48.324-04:002014-05-27T21:16:48.324-04:00Beggar,
If you come across the Messiah, please le...Beggar, <br />If you come across the Messiah, please let me know. <br /><br />Touche! Take a bow for this one Grace.Mon.Esprithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11348192101465775124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-74909246354459829022014-05-27T21:15:44.114-04:002014-05-27T21:15:44.114-04:00"Are you the old man muttering to himself&quo..."Are you the old man muttering to himself" wonderful as is everything before and after it.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-90588560513516996402014-05-27T21:06:48.954-04:002014-05-27T21:06:48.954-04:00Yes, Grace...this is perfection...I love the way y...Yes, Grace...this is perfection...I love the way you've woven these words into cathedral and street you've given messiah a many faceted face...this is a gorgeous poem. Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-14640842090720371442014-05-27T20:31:04.020-04:002014-05-27T20:31:04.020-04:00Grace I like where you went with this as you set t...Grace I like where you went with this as you set the scene. Would we know the messiah if we saw him???? This leaves me pondering..perhaps, he is the beggar one never knows. Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-42473675031741276042014-05-27T19:36:15.066-04:002014-05-27T19:36:15.066-04:00Excellent! I have had these thoughts myself...Love...Excellent! I have had these thoughts myself...Love it!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-423022975355819872014-05-27T19:18:49.871-04:002014-05-27T19:18:49.871-04:00nice modern day scene you made for us... loved the...nice modern day scene you made for us... loved the detail in discriptionWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-44675295342865672222014-05-27T18:16:43.516-04:002014-05-27T18:16:43.516-04:00As I'm reading your poem. I picture reciting t...As I'm reading your poem. I picture reciting this amazing poem at an open mic poetry lounge. Excellent! and well written poem. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-36095989984323765442014-05-27T16:21:44.852-04:002014-05-27T16:21:44.852-04:00I loved the last line - it's a perfect ending ...I loved the last line - it's a perfect ending to this glorious piece. And no, there's nothing wrong with talking to yourself - it's the only way to get a sane answer! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-30053262581923945552014-05-27T16:02:13.677-04:002014-05-27T16:02:13.677-04:00There's a messiah in everyone... we just have ...There's a messiah in everyone... we just have to take time to see; also, hopefully the person is open-minded enough to realize it... very touching writeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.com