tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post8641278886694782886..comments2024-03-29T03:50:10.734-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: Deep sleep Gracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger45125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-15612621926076976602013-10-19T23:20:01.882-04:002013-10-19T23:20:01.882-04:00Grace, late to the show, but I loved the concept o...Grace, late to the show, but I loved the concept of the cave as womb for the waters. This is gorgeous, really fits the image. AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-67765807904699478462013-10-19T19:55:33.244-04:002013-10-19T19:55:33.244-04:00Such a beautiful poem and the close is just perfec...Such a beautiful poem and the close is just perfect.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-27331637695410125732013-10-19T17:16:36.555-04:002013-10-19T17:16:36.555-04:00I just love the pairing of the vision of the womb ...I just love the pairing of the vision of the womb and the richness of your closing lines...really poignant as always Grace! Thank you for writing! :)Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-49232724898191197952013-10-19T13:53:30.662-04:002013-10-19T13:53:30.662-04:00That is exquisitely beautiful, just a river of sal...That is exquisitely beautiful, just a river of salvation. Marvelous.alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-39736920032327208142013-10-19T12:52:47.380-04:002013-10-19T12:52:47.380-04:00I love your salvation...I could use some of this b...I love your salvation...I could use some of this blue~<br />Happy weekend Grace<br />I enjoyed your bluetiful poemEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-3927910440942700482013-10-19T11:46:13.966-04:002013-10-19T11:46:13.966-04:00I liked the mother earth reference with the womb. ...I liked the mother earth reference with the womb. the blues are so striking.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-78406108740304550142013-10-19T09:17:55.124-04:002013-10-19T09:17:55.124-04:00azure blue, cobalt blue, petroleum blue, midnight ...azure blue, cobalt blue, petroleum blue, midnight blue, topaz blue, emerald blue.... don't we just love blue? DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-7772784454316038852013-10-19T08:06:12.851-04:002013-10-19T08:06:12.851-04:00Hi Grace!
Nice 55. My favorite stanza is the seco...Hi Grace!<br /><br />Nice 55. My favorite stanza is the second, and of course, the ending. What we're all in search of.Yvonne Osbornehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18212188414972694795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-59713367617037132692013-10-19T06:07:45.390-04:002013-10-19T06:07:45.390-04:00No one wants to get burned ~ your creative imagery...No one wants to get burned ~ your creative imagery is set perfectly alongside your beautiful words Grace once again ~ loved the womb/cave ref. Have a lovely weekend. x Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-38574497214082225782013-10-19T02:00:56.932-04:002013-10-19T02:00:56.932-04:00Beautiful.....I love to visit here often....weavin...Beautiful.....I love to visit here often....weaving words and ideas is such an art....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-76118328754122713692013-10-19T01:42:47.218-04:002013-10-19T01:42:47.218-04:00A wonderful write, Grace. It's lovely.
KA wonderful write, Grace. It's lovely.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-36482993823662841172013-10-18T20:24:56.504-04:002013-10-18T20:24:56.504-04:00beautiful Grace!:)beautiful Grace!:)Gloria Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03055543111865966546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-37682104811823689722013-10-18T19:33:03.590-04:002013-10-18T19:33:03.590-04:00"here the river
gravitates towards its womb:&..."here the river<br />gravitates towards its womb:"<br /><br />That is fantastically written - it meanders smoothly along, settles, soothes.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-32494581205541328252013-10-18T19:02:39.379-04:002013-10-18T19:02:39.379-04:00Maybe it's just me, but this feels like synchr...Maybe it's just me, but this feels like synchronicity with my poem. Anyway, yours is lovely!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-10084375983490871582013-10-18T17:02:34.483-04:002013-10-18T17:02:34.483-04:00great poem especially these last lines...
silence...great poem especially these last lines...<br /><br />silence, haven<br />suspended time<br /><br />perhaps<br />this is my salvationrevelationshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07184644795582553870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-42805991170391440272013-10-18T16:25:29.233-04:002013-10-18T16:25:29.233-04:00So beautiful Grace...I needed the peace of this po...So beautiful Grace...I needed the peace of this poemSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-67205804989580260222013-10-18T16:23:52.215-04:002013-10-18T16:23:52.215-04:00This is awesome... The last line is my favorite. This is awesome... The last line is my favorite. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-21182432851608689092013-10-18T15:43:32.284-04:002013-10-18T15:43:32.284-04:00Lovely use of color, Grace. There is a serenity, t...Lovely use of color, Grace. There is a serenity, too, in something so much larger than oneself.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-63950773330228957702013-10-18T15:23:11.450-04:002013-10-18T15:23:11.450-04:00Great choice of words ... captivating.
Peace
Siggi...Great choice of words ... captivating.<br />Peace<br />SiggiSiggi in Downeast Mainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12977578917775406831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-26111784893376438002013-10-18T14:17:08.590-04:002013-10-18T14:17:08.590-04:00BEAUTIFUL! Love the concept of "suspended tim...BEAUTIFUL! Love the concept of "suspended time." And the "deep velvet blue."Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-47082926116354366232013-10-18T14:07:35.310-04:002013-10-18T14:07:35.310-04:00So vivid. Great work with the imagery.So vivid. Great work with the imagery.Preeti S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08367363156339655332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-56691478652637166862013-10-18T13:34:52.611-04:002013-10-18T13:34:52.611-04:00Beautiful. Your words paint as lovely a picture a...Beautiful. Your words paint as lovely a picture as the photo.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-88712119403779086132013-10-18T13:33:33.832-04:002013-10-18T13:33:33.832-04:00Your poem ... deep as blue velvet.Your poem ... deep as blue velvet.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-9135886227972951392013-10-18T13:28:50.055-04:002013-10-18T13:28:50.055-04:00even the couplets are paced as though from quiet b...even the couplets are paced as though from quiet breathing ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-3876772367755818582013-10-18T12:38:43.310-04:002013-10-18T12:38:43.310-04:00I could use a place where nothing burns or sears. ...I could use a place where nothing burns or sears. Alice Audreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00493000223984649409noreply@blogger.com