tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post8337795454294349263..comments2024-03-27T22:12:01.201-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: the world inside/outsideGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-7031627202623250382018-07-10T08:24:53.338-04:002018-07-10T08:24:53.338-04:00Very powerful, Grace.<b>Very powerful, Grace.</b>Blue Grumpsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03106493133778319165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-26972492231003710512018-06-28T09:58:25.726-04:002018-06-28T09:58:25.726-04:00Yes, I think this could be the instructions for th...Yes, I think this could be the instructions for the dance!! Enjoyed your write.annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-70338307435743703572018-06-27T22:42:55.409-04:002018-06-27T22:42:55.409-04:00This is wonderful. This is relationship.This is wonderful. This is relationship.Sascha Darlingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10341908377333394733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-86599618865122050802018-06-27T21:55:32.927-04:002018-06-27T21:55:32.927-04:00Everyone needs to read this poem, it should be a l...Everyone needs to read this poem, it should be a law. All in favor... say TWIST. 🙂Lona Gynthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515940835167757466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-59437685632955218952018-06-27T21:52:55.904-04:002018-06-27T21:52:55.904-04:00Wow, oh just simply wow!!! Romantic, sensual, bou...Wow, oh just simply wow!!! Romantic, sensual, bound togetherness, longing separateness, 1 + 1 = the circles of the world. Thank you for this stunning peace! 💜Lona Gynthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515940835167757466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-90447616415829462192018-06-27T21:25:36.509-04:002018-06-27T21:25:36.509-04:00my sun rises in pink over blue mirrored lake
your...my sun rises in pink over blue mirrored lake <br />your sun sets in scattered inkblots of mystery<br /><br />This tells a lot of a relationship that may turn wild and painful to one stable and happy. Great opposites Grace!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-48750855646561058762018-06-27T16:49:53.119-04:002018-06-27T16:49:53.119-04:00..framing the sky with questions..😊..framing the sky with questions..😊Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-72021922957360795972018-06-27T15:30:51.047-04:002018-06-27T15:30:51.047-04:00This is beautiful! So many questions we have. So m...This is beautiful! So many questions we have. So many answers given, but in so many ways we don't understandMary Hoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17528465484642169618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-72208966568773890612018-06-27T13:43:24.096-04:002018-06-27T13:43:24.096-04:00A beautiful and romantic write. You made opposites...A beautiful and romantic write. You made opposites work!Vivian Zemshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09588008375525403964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-2664643191981329802018-06-27T04:48:22.592-04:002018-06-27T04:48:22.592-04:00Ah, deeply romantic. And I like the lines about co...Ah, deeply romantic. And I like the lines about coming together and breaking apart - they add a note of realism that makes this about a real relationship rather than an idealised one. sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01756314170839177900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-74785731882755822102018-06-27T02:30:11.253-04:002018-06-27T02:30:11.253-04:00How romantic! and both of them complete each other...How romantic! and both of them complete each other.Dr. Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07812039483229217149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-86969012505888640452018-06-27T02:29:26.160-04:002018-06-27T02:29:26.160-04:00This is stunning, Grace! I love how the rhythm of ...This is stunning, Grace! I love how the rhythm of your antithesis ebbs and flows, with crescendo and diminuendo. I love the lines:<br />'i, penning words bursting out of seams<br />you, painting abstracts serene as midnight stars'<br />and<br />we zigzag and go off course but <br /> love circles back (to)<br /> <br />this world of us, inside you<br />inside me, this world of us'.Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-40985927045248146602018-06-26T22:41:35.866-04:002018-06-26T22:41:35.866-04:00Interesting poem form.. "I like"
peace ...Interesting poem form.. "I like"<br /><br />peace and love<br />1ManView1ManViewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17896979433381268598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-69755345895961713562018-06-26T21:18:17.433-04:002018-06-26T21:18:17.433-04:00Wonderfully written, Grace! I love how your opposi...Wonderfully written, Grace! I love how your opposites are intertwined with love! Love even overcomes Opposites!!Dwight L. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07992133580674047782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-17601432595186252432018-06-26T17:33:38.215-04:002018-06-26T17:33:38.215-04:00What a wonderous array of evocative images that em...What a wonderous array of evocative images that embody yin and yang so profoundly! Wonderful write, Grace! :)Frank J. Tassonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11034177573832896440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-113094354074298252018-06-26T16:57:54.837-04:002018-06-26T16:57:54.837-04:00Round and round, but always coming back. Love can ...Round and round, but always coming back. Love can win out.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-8013447342598150352018-06-26T15:51:59.836-04:002018-06-26T15:51:59.836-04:00oh this is lovely, Grace :) ladylee xoh this is lovely, Grace :) ladylee xladyleemanilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18346967786004268152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-60689950486956771962018-06-26T15:42:29.540-04:002018-06-26T15:42:29.540-04:00Exactly what is meant by opposites attracting. Bea...Exactly what is meant by opposites attracting. Beautifully done.Jane Doughertyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14700193165487305298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-51105885026709763142018-06-26T15:40:20.654-04:002018-06-26T15:40:20.654-04:00This beautifully describes the dance of love - ver...This beautifully describes the dance of love - very well done!johttps://jowrites.aylard.ca/index.php/trying-so-hardnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-88474815693205418022018-06-26T15:10:59.903-04:002018-06-26T15:10:59.903-04:00Nice lines: "my sun rises in pink over blue m...Nice lines: "my sun rises in pink over blue mirrored lake <br />your sun sets in scattered inkblots of mystery"Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-46344390840289944672018-06-26T14:56:34.804-04:002018-06-26T14:56:34.804-04:00This is fantastic....the juxtapositioning of I and...This is fantastic....the juxtapositioning of I and you. So much wonderful descriptive imagery here in seeting out the differences.<br />"i, penning words bursting out of seams" -- loving this line and as I read it, the words themselves "knock up" against each other...not wording that right. Penning could be as in penning in....and then bursting out of seams...so even within the one line for I there is some antithesis. And then the end comes all the way around....and they fit oh so well together into a world of us. A wonderful write to the prompt! lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-26365803225663683122018-06-26T14:16:30.712-04:002018-06-26T14:16:30.712-04:00I love this dance of opposites... in particular
t...I love this dance of opposites... in particular<br /><br />time races when we kiss <br /> and twist <br />time pauses when we spar <br /> and part<br /><br />Love the sound of spar and part<br /> brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com