tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post83285947660239347..comments2024-03-27T22:12:01.201-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: This houseGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-68788994244528577642014-02-25T19:52:57.609-05:002014-02-25T19:52:57.609-05:00Oh, this just oozes pain, Grace. I can almost tast...Oh, this just oozes pain, Grace. I can almost taste the imminent betrayal. I love how much you evoke in so few words.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-83990414990856752362014-02-25T12:15:13.623-05:002014-02-25T12:15:13.623-05:00nice picture!
very nice blog by the way :)
kisses...nice picture!<br />very nice blog by the way :)<br /><br />kisses from Russia,<br />Juliet<br /><a href="http://www.julietpolilova.com/" rel="nofollow">RUSSIAN DOLL</a>Juliet Polilovahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01961757850425870205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-11543602071584234182014-02-25T01:10:21.423-05:002014-02-25T01:10:21.423-05:00ooh...ouch..."the hours are fragile & wri...ooh...ouch..."the hours are fragile & wrinkled in jars" is dazzling poetically. Painfully beautiful poem Grace.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-92040159866738073182014-02-25T00:13:27.549-05:002014-02-25T00:13:27.549-05:00You did an amazing job. Like how you incorporated ...You did an amazing job. Like how you incorporated the words. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10304701332216772385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-35658691187524837462014-02-24T11:46:03.200-05:002014-02-24T11:46:03.200-05:00Masterful use of the word list .... Wrinkled hour...Masterful use of the word list .... Wrinkled hours AND in jars? Wonderful.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-22887098122566671462014-02-24T08:52:34.810-05:002014-02-24T08:52:34.810-05:00ah, Grace. This one made me a bit sad. Reminders...ah, Grace. This one made me a bit sad. Reminders of turning inward. Great writing. As always, thank you and have a beautiful week!Elsie Amatahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14531633490964827363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-52306408329088309182014-02-24T08:32:19.839-05:002014-02-24T08:32:19.839-05:00Beautiful Grace! Your poetry never seizes to amaze...Beautiful Grace! Your poetry never seizes to amaze me! Thank you for that! :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-43654805740512362582014-02-24T05:02:44.073-05:002014-02-24T05:02:44.073-05:00What happens behind closed doors...felt the emotio...What happens behind closed doors...felt the emotions Grace xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-32325570375479436562014-02-24T03:12:46.778-05:002014-02-24T03:12:46.778-05:00oh, see, this is brilliant, Grace: hours are fragi...oh, see, this is brilliant, Grace: hours are fragile & wrinkled in jars, and so smoothly absorbed both prompts into one mix... have a good week ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-28325080529281117452014-02-23T23:05:03.873-05:002014-02-23T23:05:03.873-05:00 The sadness of heart is enveloping the world....a... The sadness of heart is enveloping the world....a powerful write...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-22566510530971322212014-02-23T21:46:15.332-05:002014-02-23T21:46:15.332-05:00How sad when a home would end up as only' almo...How sad when a home would end up as only' almost a home. ' This is a felt piece, Grace. A truly inspired write. Smiles.kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-45875458478992236812014-02-23T17:46:49.277-05:002014-02-23T17:46:49.277-05:00This is...special and strong Grace!This is...special and strong Grace!Gloria Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03055543111865966546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-55842826924076559592014-02-23T16:07:15.424-05:002014-02-23T16:07:15.424-05:00Yikes! Leave the dust ...Yikes! Leave the dust ...Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-18960740321396499002014-02-23T15:39:19.196-05:002014-02-23T15:39:19.196-05:00Nice use of imagery. Hmmm, me thinks the narrator...Nice use of imagery. Hmmm, me thinks the narrator here to be a bitter one, but well earned. Good work!Isadora Gruyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036782300945079952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-67971129635931997552014-02-23T15:25:50.538-05:002014-02-23T15:25:50.538-05:00There's a sad note of betrayal here that rings...There's a sad note of betrayal here that rings true.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-15804714545711175352014-02-23T15:24:42.418-05:002014-02-23T15:24:42.418-05:00excellent, the end in particular! excellent, the end in particular! Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-31022251066137518652014-02-23T15:19:23.037-05:002014-02-23T15:19:23.037-05:00Excellently powerful and emotional words.Excellently powerful and emotional words.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-46543593407703610612014-02-23T15:19:17.804-05:002014-02-23T15:19:17.804-05:00"the hours are fragile and wrinkled in jars&q..."the hours are fragile and wrinkled in jars" - what a stellar line! The poem reveals a slow disintegration, as awareness grows. Great write!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-68078957958757566912014-02-23T14:48:55.748-05:002014-02-23T14:48:55.748-05:00I enjoyed the analogy between the house and the br...I enjoyed the analogy between the house and the broken relationship!Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-73592033193124096782014-02-23T14:33:37.284-05:002014-02-23T14:33:37.284-05:00This poem has an intensity to it, Grace; and the e...This poem has an intensity to it, Grace; and the ending is painfully heartbreaking to the one involved. How sad to feel that one's love was seeking someone else.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-63604005623450074012014-02-23T13:37:22.773-05:002014-02-23T13:37:22.773-05:00filled with poignancy - and that line 'while t...filled with poignancy - and that line 'while the hours are fragile & wrinkled in jars' stunning! KAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-42204996298679448882014-02-23T13:26:51.333-05:002014-02-23T13:26:51.333-05:00The holes and scars and what have you just add to ...The holes and scars and what have you just add to itPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-70584128365107308772014-02-23T11:24:15.872-05:002014-02-23T11:24:15.872-05:00This is just wonderful Grace.. these raw feelings....This is just wonderful Grace.. these raw feelings..especially in that last line... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-42912491994311608862014-02-23T11:09:25.920-05:002014-02-23T11:09:25.920-05:00Its okay Keith ~ Thanks for the visit ~Its okay Keith ~ Thanks for the visit ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-6411651409063206742014-02-23T11:08:25.325-05:002014-02-23T11:08:25.325-05:00A matter of perspective ~ Our eyes see what it wa...A matter of perspective ~ Our eyes see what it wants to see all the time ~<br /><br />Thanks Brian ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.com