tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post772004642201451033..comments2024-03-27T22:12:01.201-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: Voyage of lost soulsGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger43125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-91194377321406814532014-10-29T22:00:23.071-04:002014-10-29T22:00:23.071-04:00there was a whimsy at the start that seemed to vee...there was a whimsy at the start that seemed to veer into the ominous. really nicely written.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-36500298630650549752014-10-28T09:25:14.356-04:002014-10-28T09:25:14.356-04:00Love this Grace, what a beautifully crafted poem!Love this Grace, what a beautifully crafted poem!Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-18566507467509011052014-10-28T07:11:59.860-04:002014-10-28T07:11:59.860-04:00Love...I just wrote about paper boats :).....beaut...Love...I just wrote about paper boats :).....beautiful.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-70728330851682208542014-10-28T04:20:53.357-04:002014-10-28T04:20:53.357-04:00Loved the visualization in this piece ... very bea...Loved the visualization in this piece ... very beautiful :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-44939250583645150612014-10-26T22:32:45.327-04:002014-10-26T22:32:45.327-04:00This piece is mysterious and ominous at the same t...This piece is mysterious and ominous at the same time. It complements the photo very well. :-)<br /><br />I just wonder why the comment window says the comment is from "Anonymous". Have I been away from your blog that long? :-)<br />~Imelda <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-82753782483075656602014-10-26T21:52:25.736-04:002014-10-26T21:52:25.736-04:00Grace, seamless portrait that so clearly depicts w...Grace, seamless portrait that so clearly depicts what you've framed in the title. Thanks for adding your voice to the word list prompt, and have a good week ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-61677059293317236122014-10-26T20:34:44.661-04:002014-10-26T20:34:44.661-04:00Love this part, Grace:
"red moon waits
to run...Love this part, Grace:<br />"red moon waits<br />to run its silver-blue fingers"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-70865128648994375462014-10-26T17:45:06.506-04:002014-10-26T17:45:06.506-04:00The images symbolizing end of life, traveling west...The images symbolizing end of life, traveling westbound, a captivating tale of lost souls. The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-43512949756289989082014-10-26T16:13:09.778-04:002014-10-26T16:13:09.778-04:00Your handsomely constructed Poem could be a fittin...Your handsomely constructed Poem could be a fitting description of the soul of it's final word. So nicely done<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />ALOHA from Honolulu<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">ComfortSpiral</a><br /> =^..^= . <3 Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-14859388185541972122014-10-26T15:39:29.016-04:002014-10-26T15:39:29.016-04:00loved the selection of adjectives making the sense...loved the selection of adjectives making the senses come alive on this adventure Wolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-77082257793253223422014-10-26T08:56:59.302-04:002014-10-26T08:56:59.302-04:00really cool write...neat contrast in the opening a...really cool write...neat contrast in the opening as well between the paper boats by the big dark ships...i think the paper ones can have as much power as the larger ones...giving up the innocence of finding the names of all the truthes...that is a telling part for me, there....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-20143797110769474262014-10-26T08:19:47.501-04:002014-10-26T08:19:47.501-04:00oh my, this is so achingly beautiful... i want to ...oh my, this is so achingly beautiful... i want to be lost with her, she knows how to see.mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-30506878646324452932014-10-26T08:07:03.299-04:002014-10-26T08:07:03.299-04:00Sacrifices are very empting as we all move through...Sacrifices are very empting as we all move through to new seasons in life and our travels. Funny how it always seems to be in the falls and late springs. You make the trip a very solemn repose.<br />http://matineemercy.blogspot.com/2014/07/feeble-change.htmlSharon Rose Thomashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05978390292247630316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-64213618883782858742014-10-26T07:44:48.881-04:002014-10-26T07:44:48.881-04:00i have given up many things for this voyage -
my...i have given up many things for this voyage - <br />my innocence to discover names of every truth<br />my roots to hold one forbidden fruit <br /><br />One has to put up with a lot of sacrifices on the way to better oneself. All the time one yearns for support from loved ones which might not be forthcoming! Great lines Grace!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-29159671165896787002014-10-26T04:19:08.092-04:002014-10-26T04:19:08.092-04:00Such beautiful and soulful piece, Grace - you capt...Such beautiful and soulful piece, Grace - you captivate me once again. Mon.Esprithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11348192101465775124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-42435180794603640432014-10-26T02:31:25.681-04:002014-10-26T02:31:25.681-04:00Wav, Grace fantastic poem!
The first seven lines h...Wav, Grace fantastic poem!<br />The first seven lines have a beautyful, sailing rytm.....<br /><br />Hugs<br />JetteMajkenAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17237623361378188310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-28950081468411510852014-10-26T00:56:39.009-04:002014-10-26T00:56:39.009-04:00Sometimes I think we are all on the path of lost s...Sometimes I think we are all on the path of lost souls, and those rock throwers always live in glass houses...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-24851234904837484612014-10-25T22:58:41.297-04:002014-10-25T22:58:41.297-04:00I particularly love the beauty and feel of this ve...I particularly love the beauty and feel of this verse:<br /><br />to run its silver-blue fingers<br />across its bows, like a violin player<br />threading silk strings with sweet air<br />of oblivion<br /><br />janetAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-63930376447748477762014-10-25T22:29:31.533-04:002014-10-25T22:29:31.533-04:00Great approach to both prompts, Grace--I feel like...Great approach to both prompts, Grace--I feel like this is a journey of poetry you are on. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-56342311123957306152014-10-25T21:37:03.578-04:002014-10-25T21:37:03.578-04:00Journeys can be both scary, & exciting. I thin...Journeys can be both scary, & exciting. I think yours is filled with both wonder & determination, .grace. Good luck! Lovely poem. xVivchookAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-84895814845609290882014-10-25T20:27:07.384-04:002014-10-25T20:27:07.384-04:00Oh forever--like La Llorona! Do you know of her? ...Oh forever--like La Llorona! Do you know of her? Freaky scary, and the ferry man cannot take her though he may try and trick her ... to be so lost with a price so high! At least she kept her ritual blade.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-15598436089140985442014-10-25T20:20:32.599-04:002014-10-25T20:20:32.599-04:00Beautifully stated Grace, some very profound image...Beautifully stated Grace, some very profound images within your words.Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07512953735819338268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-5660552613415864222014-10-25T20:12:04.390-04:002014-10-25T20:12:04.390-04:00This is such a great piece Grace--your sense of mo...This is such a great piece Grace--your sense of mood here is tangibleAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-32621986430486498192014-10-25T19:54:43.079-04:002014-10-25T19:54:43.079-04:00Ahh.. the search for truth can be a difficult trai...Ahh.. the search for truth can be a difficult trail.. one where truth often separates us from those we love.. and can we know it.. is always the dilemma as we keep seeking.. and finding forevermore...Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-78851431312773922692014-10-25T19:02:24.062-04:002014-10-25T19:02:24.062-04:00Grace, a haunting poem, that leaves one feeling th...Grace, a haunting poem, that leaves one feeling the blade of sacrifices made in the journey towards the light.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.com