tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post6862050079448514614..comments2024-03-28T21:42:05.069-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: PearsGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-88252304158847453752012-09-25T14:15:10.385-04:002012-09-25T14:15:10.385-04:00Paradox! If I were a pear, I would be sad.
Sevenl...Paradox! If I were a pear, I would be sad.<br />Sevenling! Gosh, a little bit of her in the sweet homecoming dish--I hope the wait is short--though indeed she should be enough. (Should "it" be "them"?)Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-73107017360480171612012-09-24T21:45:43.154-04:002012-09-24T21:45:43.154-04:00Apples are so not pears... Humans love contrasts.Apples are so not pears... Humans love contrasts.Hazelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07866700983578714993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-58136393472017719722012-09-24T15:21:25.710-04:002012-09-24T15:21:25.710-04:00Loving the paradox haiku. So ironic! FantasticLoving the paradox haiku. So ironic! FantasticAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14000820772202105961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-4383164057065881782012-09-24T15:05:30.380-04:002012-09-24T15:05:30.380-04:00These are both nice. I love the irony in the haik...These are both nice. I love the irony in the haiku.Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-2373739746678833762012-09-24T14:54:11.656-04:002012-09-24T14:54:11.656-04:00Great haiku, and lush sevenling! I think they bot...Great haiku, and lush sevenling! I think they both are artfully done.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-3077514360191722412012-09-24T13:59:45.667-04:002012-09-24T13:59:45.667-04:00I like both poems. Well done.I like both poems. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-27013587265640288292012-09-24T13:36:08.389-04:002012-09-24T13:36:08.389-04:00Powerful imagery created in so few, Grace, also th...Powerful imagery created in so few, Grace, also the fact that you nearly created a story line in this sevenling is amazing. Nicely written! Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-37681198134672080682012-09-24T09:34:48.700-04:002012-09-24T09:34:48.700-04:00Lovely haiku Grace :) Lovely haiku Grace :) Sri Vallihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04790303641221971643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-61436544626889475642012-09-24T09:20:26.933-04:002012-09-24T09:20:26.933-04:00Of course she did
That's how it works
Nice off...Of course she did<br />That's how it works<br />Nice offering, grace<br />~rickFar Beyond The Ridgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05854741339081490896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-76308881413013667042012-09-24T09:06:55.290-04:002012-09-24T09:06:55.290-04:00The last line of the sevenling quite wrenches the ...The last line of the sevenling quite wrenches the heart, and leaves me wondering if her lover will return, or has the love expressed in the first stanza faded?Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-30069285254278097412012-09-24T09:01:45.881-04:002012-09-24T09:01:45.881-04:00A fine take on the promptA fine take on the promptReading Pleasurehttp://readinpleasure.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-11160060554791670872012-09-24T08:20:29.325-04:002012-09-24T08:20:29.325-04:00One sharply cutting and the other heart-wrenching!...One sharply cutting and the other heart-wrenching! Beautiful!Jollyhttp://allahdeen.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-49191628636866072352012-09-24T01:23:45.241-04:002012-09-24T01:23:45.241-04:00It is a mystery, is he or is he not going to call?...It is a mystery, is he or is he not going to call? LovelyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16567470494995213573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-34074028880024123312012-09-24T00:10:30.602-04:002012-09-24T00:10:30.602-04:00Really beautiful, Grace. The first one says, to me...Really beautiful, Grace. The first one says, to me, how shameful we must feel when everything lovely is within our reach and instead of appreciating, we wait for more. Sevenling looks like an interesting form, yours is vivid and full-flavored. I love the leaves and the cinnamon and dust, I hope that he calls. Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-81652273096568254782012-09-23T23:41:34.281-04:002012-09-23T23:41:34.281-04:00What a contrast in poems! The first one made me la...What a contrast in poems! The first one made me laugh, the second one is poignant with longing and waiting... Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-27756190450178689922012-09-23T22:37:18.925-04:002012-09-23T22:37:18.925-04:00Love them both, so well done. If I were to pick a ...Love them both, so well done. If I were to pick a favourite it would be your haiku. I always enjoy the work that you share with us.Elleceehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049386448865741626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-30542005513747016652012-09-23T21:43:27.536-04:002012-09-23T21:43:27.536-04:00Both are lovely poems. k.Both are lovely poems. k.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-16030223114950460392012-09-23T21:36:46.029-04:002012-09-23T21:36:46.029-04:00Your paradox sounds like life with a three year ol...Your paradox sounds like life with a three year old to me!! Well done, GraceBarbarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13843100240748270890noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-21795427324117801252012-09-23T21:28:13.583-04:002012-09-23T21:28:13.583-04:00The haiku made me laugh out loud! Love it!The haiku made me laugh out loud! Love it!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-7429294625177420222012-09-23T20:35:49.654-04:002012-09-23T20:35:49.654-04:00This is life - when we have pears, we want apples ...This is life - when we have pears, we want apples instead! I enjoy reading your sevenling too.awalkinmyhearthttp://awalkinmyheart.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-24051706373051339632012-09-23T20:08:55.802-04:002012-09-23T20:08:55.802-04:00Well if the pears are golden I want them at my zoo...Well if the pears are golden I want them at my zoo, then I can trade them for cash, I'll even share with you hahaPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-78146173481045724402012-09-23T19:42:53.891-04:002012-09-23T19:42:53.891-04:00Love your sevenlings, especially the paradox.Love your sevenlings, especially the paradox.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-30204898638815717972012-09-23T19:04:42.432-04:002012-09-23T19:04:42.432-04:00nice...really cool sevenling...makes me think of s...nice...really cool sevenling...makes me think of soldiers or someone that is at risk...grew up with a pear tree in the back yard...have eaten a many...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-48041525360758359482012-09-23T19:01:41.530-04:002012-09-23T19:01:41.530-04:00Grace, you have treated us to the fruits of good p...Grace, you have treated us to the fruits of good poetry here! Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-39076291344844064282012-09-23T16:57:00.318-04:002012-09-23T16:57:00.318-04:00foodie haiku - cool idea.....guess she'll have...foodie haiku - cool idea.....guess she'll have to settle for pears or nothing for dessert....joannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18255189465024912528noreply@blogger.com