tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post6218508675441678504..comments2024-03-28T21:42:05.069-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: VermilionGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-88826564614493966472017-11-05T15:10:30.060-05:002017-11-05T15:10:30.060-05:00You will have to teach me how you did that picture...You will have to teach me how you did that picture. This was the first one I was going to join in, but didn't because I wanted to include the original text.<br /><br />You def got something poetic out of it. Especially that middle stanza. It makes for some interesting contrasts and comparisons.<br /><br />Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09037544390731217891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-43273516307830132112017-11-02T05:00:59.287-04:002017-11-02T05:00:59.287-04:00Lovely! especially love "tang of frost on til...Lovely! especially love "tang of frost on tilted dust devils"<br />(sorry trying again. Kayla is my non-poetry name, lol)MNL (Cactus Haiku)http://cactushaiku.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-1248675615878591912017-11-02T04:57:46.955-04:002017-11-02T04:57:46.955-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Cactus Catzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13658652325127502613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-16739059843232275952017-11-02T02:38:50.847-04:002017-11-02T02:38:50.847-04:00You make it look easy
แคมฟรอกYou make it look easy<br /><br /><br /><br /><a href="https://love-tipandtricks.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">แคมฟรอก</a><br />UplayOnlinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07056159688537638797noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-77731675515605168972017-10-30T20:00:21.714-04:002017-10-30T20:00:21.714-04:00Stunning - a beautiful job with the blackout. Stunning - a beautiful job with the blackout. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-5905440119096431722017-10-29T10:44:52.315-04:002017-10-29T10:44:52.315-04:00I know that I already commented, but I re-read you...I know that I already commented, but I re-read yours again today, and it's still one of my favourites.Miskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10280369979543928659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-17727965163297454332017-10-29T02:01:28.083-04:002017-10-29T02:01:28.083-04:00I like your site and content. thanks for sharing t...I like your site and content. thanks for sharing the information keep updating, looking forward for more posts. <br /><a href="https://waynerooneynewsblog.wordpress.com/" rel="nofollow">ผลบอล</a><br />sanpiseth40https://www.blogger.com/profile/02877855535800623770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-89534738473774452332017-10-28T10:29:06.205-04:002017-10-28T10:29:06.205-04:00This is perfection.This is perfection.Miskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10280369979543928659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-33193445272854965262017-10-28T05:30:47.726-04:002017-10-28T05:30:47.726-04:00That's a nicely done erasure poem. You make it...That's a nicely done erasure poem. You make it look easyNamrathahttp://www.namysaysso.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-6559651470639782992017-10-27T18:59:00.034-04:002017-10-27T18:59:00.034-04:00Hi Grace,
I like this a lot. Though I am not famil...Hi Grace,<br />I like this a lot. Though I am not familiar with the original work. I noticed as I read I kept attaching the 'you' to the lines before. A nice read :).Pat Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802650408750617363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-17080311892199682782017-10-27T12:41:34.947-04:002017-10-27T12:41:34.947-04:00Now that is a lovely little poem. I'm in awe.Now that is a lovely little poem. I'm in awe.Jane Doughertyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14700193165487305298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-38407907967908934962017-10-27T11:34:45.786-04:002017-10-27T11:34:45.786-04:00Superbly rendered...spitting and colorful!Superbly rendered...spitting and colorful!lynn__https://www.blogger.com/profile/03991892804149727665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-6953629180512219002017-10-27T06:43:04.517-04:002017-10-27T06:43:04.517-04:00I will admit I had to look up Blackout Poetry, in ...I will admit I had to look up Blackout Poetry, in is reminiscent of Burroughs cut and paste but a completely different form.<br /><br />The last line in both your cut out and the original left me..I don't know, gasping, accused.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-49610419952317014772017-10-26T18:25:14.211-04:002017-10-26T18:25:14.211-04:00This is so well done, Grace! I read it a second t...This is so well done, Grace! I read it a second time moving from left to right, following from the tip of the arrow, if you will, letting the words expand outward and it is a whole different wonderful.Jillyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14971432705586726610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-11191442476262731542017-10-26T17:51:52.170-04:002017-10-26T17:51:52.170-04:00I love "the tang of frost on tilted dust devi...I love "the tang of frost on tilted dust devils". Well done!indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-4972554339616758262017-10-26T16:36:50.822-04:002017-10-26T16:36:50.822-04:00That was a great way to do it indeed. At least the...That was a great way to do it indeed. At least the river hasn't ran dryPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-70675169922719623602017-10-26T16:19:47.115-04:002017-10-26T16:19:47.115-04:00I like this lost river but I don't know the bo...I like this lost river but I don't know the book, Alison Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08215158863724691355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-73506942665097567372017-10-26T15:51:21.980-04:002017-10-26T15:51:21.980-04:00I suppose a "lost river" is one that is ...I suppose a "lost river" is one that is now dry.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-49773811441678922212017-10-26T15:45:36.543-04:002017-10-26T15:45:36.543-04:00WOW! From one page....masterful! Especially the t...WOW! From one page....masterful! Especially the two lines for me<br />"you, <br />tang of frost on tilted dust devils-"lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-56562702355196760072017-10-26T15:14:08.079-04:002017-10-26T15:14:08.079-04:00I don't know the book but your poem has made m...I don't know the book but your poem has made me thirsty, Grace! I love the lines:<br />'lost river <br />with little in it <br />to love'.<br />Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-68548651930742367642017-10-26T15:13:16.037-04:002017-10-26T15:13:16.037-04:00This is fantastic - the repetition of you really g...This is fantastic - the repetition of you really gives strength to the metaphor brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-23493892443341399102017-10-26T15:09:23.018-04:002017-10-26T15:09:23.018-04:00This is FANTASTIC!!! You're dabbling in a bit ...This is FANTASTIC!!! You're dabbling in a bit of magic with the turn in that last line. I wasn't at all expecting that twist.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-17147439415376187522017-10-26T15:07:06.637-04:002017-10-26T15:07:06.637-04:00Excellent capture--it all holds together marvelous...Excellent capture--it all holds together marvelously. I like this a whole lot.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-4619300816864125012017-10-26T13:58:49.248-04:002017-10-26T13:58:49.248-04:00I love this...right now I'm in the middle of M...I love this...right now I'm in the middle of Mary Austin's book. That covers the route I travel between Reno and Palm Desert so it is full of meaning to me. You have culled a lovely poem from her already-poetic book. Thank you.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com