tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post4900939473021088336..comments2024-03-29T04:26:55.305-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: In the showerGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-24082279910609504772013-06-03T23:14:25.046-04:002013-06-03T23:14:25.046-04:00Nothing like being in your 'all and all' i...Nothing like being in your 'all and all' in front of a bathroom mirror to reveal all the things you would rather not look at. Enjoyed. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-30073887986405432682013-06-03T22:23:29.846-04:002013-06-03T22:23:29.846-04:00Enjoyed every words, I love that you will write ag...Enjoyed every words, I love that you will write again. Betsy Hubbardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10492340502962987362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-33850215662105434582013-06-03T20:19:40.446-04:002013-06-03T20:19:40.446-04:00groomed & scaled into a page,
...groomed & scaled into a page, <br /> i step out & <br /><br /> write again-- <br /><br />this is me, my self-editing, unwillingness to be completely naked on the page. enjoyed.LaTonya Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17837979981517423142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-61561283924978750202013-06-03T15:34:41.263-04:002013-06-03T15:34:41.263-04:00i as many can relate to this our self image and fe...i as many can relate to this our self image and feeling never the same as others see us , i love this full of feelingChris Lawrencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12082462583986448559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-90087062321385337862013-06-03T09:00:34.632-04:002013-06-03T09:00:34.632-04:00We really do judge ourselves too harshly in the be...We really do judge ourselves too harshly in the bethroom reflections dno't we? All our flaws open and exposed. But maybe part of the problem is that we see flaws where there really aren't any...Optimistic Existentialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507986337866049924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-14131763548118346172013-06-03T08:38:25.517-04:002013-06-03T08:38:25.517-04:00Strong narrative voice, and I say voice with with ...Strong narrative voice, and I say voice with with a capital V. Enjoyed so much about this piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-67517274705798697102013-06-03T01:40:34.794-04:002013-06-03T01:40:34.794-04:00Oh, I love it...we keep telling this to ourself of...Oh, I love it...we keep telling this to ourself often....the only reason I hate mirrors in the bathroom...you can't always love every bit of yours, and then staring at it is even worseSadia Khanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05831867051205108089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-25465235550347114752013-06-02T17:56:12.360-04:002013-06-02T17:56:12.360-04:00it's not just about cleasning, yes, it's a...it's not just about cleasning, yes, it's also about grooming<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2013/06/02/high-tech-toilet-power/" rel="nofollow">high tech toilet power</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-91567441177574202522013-06-02T13:47:55.347-04:002013-06-02T13:47:55.347-04:00This is a fantastic piece. I can so relate. I espe...This is a fantastic piece. I can so relate. I especially love: <br /> "in between the stone-scrubbing,<br /> i am confessing to the walls-" De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-72917191265553324102013-06-02T06:04:51.775-04:002013-06-02T06:04:51.775-04:00Now that was pretty cool Grace. I think I am going...Now that was pretty cool Grace. I think I am going to have to shower more often see if at least I can get rid of some unnecessary hair and make the toilet cover itself from my falling out with the soapy water.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-69212176402338648532013-06-02T05:52:04.076-04:002013-06-02T05:52:04.076-04:00..sometimes, i feel pity for the bathroom walls fo.....sometimes, i feel pity for the bathroom walls for i'm not sure whether he likes it or not to hear our hourly confessions... ah, i hate you (hihi).. if i had thought this notion about the bathroom walls i would have penned it in a poem... you are just cleverly good Grace.. aww.. smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-17148548456807300782013-06-02T05:43:48.105-04:002013-06-02T05:43:48.105-04:00We can be our harshest critics! Had to smile at, ...We can be our harshest critics! Had to smile at, "even the toilet <br /> seat covers itself, not joining in the private chat-"<br />Loved this Grace!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-3758229883234111882013-06-02T02:35:58.107-04:002013-06-02T02:35:58.107-04:00wow! this reads like a catharsis!!wow! this reads like a catharsis!!TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-68258847680229737362013-06-01T22:34:13.880-04:002013-06-01T22:34:13.880-04:00One can be cruel to oneself in the bath! Most neut...One can be cruel to oneself in the bath! Most neutral location not bothering any one. It's ok to let off steam there! Nicely Grace!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-48349602444882217472013-06-01T21:23:42.947-04:002013-06-01T21:23:42.947-04:00Been there done that... this mornngBeen there done that... this mornngAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-21261141586478275802013-06-01T20:36:11.304-04:002013-06-01T20:36:11.304-04:00You clear the fog from the glass with this piece, ...You clear the fog from the glass with this piece, Grace, and let all eyes see.grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-25974114604384704302013-06-01T20:13:11.315-04:002013-06-01T20:13:11.315-04:00Wow! That is quite a journey, qhite a transformat...Wow! That is quite a journey, qhite a transformation! Glad it works so well! :-)J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-41518937383707643442013-06-01T19:59:15.187-04:002013-06-01T19:59:15.187-04:00Grace,
I feel the sadness within the lines..let t...Grace,<br /><br />I feel the sadness within the lines..let the water cleanse be healed be whole..we all need to feel the water..drip into our souls.<br /><br />Have a good night!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-76240240582487162492013-06-01T19:50:49.528-04:002013-06-01T19:50:49.528-04:00This is very easy to relate too - very well told a...This is very easy to relate too - very well told as well - we all need to exfoliate a bit! Thanks. k.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-51281479596206394022013-06-01T18:22:46.394-04:002013-06-01T18:22:46.394-04:00I love that--seeking forgiveness and that the toil...I love that--seeking forgiveness and that the toilet is closed off--drying off is penance--all's done and ready to writeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-54739690384091482013-06-01T17:57:18.809-04:002013-06-01T17:57:18.809-04:00So you can part water now? that is just wow lolSo you can part water now? that is just wow lolPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-7134002150300232382013-06-01T17:44:58.594-04:002013-06-01T17:44:58.594-04:00I really found this creative...the bathroom throug...I really found this creative...the bathroom through to the page where you step out and write again.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09589253190731511955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-12610038752041100212013-06-01T17:17:15.928-04:002013-06-01T17:17:15.928-04:00I like so much dear Grace always ehn Im in the sho...I like so much dear Grace always ehn Im in the shower I think a lot of things:))Gloria Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03055543111865966546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-71534473182904596162013-06-01T17:04:30.349-04:002013-06-01T17:04:30.349-04:00This one sings, soars, and delivers the goods, ins...This one sings, soars, and delivers the goods, insuring that for all us, when /we step out & write again/.<br />The piece is both beauteous & self deprecating, nude with implication, unabashed, unashamed--making each of us reinvent our bathroom rituals. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-25702195576793504092013-06-01T16:42:55.358-04:002013-06-01T16:42:55.358-04:00I really like this poem, Grace. So much leaves in...I really like this poem, Grace. So much leaves in the water of the shower....and it is there that we see ourselves as we are, isn't it? And we are each beautiful in our own way and must always remember that!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com