tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post4661753122102087109..comments2024-03-28T21:42:05.069-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: Shadorma poemsGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger53125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-49155010038487780692012-09-01T11:27:43.954-04:002012-09-01T11:27:43.954-04:00Its great to see that people are sharing quite pro...Its great to see that people are sharing quite profitable information with each other and now we can move our selves to a new era. <br />reflective eassy writinghttp://www.professays.com/essay/reflective-essay-writing-help/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-55020603831744505142012-08-31T16:43:21.831-04:002012-08-31T16:43:21.831-04:00Artful, sweet, perfect... you are great!Artful, sweet, perfect... you are great!Dulcehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08109609856487463466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-57536072977565044362012-08-30T16:20:22.739-04:002012-08-30T16:20:22.739-04:00I like all of these, but especially the first one,...I like all of these, but especially the first one, with the opening line creating a tension and sense of warmth that sets the scene for the rest.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-47661142967877920162012-08-30T13:45:18.499-04:002012-08-30T13:45:18.499-04:00I love this.I love this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-77460183133932055492012-08-29T17:22:47.451-04:002012-08-29T17:22:47.451-04:00Cool format and one you do extremely well. I love ...Cool format and one you do extremely well. I love the title of bee in a Bottlebush and the pic is really cool. Hope you are well luv....great job as always.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-51645630127877325172012-08-29T15:24:34.562-04:002012-08-29T15:24:34.562-04:00I love Shadorma - these meet the requirements but ...I love Shadorma - these meet the requirements but feel a little like tanka as well. The emphasis on nature quite beautiful.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-52489220804823566142012-08-29T12:34:19.271-04:002012-08-29T12:34:19.271-04:00These are awesome. Love that last one!These are awesome. Love that last one!Reenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17813380986631007962noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-35002508924172790132012-08-29T11:26:22.639-04:002012-08-29T11:26:22.639-04:00In case I did not comment here yesterday...
"...In case I did not comment here yesterday...<br /><br />"... face to the sun, shoulders straight, <br /> an oak tree rises..."<br /><br />And that oak tree is NOT in a hurry, nor does it worry. It realizes that one Thousand years of time is nothing. Especially when there is no such thing as 'time'.<br /><br />(and yet, it marches on--grin! ASK me!)<br /><br />There is SO much here, Heaven, and I LOVE it all.<br /><br />PEACE, Grace. In 'our' time, and after!<br />Stevesteveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-55426069767695234862012-08-29T10:38:13.903-04:002012-08-29T10:38:13.903-04:00simply wonderful!!!simply wonderful!!!Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-27547569290653182442012-08-29T10:15:25.156-04:002012-08-29T10:15:25.156-04:00Beautiful. Love the shadorma, and these are very w...Beautiful. Love the shadorma, and these are very well done. I especially love: <br />"scatter the fragrance and tears <br />of a wounded heart" <br /><br />de <br />whimsygizmo.wordpress.com De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-5138502884496236672012-08-29T07:22:02.035-04:002012-08-29T07:22:02.035-04:00It's not a form I'm familiar with - nicely...It's not a form I'm familiar with - nicely done. Three times.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-80677868962289645182012-08-29T07:02:53.558-04:002012-08-29T07:02:53.558-04:00Grace,
These are marvelous compositions, so comple...Grace,<br />These are marvelous compositions, so complete in their brevity, so vibrant in the images you portray. My favorite is number two, the notion of growth, evolution. Fine pieces, all of them.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-80287259041291308552012-08-29T05:54:23.835-04:002012-08-29T05:54:23.835-04:00Lovely verses that thoroughly do justice to the be...Lovely verses that thoroughly do justice to the beauty and the magic of their subject.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-42242136238624002702012-08-29T02:33:43.538-04:002012-08-29T02:33:43.538-04:00Grace, really an excellent collection of poetry he...Grace, really an excellent collection of poetry here. Love the perfect image choices you picked to accompany each verse. Thanks for the form explanations as well, will have to give a try. Again, very nicely penned. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-8127477455702217742012-08-29T02:20:32.738-04:002012-08-29T02:20:32.738-04:00Ah, shadormas! I love 'em - and your pictures....Ah, shadormas! I love 'em - and your pictures...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-18323601847155834982012-08-29T01:39:12.356-04:002012-08-29T01:39:12.356-04:00Caresse, faith and generosity.
Lovely haiku trinit...Caresse, faith and generosity.<br />Lovely haiku trinity, Grace, the third one the most touching to me.<br />Bougainvilleas are my fav flowers and "paper dry" is an accurate description of their petals, yes.<br />:)Dulcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09804606583762933316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-25440449253052233532012-08-29T00:44:54.201-04:002012-08-29T00:44:54.201-04:00Grace, these are all so wonderful! I love that bou...Grace, these are all so wonderful! I love that bougainvilla poem, that's it exactly--dry paper, but not. The bottlebrush-drink from me, deep to my marrow--what a visual! Love itSaravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-1118945812226771022012-08-29T00:14:35.370-04:002012-08-29T00:14:35.370-04:00i like them all but the third is my fav i think......i like them all but the third is my fav i think...the drinking and seeds scattered from a wounded heart..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-47352124210319595412012-08-28T23:20:06.446-04:002012-08-28T23:20:06.446-04:00Beautifully done...photos and shardomas.Beautifully done...photos and shardomas.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-62090828216885000202012-08-28T22:27:35.499-04:002012-08-28T22:27:35.499-04:00These are beautiful. I love the use of color thro...These are beautiful. I love the use of color throughout the series.Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-24348271511611538202012-08-28T21:54:38.091-04:002012-08-28T21:54:38.091-04:00Love these. Especially the first and last, red boo...Love these. Especially the first and last, red bookends. colleenhttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-7167651425428523282012-08-28T21:54:09.035-04:002012-08-28T21:54:09.035-04:00I had read yours grace yesterday, but it wouldn...I had read yours grace yesterday, but it wouldn't let me comment. I guess today I have the abracadabra word! lol They are all such exquisite little gems of poems. AMAZING is a good description for your work too. I plan to revisit and see much more of what you do. the flower one where you use the image as a symbol of a relationship are my favorites, and the last one with the bee is my very favorite. It is so romantic and heart-felt.Lillian Susan Thomashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963521292129387141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-22657692539727752042012-08-28T20:20:07.549-04:002012-08-28T20:20:07.549-04:00This is so lovely ~ Thank you ~ This is so lovely ~ Thank you ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-68492081162838655882012-08-28T20:07:33.114-04:002012-08-28T20:07:33.114-04:00Lovely, Grace ! :) Lovely, Grace ! :) ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-54398966448143912852012-08-28T20:07:14.457-04:002012-08-28T20:07:14.457-04:00Gorgeous--especially love the first one.Gorgeous--especially love the first one.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.com