tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post4362430008095411077..comments2024-03-28T20:37:10.663-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: Under the sea of starsGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-54582277713229841092016-01-08T01:53:00.596-05:002016-01-08T01:53:00.596-05:00you know, I'm catching up after being at work ...you know, I'm catching up after being at work so long, and jumping over to Sherry's blog, which, of course, is Stardreaming. How perfect, as are these... ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-66640328735558225512016-01-05T20:02:23.926-05:002016-01-05T20:02:23.926-05:00A lovely cascade of celestial images ... the last ...A lovely cascade of celestial images ... the last line: especially evocative.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-8177425894765172502015-12-19T00:17:49.316-05:002015-12-19T00:17:49.316-05:00Finger print..
stars on hand
who see
further
than...Finger print.. <br />stars on hand<br />who see<br />further<br />than<br />words..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-43169362862504622672015-12-17T06:04:17.100-05:002015-12-17T06:04:17.100-05:00beautiful... no wordsbeautiful... no wordsRavihttp://www.viralwiral.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-9829404255193242932015-12-16T17:19:49.688-05:002015-12-16T17:19:49.688-05:00I meant dream-catcher.I meant dream-catcher.Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-4950068807364318312015-12-16T17:19:24.649-05:002015-12-16T17:19:24.649-05:00Oh, a sea of stars it is, Grace, and how lovely ar...Oh, a sea of stars it is, Grace, and how lovely are the images you evoke in this piece. I especially like the idea of a dream Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-62104457200738575312015-12-16T16:23:03.235-05:002015-12-16T16:23:03.235-05:00Truly beautiful. I especially like the first stanz...Truly beautiful. I especially like the first stanza....."a celestial field of stars in ribbon silver"....and the moon as a dream catcher. I shall stand outside and look to the stars, thinking of these words.lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-88641841286192691392015-12-16T14:37:56.158-05:002015-12-16T14:37:56.158-05:00the last 2 lines of your last piece...that capture...the last 2 lines of your last piece...that captures exactly how I feel when I lose myself in the night sky.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05126230685516232230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-74329849904271909422015-12-16T14:18:44.905-05:002015-12-16T14:18:44.905-05:00Very nice set of short form poems. I like the last...Very nice set of short form poems. I like the last one best. It is a stark reminder of how very small we are. Peace, LindaAnotherFearlessYear.nethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11189052349065089513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-65471378957392198252015-12-16T12:45:27.413-05:002015-12-16T12:45:27.413-05:00I simply love "stars in ribbon silver."I simply love "stars in ribbon silver." De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-44110855033041728862015-12-16T12:14:05.048-05:002015-12-16T12:14:05.048-05:00yes, all life, on starry nights, seem to instincti...yes, all life, on starry nights, seem to instinctively look up to watch them twinkle. maybe it's because we are made from stardust.<br /><br />this piece seems to capture that notion and also how tiny we are in the scope of the universe.<br /><br />graciasMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-13953981533974602052015-12-16T02:07:16.232-05:002015-12-16T02:07:16.232-05:00Moon as dream catcher - wonderful! The sense of un...Moon as dream catcher - wonderful! The sense of universe really comes out here.Prajaktahttps://anarmchairperfectionist.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-36828764335627171282015-12-16T01:43:57.583-05:002015-12-16T01:43:57.583-05:00a wonderful image of the night as the celestial fi...a wonderful image of the night as the celestial field and us so small and cushioned amidst vast grandeur....Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-55106229824316684912015-12-16T00:31:55.436-05:002015-12-16T00:31:55.436-05:00I always feel small when gazing up at the immense ...I always feel small when gazing up at the immense celestial dance up there but remember that I'm a part of it too.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-37431517768058605812015-12-15T22:23:28.164-05:002015-12-15T22:23:28.164-05:00what beauty! each has a different feelwhat beauty! each has a different feelAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-88963299895116329412015-12-15T17:35:57.107-05:002015-12-15T17:35:57.107-05:00This is the stuff of dreamsThis is the stuff of dreamsPleasant Streethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00060701245925637719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-20947232206556915432015-12-15T17:02:13.127-05:002015-12-15T17:02:13.127-05:00Indeed, we seem quite small compared to the majest...Indeed, we seem quite small compared to the majestic & vast universe. Beautifully rendered.<br /><br />Lots of love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-36455284989850908342015-12-15T16:48:41.243-05:002015-12-15T16:48:41.243-05:00I love that second stanza... we violently hurl tow...I love that second stanza... we violently hurl towards each other. Such poetic thoughts, and I like how you structure your words here. Nice job! Matthew Henningsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05561605742904573649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-90005922096361204292015-12-15T16:25:58.614-05:002015-12-15T16:25:58.614-05:00Indeed, looking up gives us a sense of the greater...Indeed, looking up gives us a sense of the greater perspective and our relative unimportance in the universe!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-65478739543136383022015-12-15T15:58:48.170-05:002015-12-15T15:58:48.170-05:00'On the palm of the universe' - conveys so...'On the palm of the universe' - conveys so perfectly our own smallness and insignificance - and the beauty and grandeur of the universe. I also like the image of a forest in silvery light <br />where every tree is a nest<br />and moon, a dream catcher<br />Marina Sofiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15251903359649828285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-32456716370453286022015-12-15T15:39:59.031-05:002015-12-15T15:39:59.031-05:00Oh how incredible those last two lines are. How e...Oh how incredible those last two lines are. How each poem is separate and yet how they hold together and build to those last two lines. Indeed, we all are held in the palm of the universe. Superb. Thank you.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-40963673338897325502015-12-15T15:28:33.265-05:002015-12-15T15:28:33.265-05:00Each of these is exquisitely beautiful!Each of these is exquisitely beautiful!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-70710075113689694792015-12-15T15:26:02.860-05:002015-12-15T15:26:02.860-05:00I really love how you tie it together after going ...I really love how you tie it together after going through a world of supernovae into the palm of the universe... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-61080001615899222842015-12-15T15:07:40.494-05:002015-12-15T15:07:40.494-05:00What a wonderful stage that first stanza sets for ...What a wonderful stage that first stanza sets for the universal dance of coming together. Just pure splendor.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-14234059948271310572015-12-15T15:05:56.685-05:002015-12-15T15:05:56.685-05:00Quite the dance indeed. The universe can make us f...Quite the dance indeed. The universe can make us feel smallPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com