tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post4237415813687295022..comments2024-03-29T08:01:55.910-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: catching my silhouette Gracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-56381073826262154992019-03-21T17:48:59.872-04:002019-03-21T17:48:59.872-04:00Very nicely done. I enjoyed the sensory exploratio...Very nicely done. I enjoyed the sensory exploration in your words. Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-8149964885676116532019-03-21T13:12:50.364-04:002019-03-21T13:12:50.364-04:00Everything city blended together in a series of hu...Everything city blended together in a series of hums. Love the format on this.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-8185691600234552552019-03-20T23:22:50.526-04:002019-03-20T23:22:50.526-04:00How wonderful to "see" the hum of nature...How wonderful to "see" the hum of nature as it weaves in and out of the humdrum of the city. This is beautiful, Grace.Mishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16298805958255695264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-57715123580956516342019-03-20T19:31:58.923-04:002019-03-20T19:31:58.923-04:00I like the layout of your poem it is an effective ...I like the layout of your poem it is an effective way to deliver the different sights and hums of life. A delightful read GraceTruedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-41709992752422503402019-03-20T19:31:47.611-04:002019-03-20T19:31:47.611-04:00Your poetic him is vibrant and rings of spring and...Your poetic him is vibrant and rings of spring and oceanic views. Lovely.The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-68292561797469897402019-03-20T17:47:59.955-04:002019-03-20T17:47:59.955-04:00Sure many sides to call uponSure many sides to call uponPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-32466544861068442152019-03-20T16:31:13.968-04:002019-03-20T16:31:13.968-04:00Grace- what a beautiful poem!Grace- what a beautiful poem!Linda Lee Lyberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669367010600000396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-49416119850622990622019-03-20T13:33:03.756-04:002019-03-20T13:33:03.756-04:00Beautiful!love the onomatopoeia!Beautiful!love the onomatopoeia!Mary Hoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17528465484642169618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-75665245660228190432019-03-20T10:03:25.017-04:002019-03-20T10:03:25.017-04:00turning the ugly into beauty!turning the ugly into beauty!Elizabethhttp://www.teandpaper.canoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-13191891804484605552019-03-20T09:36:47.145-04:002019-03-20T09:36:47.145-04:00Your title is a perfect fit, like the nature of yo...Your title is a perfect fit, like the nature of your identity trying to make itself seen.Ken Gierke / rivrvlogrhttps://rivrvlogr.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-51179331024592957962019-03-19T23:20:20.926-04:002019-03-19T23:20:20.926-04:00I love your description of the city activities as ...I love your description of the city activities as they hum on non-stop. The giant whale heaving is so good!Dwight L. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07992133580674047782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-7398284685344016852019-03-19T21:34:48.044-04:002019-03-19T21:34:48.044-04:00From inside to outside to wild side. Cool.From inside to outside to wild side. Cool.D. Averyhttps://shiftnshake.wordpress.com/2019/03/19/poetic-hum/comment-page-1/#comment-5466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-31284255098033990792019-03-19T20:09:22.066-04:002019-03-19T20:09:22.066-04:00I love the touchback to Brian and Claudia in this....I love the touchback to Brian and Claudia in this. The three of you had some similar technique.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-25213281743041026642019-03-19T18:28:49.614-04:002019-03-19T18:28:49.614-04:00Love the title, Grace, and how you have structured...Love the title, Grace, and how you have structured the duality - and still it works together. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13134589375016804713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-30239755429705165762019-03-19T17:33:25.052-04:002019-03-19T17:33:25.052-04:00" to feet of wild forest
to towering hair of..." to feet of wild forest <br />to towering hair of willow tree" you are brought into the forest as one of its own. i like that harmony with nature. the formatting of the poem has a nice effect of separation of creating world versus other worldJade Lihttp://tao-talk.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-33549937416634879462019-03-19T16:50:40.894-04:002019-03-19T16:50:40.894-04:00your poetry writing format reflects the artistic n...your poetry writing format reflects the artistic nature deep in you Grace. you blend the city sights and sounds with the beauty of nature around you, i love to see how they don't compete as you give them both a chance to speak to you. such a wonderful response to the prompt!Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11492243429734804802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-62659958905384517572019-03-19T16:19:23.108-04:002019-03-19T16:19:23.108-04:00I really love the parallel parts here, like the mu...I really love the parallel parts here, like the mundane outside and the adventurous inside... the dreams of being the hawk... like being two voices in one.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-79970915941293103032019-03-19T16:12:27.042-04:002019-03-19T16:12:27.042-04:00I feel like I am carried by those starlings as wel...I feel like I am carried by those starlings as well.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-73005000847847511252019-03-19T15:50:44.147-04:002019-03-19T15:50:44.147-04:00I like that the hum of nature can take you to many...I like that the hum of nature can take you to many places. Well said.indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-14696642149893112662019-03-19T15:40:31.394-04:002019-03-19T15:40:31.394-04:00The structure of this poem works so well. I love t...The structure of this poem works so well. I love the evocations of nature, and the comparision with the clockwork of the train. I like the fact that each half could stand alone. I also think the sounds of nature could almost be the sounds of a train - the whoosh of the doors closing, the hum of movement, as if the train drives your imagination, too. sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01756314170839177900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-53685516170772717402019-03-19T15:24:33.944-04:002019-03-19T15:24:33.944-04:00I love the title and shape of this poem, Grace. I ...I love the title and shape of this poem, Grace. I also admire the use of line breaks and spacing, the way you move seamlessly from the black hawk to the subway train and the giant whale, and the sound of the lines:<br /><br />heaving one deep exhale<br /><br />-who0000oosh-<br /><br />You’ve evoked the movement of the pigeons and the sounds of bees and birds beautifully.<br />Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.com