tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post4021576577887467040..comments2024-03-27T22:12:01.201-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: A promissory note, pinned on the mirror Gracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger42125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-63589459289725522592013-11-07T13:58:45.606-05:002013-11-07T13:58:45.606-05:00Thanks for the compliment ~ by all means use it ...Thanks for the compliment ~ by all means use it :-) Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-82077796635980548372013-11-07T10:48:43.456-05:002013-11-07T10:48:43.456-05:00I'm in love with this first couplet:
Darkness...I'm in love with this first couplet:<br /><br />Darkness lifts from your shoulders<br /> for once, imagine standing by sea <br /><br />Would you mind if I stole it as a prompt for my workshop?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-51346348782970736522013-10-25T09:24:51.420-04:002013-10-25T09:24:51.420-04:00For me it reads that she found hope when she turne...For me it reads that she found hope when she turned to the ocean. Then again, that could be because I always do. Beautifully written, Grace. As always, thank you! Enjoy your weekend!Elsie Amatahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14531633490964827363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-59189482511800103732013-10-25T01:09:37.803-04:002013-10-25T01:09:37.803-04:00Ya know..I think more people should bend there spi...Ya know..I think more people should bend there spines to the sky..or even to the ground and walk in reverse..as the fuller way of life..goes both ways...<br /><br />I do IT naturally all the time now and I"m not even sure why...other than IT makes me more peaceful and content to be standing still..too...Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-31092833599923372312013-10-24T16:49:03.819-04:002013-10-24T16:49:03.819-04:00The imagery is so intense and beautiful, felt as t...The imagery is so intense and beautiful, felt as though I were there by the sea. Lovely Grace!Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-22285668194264218612013-10-23T22:08:03.375-04:002013-10-23T22:08:03.375-04:00I enjoyed the sea atmosphere of your poem Grace. A...I enjoyed the sea atmosphere of your poem Grace. And the last couplet is just perfect!Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-41306067158774068992013-10-23T18:17:56.893-04:002013-10-23T18:17:56.893-04:00Grace you transported me to the ocean and removed ...Grace you transported me to the ocean and removed me from this dreary day in Melbourne of cold and grey. The human element intertwined with nature and the closing lines beautiful ~ Happy day to you. xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-15091108212721492522013-10-23T12:21:45.031-04:002013-10-23T12:21:45.031-04:00This was the perfect gift for me to read today. A...This was the perfect gift for me to read today. Absolutely love it, a favorite.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-13798425351210899882013-10-23T12:11:33.964-04:002013-10-23T12:11:33.964-04:00Everywhere you turn is luck
& love ro...Everywhere you turn is luck <br /> & love rooting & ripening, like it has never left -<br /><br />I love the positive end to this. Beautiful :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-31037048780752192492013-10-23T09:51:50.441-04:002013-10-23T09:51:50.441-04:00I am entirely in love with this poem. I am entirely in love with this poem. Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-56071126238413442652013-10-23T05:48:23.318-04:002013-10-23T05:48:23.318-04:00The sea is an experience like no other! It's m...The sea is an experience like no other! It's mysterious, refreshing and alive. Throw in the human element and it's complete! Nicely Grace!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-86840367012906338712013-10-23T00:40:06.032-04:002013-10-23T00:40:06.032-04:00Nature and humans entwined:)Nature and humans entwined:)Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-81801246228003437852013-10-22T22:23:57.813-04:002013-10-22T22:23:57.813-04:00Very nice! Wonderful imagery! :-)Very nice! Wonderful imagery! :-)Kate Solohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06703901149715024366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-27334701628534987242013-10-22T22:23:19.942-04:002013-10-22T22:23:19.942-04:00It feels like a dive into the water on a hot day.....It feels like a dive into the water on a hot day...and you come up to the surface with an ah...lovely feeling to this one!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-56868409776804866672013-10-22T22:07:39.169-04:002013-10-22T22:07:39.169-04:00love the line about the moon rising. Gorgeous ima...love the line about the moon rising. Gorgeous imagery.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-90840956250313400202013-10-22T21:52:04.951-04:002013-10-22T21:52:04.951-04:00Beautifully expressed with a wonderful twist. Beautifully expressed with a wonderful twist. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-34068943868257468822013-10-22T21:33:39.141-04:002013-10-22T21:33:39.141-04:00I felt as thought I was a beautiful bird in this p...I felt as thought I was a beautiful bird in this poem. Lovely.<br /><br />(http://penpaperpad.com))Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01515197183454266133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-89668904935828960972013-10-22T19:48:52.689-04:002013-10-22T19:48:52.689-04:00Hi Grace,
My favorite part as it feels so freeing...Hi Grace,<br /><br />My favorite part as it feels so freeing...<br /><br />Extending your hands, you float <br /> like lilies on pond, free of tangles & dead weights Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-10041791740214049972013-10-22T18:12:27.809-04:002013-10-22T18:12:27.809-04:00Body surfing and coming full circle - I don't ...Body surfing and coming full circle - I don't know why, but these are the thought that came to mind. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-65221612846733146372013-10-22T16:37:56.193-04:002013-10-22T16:37:56.193-04:00Oh--"Luck and love everywhere" wonderfu...Oh--"Luck and love everywhere" wonderful, wonderful--I imagine the floating at the mirror--a tai chi moment that releases the chi and therefore the mind to make the rest possible. I emailed you too.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-9412059837793389332013-10-22T16:11:32.288-04:002013-10-22T16:11:32.288-04:00Sometimes all it takes is for one to surrender to ...Sometimes all it takes is for one to surrender to the great currents that will have their way with us anyway, and, like magic, our powers are magnified...I hope I haven't overstepped the interpretation, Grace. This is a marvelous lyric work--one of my favorite of yours.<br />Steve KSteve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-7760173365530876702013-10-22T16:11:12.721-04:002013-10-22T16:11:12.721-04:00The sea is so healing. I liked this.
=)The sea is so healing. I liked this.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-46264253121338183132013-10-22T15:55:20.252-04:002013-10-22T15:55:20.252-04:00Beautiful touches throughout. The stanza shape wor...Beautiful touches throughout. The stanza shape works very well, gives a sense of flying through the poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-51961230054751096552013-10-22T15:51:36.329-04:002013-10-22T15:51:36.329-04:00I promise to remember this, especially in the mome...I promise to remember this, especially in the moments where I feel lost! This painting is wonderful. I can just feel the wind! It appears so strong that it could nearly knock her over.21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-31042518789112229842013-10-22T15:45:12.512-04:002013-10-22T15:45:12.512-04:00This is just fabulous... I love the key turning, t...This is just fabulous... I love the key turning, the seeds, those ending lines. A new favorite from you as well!mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.com