tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post340413467784986865..comments2024-03-29T08:01:55.910-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: The aftermath Gracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger45125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-11925575159412086952012-11-30T19:37:23.662-05:002012-11-30T19:37:23.662-05:00tomorrows topic is 'Missing you'
smiles.tomorrows topic is 'Missing you'<br /><br />smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-28620514253617502722012-11-26T05:41:03.923-05:002012-11-26T05:41:03.923-05:00Wow! You have taken this form and made it your own...Wow! You have taken this form and made it your own! You do this with such ease that we readers don't even notice that you are writing to form. <br /><br />Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-16290381965067337222012-11-22T10:33:10.942-05:002012-11-22T10:33:10.942-05:00happy thanksgiving grace...thankful for you...smil...happy thanksgiving grace...thankful for you...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-58528363908163667012012-11-22T08:50:34.533-05:002012-11-22T08:50:34.533-05:00don't break!don't break!DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-86141955961931041922012-11-21T17:10:22.938-05:002012-11-21T17:10:22.938-05:00Excellent imagery and emotion! Pulled me right in....Excellent imagery and emotion! Pulled me right in. Especially love that last line "clouds pulsed" very creative. :-)Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-4658908757015652472012-11-21T03:36:58.353-05:002012-11-21T03:36:58.353-05:00One of my favorite lines -- I will not break! One of my favorite lines -- I will not break! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-41445608428647967892012-11-21T02:00:24.978-05:002012-11-21T02:00:24.978-05:00...your words are ripping... and grieving yet deli......your words are ripping... and grieving yet delivering hope, i guess... and oh, nice to meet you Grace... i've known you as 'Heaven' since i never got the chance to know your real name until today.... i am starting to write again after the long hiatus... li'l by li'l i'll start again reinventing myself.<br /><br />Good day!kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-15539097661572798982012-11-21T00:40:34.619-05:002012-11-21T00:40:34.619-05:00i like the imagery here and the not being broken d...i like the imagery here and the not being broken despite the rough winds..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-78126110456681673222012-11-20T22:22:01.836-05:002012-11-20T22:22:01.836-05:00love the idea that while the leaves and fruits hav...love the idea that while the leaves and fruits have been ripped away the tree will not give in. <br /><br />there is a softness (and sadness) to the second piece even though the wind again has stolen much.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-89408086260290550342012-11-20T20:01:10.223-05:002012-11-20T20:01:10.223-05:00I don't know how I missed this Heaven, but som...I don't know how I missed this Heaven, but sometimes I don't get back to the prompt as I should, so glad you linked to OLN--you worked the form nicely here--I really really like the second one, where the clouds and curtains and wind all mingle.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-57135613945201600202012-11-20T18:22:56.354-05:002012-11-20T18:22:56.354-05:00Great imagery, esp like this passage -
Splitting...Great imagery, esp like this passage - <br /><br />Splitting grey belly, scattering seeds <br />In soil, dry of grief and repastLuke Praterhttp://www.lukeprater.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-25504149404175036072012-11-20T17:38:36.127-05:002012-11-20T17:38:36.127-05:00Grace, great lines here. Love it :)Grace, great lines here. Love it :)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-69653997595344762612012-11-20T17:31:24.002-05:002012-11-20T17:31:24.002-05:00I love this section:
"Splitting grey belly, ...I love this section:<br />"Splitting grey belly, scattering seeds <br />In soil, dry of grief and repast, blooms break <br />The sky grieves the empty blooms and seeds"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-90429487083017322292012-11-20T15:20:10.291-05:002012-11-20T15:20:10.291-05:00This is so lovely, Grace. The beauty of broken th...This is so lovely, Grace. The beauty of broken things. Susan Danielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13241514922366571247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-26547405703426072582012-11-20T13:03:13.904-05:002012-11-20T13:03:13.904-05:00Well done Grace you so captured this form with the...Well done Grace you so captured this form with the guided view well illustrated!<br />Your imagery always is spot on~ :D Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-21820098176371590842012-11-20T10:52:28.934-05:002012-11-20T10:52:28.934-05:00Thank you for the lovely photograph ~Thank you for the lovely photograph ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-29335826356856126942012-11-20T10:05:38.521-05:002012-11-20T10:05:38.521-05:00Really nice work Grace. I will have to add this ...Really nice work Grace. I will have to add this to my list of posts from Saturday. Thanks. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-419340638168848022012-11-20T09:29:35.800-05:002012-11-20T09:29:35.800-05:00This is wonderful, Grace. = )This is wonderful, Grace. = )Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-80824251830950123702012-11-20T01:46:04.625-05:002012-11-20T01:46:04.625-05:00These are beautiful Grace...I couldn't even do...These are beautiful Grace...I couldn't even do the challenge...I just stumbled too much in attempting it.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-28403971422697829212012-11-20T00:44:23.957-05:002012-11-20T00:44:23.957-05:00Great!.... enjoyed reading this... you weaved it b...Great!.... enjoyed reading this... you weaved it beautifully....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-71789579436839014852012-11-19T21:40:05.680-05:002012-11-19T21:40:05.680-05:00Great poems meeting the challenge! The repetition ...Great poems meeting the challenge! The repetition works so well!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-90673985978180143882012-11-19T21:03:19.910-05:002012-11-19T21:03:19.910-05:00Grace this poem is really strong and amazing!!Grace this poem is really strong and amazing!!Gloria Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03055543111865966546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-10800311137873351942012-11-19T20:31:37.372-05:002012-11-19T20:31:37.372-05:00Love this poem...beautiful in its barrenness.Love this poem...beautiful in its barrenness.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-31052966680645029472012-11-19T20:27:55.908-05:002012-11-19T20:27:55.908-05:00stripped bare, yet unconquered. Very strong imager...stripped bare, yet unconquered. Very strong imagery in this one. Katerihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05645403612156172760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-18033722638049188912012-11-19T19:16:41.926-05:002012-11-19T19:16:41.926-05:00i love the first two lines! Enjoyed all of it, but...i love the first two lines! Enjoyed all of it, but those two lines were a very powerful entry point.Unspokenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16065870952905767595noreply@blogger.com