tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post2777330721672538990..comments2024-03-29T04:26:55.305-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: Sun, moonGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger45125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-13493062630262914562014-10-29T21:21:29.294-04:002014-10-29T21:21:29.294-04:00the pair work perfectly together...there is someth...the pair work perfectly together...there is something quite magical about both entities. lovely write.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-30742876990615913022014-10-21T06:08:20.089-04:002014-10-21T06:08:20.089-04:00Beautiful !Beautiful !ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-59481071620781986062014-10-19T15:35:46.324-04:002014-10-19T15:35:46.324-04:00Hi Grace
I always gravitate towards the moon. It ...Hi Grace<br /><br />I always gravitate towards the moon. It inspires so many sleepless nights of poetry. Lovely as always - Grace I have been away for sometime. It is lovely to be back.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-51516390988702390502014-10-18T20:21:46.274-04:002014-10-18T20:21:46.274-04:00"some nights myth turns you to a monk"--..."some nights myth turns you to a monk"--what an imaginative way of thinking of the moon...beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-26403046612616727562014-10-18T10:08:19.659-04:002014-10-18T10:08:19.659-04:00So creative approach, Grace! I really feel happy w...So creative approach, Grace! I really feel happy while reading and after too. My fav. in "Sun" the line 'sky storm splitting the land'. In "Moon" it's ' Some nights <br />myth turns you to a monk' ~...thank youhumbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-8271819286702626642014-10-17T20:49:35.667-04:002014-10-17T20:49:35.667-04:00Loved both of these...so beautifully depicted...th...Loved both of these...so beautifully depicted...the yin and yang of the skies.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-65841321099058518482014-10-17T20:09:44.501-04:002014-10-17T20:09:44.501-04:00Loved both sun and moon - but your depiction of th...Loved both sun and moon - but your depiction of the sun as simply another star is important. Reminds us that we are in a vast, unimaginable universe. Also, the image looked like felt or candy floss, which was in itself quite cool! Sorry I have not been around. Art is taking over my life (and office), plus the usual "art of the mind," the labyrinth... Peace, AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-73491045675169543432014-10-17T17:41:20.062-04:002014-10-17T17:41:20.062-04:00"milk pearled, dreamt by poets
marveling you..."milk pearled, dreamt by poets<br />marveling you."<br /><br />Really strong metaphors in this. Love the description of the sun. My favorite lines are about the moon.<br /><br />The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-80260636333219352982014-10-17T14:54:38.765-04:002014-10-17T14:54:38.765-04:00Grace - these are lovely. The sun as sage is wonde...Grace - these are lovely. The sun as sage is wonderful and I am a sucker for a great moon poem! Beautiful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-46045309291564249172014-10-17T13:02:24.980-04:002014-10-17T13:02:24.980-04:00These are fantastic. They flow really well and you...These are fantastic. They flow really well and you can't tell that they don't feel like they were forced to stay within the rules of this type of poem. Well done.Justin Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04540827237593614818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-88885450922312241852014-10-17T12:53:35.107-04:002014-10-17T12:53:35.107-04:00Excellent job with the prompt, Grace. I like this ...Excellent job with the prompt, Grace. I like this very much, especially "so we may swaddle your heat through each sky storm."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-33602272459714505352014-10-17T10:01:13.381-04:002014-10-17T10:01:13.381-04:00Both of these are lovely. They "feel" s...Both of these are lovely. They "feel" so right.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-10769881975228133112014-10-17T09:44:32.942-04:002014-10-17T09:44:32.942-04:00Lovely duo here. And how the moon reflects the li...Lovely duo here. And how the moon reflects the life giving light of the sun.<br />TigerbriteAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-90286541485896756642014-10-17T08:53:58.126-04:002014-10-17T08:53:58.126-04:00i'll look at the sun differently now... loved ...i'll look at the sun differently now... loved the sage commentWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-3040526366205836882014-10-17T07:14:14.012-04:002014-10-17T07:14:14.012-04:00I especially like the first, Grace, as it felt lik...I especially like the first, Grace, as it felt like such a great conceit to me. But both are lovely and great for the prompt. K. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-65470902148440035112014-10-17T07:12:22.129-04:002014-10-17T07:12:22.129-04:00You packed a lot into a few lines! What a good tho...You packed a lot into a few lines! What a good thought, to use those initial letters at other places in the poems too.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-48816602235606946582014-10-17T03:36:32.636-04:002014-10-17T03:36:32.636-04:00so well tuned to the prompt ~so well tuned to the prompt ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-38249782515952819732014-10-17T03:32:36.030-04:002014-10-17T03:32:36.030-04:00Our faithful star! and our magic moon! I'm gl...Our faithful star! and our magic moon! I'm glad you didn't call moon inconstant! I love that the sun stirs and swaddles, that heat and fire are calm and wise. A perfect pairing, Grace.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-27449266648631796392014-10-17T02:20:13.571-04:002014-10-17T02:20:13.571-04:00both are wonderful...graceful as always..smiles..both are wonderful...graceful as always..smiles..Arathi Hariharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142420236345157881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-17102511371732066852014-10-16T23:05:52.892-04:002014-10-16T23:05:52.892-04:00You've done a lovely job with the form you sha...You've done a lovely job with the form you shared with us. I like the contrast of sun and moon. Thanks for hosting tonight.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-86267493736932387392014-10-16T22:42:03.488-04:002014-10-16T22:42:03.488-04:00I thought you must have a bottle of moonlight to c...I thought you must have a bottle of moonlight to consider, so perfectly did you capture it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-49313312558206042662014-10-16T22:19:02.055-04:002014-10-16T22:19:02.055-04:00These are both lovely pieces, Grace. :-) You captu...These are both lovely pieces, Grace. :-) You captured the fire of the sun, and the tenderness of the moon. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-68457718488266513782014-10-16T21:40:33.695-04:002014-10-16T21:40:33.695-04:00Both of these are fantastic Grace! You have captur...Both of these are fantastic Grace! You have captured some lovely images. Cheers!DandKbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11793990918526369852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-40618408926597649552014-10-16T21:06:42.898-04:002014-10-16T21:06:42.898-04:00This is lovely, Grace...I like the way you have gi...This is lovely, Grace...I like the way you have given equal 'star billing' to both the sun AND the moon.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-33574652355448711552014-10-16T20:47:47.059-04:002014-10-16T20:47:47.059-04:00Enjoyed both, but ah, there is something special a...Enjoyed both, but ah, there is something special about that moon, loved the line <br />"moonshine above the trees"<br />"Moonshine" can literally moonlight, or the other definition of an "intoxicating beverage," the effect it seems to have on all of us poets & writers!Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.com