tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post2659594727070005841..comments2024-03-28T17:30:09.028-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: Red RiverGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-24031540585781629002016-01-08T02:02:38.683-05:002016-01-08T02:02:38.683-05:00another deep carve, into loss, and the passing of ...another deep carve, into loss, and the passing of time. ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-58226595158092434392015-12-12T15:47:56.059-05:002015-12-12T15:47:56.059-05:00Oh yes, lost with no answers...sigh...no snow coul...Oh yes, lost with no answers...sigh...no snow could cover this type of wound. Such an imaginative piece, Grace...very believable. :)Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-90461746610854304172015-12-08T11:35:10.194-05:002015-12-08T11:35:10.194-05:00"We hear the echoes of the dead souls". ..."We hear the echoes of the dead souls". A wonderful poem, Grace. Too many missing women, everywhere.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-74023502258438655772015-12-08T11:04:06.892-05:002015-12-08T11:04:06.892-05:00What else could be buried there.The propensity of ...What else could be buried there.The propensity of discovering a treasure trove would be less likely considering the big area to cover. A map might be useful <br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-58457306978046439882015-12-08T07:47:37.818-05:002015-12-08T07:47:37.818-05:00Mysterious - I want to know more!Mysterious - I want to know more!vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-61021591493381260412015-12-08T06:53:48.886-05:002015-12-08T06:53:48.886-05:00Life will again be born and darkness be gone :)Life will again be born and darkness be gone :)Dr. Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07812039483229217149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-39750119908900673812015-12-08T04:26:55.376-05:002015-12-08T04:26:55.376-05:00I'm just now reading the story in 'Women W...I'm just now reading the story in 'Women Who Run with Wolves' called Cleaning the River/The River Under the River. Can't help wonder if your haibun was inspired by it? If so, returning the comb the river once more seems inevitable.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-36911939611552935832015-12-08T03:25:31.585-05:002015-12-08T03:25:31.585-05:00Ooooh, I'd never have expected that. This peac...Ooooh, I'd never have expected that. This peaceful, calming image - and then you go and show the possible turmoil, the darkness, the mystery which lies underneath. Very subtle, mere hints, I love the ambiguity in this one. And the spirit of 'trying again' another year.Marina Sofiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15251903359649828285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-40069686693559066652015-12-08T00:29:42.846-05:002015-12-08T00:29:42.846-05:00The secrets the body of water can hold, and the wa...The secrets the body of water can hold, and the way some people need that last moment of parting, a story too common, yet everyone unique... I like the thought of parting and how need that closing, in the haiku... The wounds still raw and red like the chairs and rivers.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-77277642352129769072015-12-08T00:26:56.710-05:002015-12-08T00:26:56.710-05:00From water we come
to water we go..
without
water ...From water we come<br />to water we go..<br />without<br />water we<br />die.. to<br />kill in <br />water sad...<br /><br />Such irony<br />iN<br />giving life..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-38763946970521486652015-12-07T23:33:57.180-05:002015-12-07T23:33:57.180-05:00This is so chilling - the realization that a beaut...This is so chilling - the realization that a beautiful body of water can contain such tragedy. It's always such a surprise to see the many directions that a prompt like this can lead. I especially liked the Haiku.Victoria Ceretto-Slottohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11791036961620087347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-25156499738247872132015-12-07T23:33:44.265-05:002015-12-07T23:33:44.265-05:00This is so chilling - the realization that a beaut...This is so chilling - the realization that a beautiful body of water can contain such tragedy. It's always such a surprise to see the many directions that a prompt like this can lead. I especially liked the Haiku.Victoria Ceretto-Slottohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11791036961620087347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-80680238756604528292015-12-07T22:07:17.154-05:002015-12-07T22:07:17.154-05:00Really enjoyed this, Grace. I don't think you...Really enjoyed this, Grace. I don't think you usually write dark and mysterious like this...especially with such sinister undertones. There's always someone who knows something...Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-17336991380736047492015-12-07T21:04:41.537-05:002015-12-07T21:04:41.537-05:00Very mysterious and dark. The red chairs looking ...Very mysterious and dark. The red chairs looking out at the river, seeing all and saying nothing. I like the twisty bit on this.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-87848568123789894802015-12-07T21:04:35.029-05:002015-12-07T21:04:35.029-05:00I really like this, Grace! You used the backdrop o...I really like this, Grace! You used the backdrop of the summer islands in a mysterious way that has us want for more of this story.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-23613972406712280062015-12-07T19:55:57.990-05:002015-12-07T19:55:57.990-05:00Harder to hide dead secrets in a river than in a b...Harder to hide dead secrets in a river than in a bay, but hey, that just deepens the mystery. Love that you went with the red chairs, as I did, & that the first (inacceptable) haibun I posted was an older one about the Red River in TX; synchronicity indeed. Your haiku is excellent, perfect summation. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-11636239133737505762015-12-07T19:51:14.562-05:002015-12-07T19:51:14.562-05:00The echoes of lost souls...lovely!The echoes of lost souls...lovely!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-23168694595997158472015-12-07T19:26:44.930-05:002015-12-07T19:26:44.930-05:00Oh, I love the mystery here. We definitely do not...Oh, I love the mystery here. We definitely do not know all of the secrets held by winter's darkness. So many dead souls never to be heard from again.....Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-57416946825280009412015-12-07T19:06:39.160-05:002015-12-07T19:06:39.160-05:00Some secrets sure try and stay buried, or bodies.Some secrets sure try and stay buried, or bodies.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-83050738794638265972015-12-07T18:49:12.640-05:002015-12-07T18:49:12.640-05:00Powerful!
Powerful!<br />Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.com