tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post2137124153847061858..comments2024-03-27T22:12:01.201-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: view of the lighthouse, sheGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-70834873714994784422021-10-23T10:08:07.261-04:002021-10-23T10:08:07.261-04:00There's a lovely mood delicately but richly co...There's a lovely mood delicately but richly conveyed in both these poems. You make the form sing in both, but I especially like the flow and variety of expressions in the first.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-27467597938558730112021-10-22T17:09:16.153-04:002021-10-22T17:09:16.153-04:00I especially like the way the lines flow together ...I especially like the way the lines flow together in the first one. You don't even notice the rhymes.Kerfehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14679460865016032660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-407638533607765572021-10-22T16:21:07.639-04:002021-10-22T16:21:07.639-04:00How beautiful, both of these, each stanza flowing ...How beautiful, both of these, each stanza flowing into the next.Mary Hoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17528465484642169618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-13069719815202998052021-10-22T12:47:12.906-04:002021-10-22T12:47:12.906-04:00Grace, I especially like the way you ran the title...Grace, I especially like the way you ran the title into the poem. Beautiful work and thank you greatly for the prompt.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-55338530899052540042021-10-22T11:18:31.137-04:002021-10-22T11:18:31.137-04:00Both are beautiful, Grace but I am slightly partia...Both are beautiful, Grace but I am slightly partial to the moon one. paeansunpluggedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15076601569836498915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-8773869882755194222021-10-22T03:14:16.695-04:002021-10-22T03:14:16.695-04:00This is what I mean! The first form does just flow...This is what I mean! The first form does just flow, the form feels very organic and natural. It takes me a few goes to get to that point with a form. Once there, you can just flow with it - I love that. It's very tender. sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01756314170839177900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-77892482445554433132021-10-22T00:25:13.603-04:002021-10-22T00:25:13.603-04:00I really enjoyed both, especially the lighthouse. ...I really enjoyed both, especially the lighthouse. There is something quite magical about them - even their shape is unusual. Now I cannot get her image out of my head.Poetry for Healinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06998366697778789164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-52363173870028494502021-10-21T22:05:58.004-04:002021-10-21T22:05:58.004-04:00Luv moon poem so the second is my favourite
Absolu...Luv moon poem so the second is my favourite<br />Absolutly luv this phrase<br />"you brew the moondust"<br /><br />Much💜loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-23714719052109787402021-10-21T21:32:22.986-04:002021-10-21T21:32:22.986-04:00Grace,
These are so beautifully formed, the depth ...Grace,<br />These are so beautifully formed, the depth of feeling powerfully conveyed in each line. A ravishing read.<br />pax,<br />doraDorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10924099003278944038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-66449096467205421862021-10-21T20:34:47.745-04:002021-10-21T20:34:47.745-04:00I enjoyed how you connected the stanzas in the fir...I enjoyed how you connected the stanzas in the first poem. Maria L. Berghttps://experiencewriting.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-62678683214704268072021-10-21T19:47:20.474-04:002021-10-21T19:47:20.474-04:00your words flow eloquently, I like both equally .....your words flow eloquently, I like both equally ... the set very different moods. Thanks for introducing me to this new format, it was indeed funcalmkatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07173077889859216652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-24499677153306879072021-10-21T19:11:42.154-04:002021-10-21T19:11:42.154-04:00you make it look so easy! This was harder than I t...you make it look so easy! This was harder than I thought, but so much fun. Love the flow and wordplay of both poems. 💓Triciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07768126784133611768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-66833162843626268302021-10-21T17:44:08.459-04:002021-10-21T17:44:08.459-04:00They are both excellent Grace! This proved to be a...They are both excellent Grace! This proved to be a fun prompt, thank you — and just enough to think through that it was interesting.robkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-48974593843754938662021-10-21T16:59:14.778-04:002021-10-21T16:59:14.778-04:00Two great examples of the requested form! Well do...Two great examples of the requested form! Well done.indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-34477019732483309422021-10-21T16:34:57.558-04:002021-10-21T16:34:57.558-04:00This was lovely, it felt silky smooth.This was lovely, it felt silky smooth.The Bytesized Studiohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11622467693533644570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-49275999384628761682021-10-21T16:06:05.688-04:002021-10-21T16:06:05.688-04:00I agree; "flowing narrative " is the per...I agree; "flowing narrative " is the perfect way to describe it. Revived Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14301802530562243078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-7572524738641700042021-10-21T16:04:10.411-04:002021-10-21T16:04:10.411-04:00My comment just got eaten! Trying again--I particu...My comment just got eaten! Trying again--I particularly like the first one, which does seem constrained by the form at all. It really flows. I love the title, too, and how you worked it in.Merril D. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07208799388236948565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-26934054474793207002021-10-21T15:33:33.201-04:002021-10-21T15:33:33.201-04:00A beautiful flow, with profound sorrow running thr...A beautiful flow, with profound sorrow running through the lighthouse poem Really well done.forestbatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17599113483535736057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-40126477242020449932021-10-21T15:33:18.672-04:002021-10-21T15:33:18.672-04:00A beautiful flow, with profound sorrow running thr...A beautiful flow, with profound sorrow running through the lighthouse poem Really well done.forestbatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17599113483535736057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-27972873009629347212021-10-21T15:26:52.906-04:002021-10-21T15:26:52.906-04:00A lovely flowing narrative I thoroughly enjoyed be...A lovely flowing narrative I thoroughly enjoyed being carried along with, Grace. Though I especially enjoyed your Moonlighting poem :-)Sunra Rainzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16803999051382699986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-74992378056298197262021-10-21T15:07:06.908-04:002021-10-21T15:07:06.908-04:00I love lighthouses, and the first poem really capt...I love lighthouses, and the first poem really captures some of their most endearing and unusual attributes. I love the moon poem too - a subject which provides endless inspiration!Ingridhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01349081971668298252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-11816960499749429292021-10-21T15:00:20.471-04:002021-10-21T15:00:20.471-04:00I love both your examples... the first one we seem...I love both your examples... the first one we seems to have been on similar tracks of recovery from sorrow. The last stanza made me think of Wuthering Heights... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com