tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post2135176708143805016..comments2024-03-28T17:30:09.028-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: push that button!Gracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-15598120788283525902017-12-13T01:40:46.779-05:002017-12-13T01:40:46.779-05:00Very nice your blog and article. I like this blog ...Very nice your blog and article. I like this blog thank for sharing.<br /><br /><a href="https://senwellbeing.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">เย็ดสาว</a>vaiyborahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05095754542895387700noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-41538950463595787992017-12-12T05:29:52.488-05:002017-12-12T05:29:52.488-05:00i like the way the words play with time -- fast m...i like the way the words play with time -- fast movements, slowing, fast,slow-- reminds me of the 2 beat sound of the old trains<br />flurry .. comes (soft)...dash .. time to reflect ... scribbling .. flow ... crunch timeMNL (Cactus Haiku)http://cactushaiku.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-50173380656124037832017-12-08T08:04:19.481-05:002017-12-08T08:04:19.481-05:00I especially like "dawn comes with blanket, s...I especially like "dawn comes with blanket, soft, <br /> cinnamon-scented."<br />I like the rhythm of this, too--hurried, like "crunch time."Merril D. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07208799388236948565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-70483885428369472092017-12-06T21:46:38.728-05:002017-12-06T21:46:38.728-05:00You pictured the morning rash very well. :-)
~Ime...You pictured the morning rash very well. :-)<br /><br />~ImeldaImeldahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18171383510208182346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-72868959698004957452017-12-06T00:44:15.184-05:002017-12-06T00:44:15.184-05:00I'm really liking the feel of this. I can trul...I'm really liking the feel of this. I can truly relate to the scribblibg. Only, i do it on my phone. A nice one.Pat Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802650408750617363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-91934578021936226832017-12-05T16:03:13.577-05:002017-12-05T16:03:13.577-05:00What a fun take on the prompt. I love this line: &...What a fun take on the prompt. I love this line: "scribbling waylaid verses." AnotherFearlessYear.nethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11189052349065089513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-34365590510064682522017-12-05T06:58:05.838-05:002017-12-05T06:58:05.838-05:00Such precious moments captured. Lovely.Such precious moments captured. Lovely.Miskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10280369979543928659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-28121227312650209972017-12-05T01:41:08.359-05:002017-12-05T01:41:08.359-05:00You capture that morning rush so well. You capture that morning rush so well. sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01756314170839177900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-91286607261990019992017-12-05T01:15:53.945-05:002017-12-05T01:15:53.945-05:00Wonderful! Cinnamon scented dawn lures me to have ...Wonderful! Cinnamon scented dawn lures me to have a cup of cinnamon tea :)Feelings and Freedomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15771939970723517594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-13958765803683074222017-12-04T23:29:40.586-05:002017-12-04T23:29:40.586-05:00scribbling waylaid verses
pickled new
roping flow ...scribbling waylaid verses<br />pickled new<br />roping flow & rhythm- <br />it's crunch time!<br /><br />Things sure move at a fast pace. Not easy for poetry to readily catch up! You caught the right mood, Grace!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-26680388092154011172017-12-04T22:38:11.493-05:002017-12-04T22:38:11.493-05:00poetry is a fine occasion for crunch time!poetry is a fine occasion for crunch time!Frank J. Tassonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11034177573832896440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-71692082947334629552017-12-04T17:55:01.473-05:002017-12-04T17:55:01.473-05:00I feel you. Today has been a tumble kinda day from...I feel you. Today has been a tumble kinda day from the get-go and its still not over. Finally about to head home from work. Scribbled nothing in the notebook.<br /><br />Did have an amazing apple fritter for breakfast on the way out the door.Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09037544390731217891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-57731757421523710762017-12-04T17:36:55.217-05:002017-12-04T17:36:55.217-05:00What I scribble in my notebook often gets waylaid ...What I scribble in my notebook often gets waylaid as well--or forgotten.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-43543521650847882232017-12-04T17:36:10.379-05:002017-12-04T17:36:10.379-05:00Your words are sublime ... visual and beyond. Your words are sublime ... visual and beyond. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-22772373334227973062017-12-04T17:19:04.247-05:002017-12-04T17:19:04.247-05:00A beautiful write Grace, I especially love 'da...A beautiful write Grace, I especially love 'dawn comes with blanket, soft,cinnamon-scented' xxxWhippet Wisdom Bloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06620315234749039013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-5118719757249054782017-12-04T17:10:14.109-05:002017-12-04T17:10:14.109-05:00Writing in fits, starts & breaks is admirable,...Writing in fits, starts & breaks is admirable, but I would loose my train of thought. Being retired 7 years now I'm surprised that appointments & errands create deadlines of their own. Tour ability to keep cohesion despite breaking up the writing time is way cool.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-30929484362615841672017-12-04T16:53:14.409-05:002017-12-04T16:53:14.409-05:00I love that you manage to capture these moments in...I love that you manage to capture these moments in amongst the rush. Alison Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08215158863724691355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-21365866734112742482017-12-04T15:54:27.928-05:002017-12-04T15:54:27.928-05:00I admire you for snatching moments like that and c...I admire you for snatching moments like that and capturing them.Jane Doughertyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14700193165487305298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-7623378137094045682017-12-04T15:23:03.508-05:002017-12-04T15:23:03.508-05:00Love the dash of waylaid verses Grace - and the st...Love the dash of waylaid verses Grace - and the stop/start structure of the poemAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-58401234476943864832017-12-04T15:16:46.900-05:002017-12-04T15:16:46.900-05:00I love the way you describe the snow.
My fav line ...I love the way you describe the snow.<br />My fav line : "dawn comes with blanket, soft, cinnamon-scented" <br />Vivian Zemshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09588008375525403964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-36458655787622916562017-12-04T15:12:23.245-05:002017-12-04T15:12:23.245-05:00Snap! I wrote my poem over the weekend and hadn...Snap! I wrote my poem over the weekend and hadn't seen yours until I'd posted mine - and we have used the same words: crunch time!<br />I love the movement of the snow: flurries, tumbled, caking, and it's cinnamon-scented!<br />Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-15499387011798874272017-12-04T15:08:47.755-05:002017-12-04T15:08:47.755-05:00I do love your train poems Grace. I especially lo...I do love your train poems Grace. I especially love cinnamon scented...gorgeous.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-50416970373439573182017-12-04T15:08:14.499-05:002017-12-04T15:08:14.499-05:00So much gorgeous language here, Grace. I love
&qu...So much gorgeous language here, Grace. I love <br />"dawn comes with blanket, soft, <br /> cinnamon-scented" <br /><br />and the delicious surprise of the word "pickled" here: <br /> "pickled new<br />roping flow & rhythm"De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-80113545985153132017-12-04T15:02:28.856-05:002017-12-04T15:02:28.856-05:00Have to get it in before the crunch consumesHave to get it in before the crunch consumesPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-63065329525110446312017-12-04T14:29:41.253-05:002017-12-04T14:29:41.253-05:00Love the thought of poetry written in breaks... Lo...Love the thought of poetry written in breaks... Love your railway writings.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com