tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post1299332401033793472..comments2024-03-29T06:55:11.868-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: EchoesGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-4353729485854058632015-08-23T02:33:32.161-04:002015-08-23T02:33:32.161-04:00Grace! Marvelous ~Grace! Marvelous ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-70232311957042168082015-08-22T17:05:22.345-04:002015-08-22T17:05:22.345-04:00I am nuts over this part:
"your name echoes
...I am nuts over this part:<br /><br />"your name echoes<br /> Gallows<br />Within me, dulcet"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-67815131198064194662015-08-22T13:23:07.318-04:002015-08-22T13:23:07.318-04:00Love the starting haiku as a stand alone or as a s...Love the starting haiku as a stand alone or as a starter to the echo poem and I really like that you did not write "Echo" on every echo line of your poem (YAY!!)....enjoyed the banter in that, including the 'horseshit'..haha :-)C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-26318262330983981472015-08-22T00:31:46.599-04:002015-08-22T00:31:46.599-04:00nice take on the echo prompt. I really wanted to ...nice take on the echo prompt. I really wanted to write to that prompt, but couldn't come up with anything. You did brilliantly!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-33153905149340668502015-08-21T22:11:36.947-04:002015-08-21T22:11:36.947-04:00Oh yes! This was perfectly executed. Such a pleasu...Oh yes! This was perfectly executed. Such a pleasure to read!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18337746905154922607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-80012657755967392422015-08-21T19:19:08.580-04:002015-08-21T19:19:08.580-04:00Outstanding!! I love how the echoes answered each ...Outstanding!! I love how the echoes answered each line with bittersweet hatred... and great haiku - very peaceful. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-89455155304072536632015-08-21T16:14:52.358-04:002015-08-21T16:14:52.358-04:00Ah.. yes.. eye
says so
much
more
than
I..:)Ah.. yes.. eye<br />says so<br />much<br />more<br />than<br />I..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-69745087103519992982015-08-21T06:51:32.041-04:002015-08-21T06:51:32.041-04:00The echoes come in staccato bursts. Keeps one glue...The echoes come in staccato bursts. Keeps one glued to the offering Grace! Beautiful write!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-27212421383025488152015-08-21T03:38:53.731-04:002015-08-21T03:38:53.731-04:00This is very deep, beautiful and powerful. An amaz...This is very deep, beautiful and powerful. An amazing poem to that amazing picture!<br />Have a wonderful weekend, Grace.Beatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14712395242968990000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-83285978692726706112015-08-21T00:01:37.439-04:002015-08-21T00:01:37.439-04:00such an enjoyable echo verse Grace...very well cra...such an enjoyable echo verse Grace...very well crafted, as always...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-35062023744612721482015-08-20T19:01:09.256-04:002015-08-20T19:01:09.256-04:00lol the horseshit did it for me. A good return ind...lol the horseshit did it for me. A good return indeed hahaPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-65959889893421296402015-08-20T17:46:26.420-04:002015-08-20T17:46:26.420-04:00I liked the longer lines and felt the single words...I liked the longer lines and felt the single words in between halted the flow of what they were saying. The single words didn't seem to connect with one another in any way to make a message. I admire the choice to break into something new. I realize it is an echo but it doesn't quite work that way to push the poem along. Smiles...>KB KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09533821226832198828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-8358007040065429542015-08-20T16:52:49.440-04:002015-08-20T16:52:49.440-04:00There is so much to think about in this myth and i...There is so much to think about in this myth and it lends itself well to the echo form but I have to confess...my favorite echo was horseshit! Too perfect. I'm smiling.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-86522751172078031362015-08-20T16:47:56.428-04:002015-08-20T16:47:56.428-04:00This is one brilliantly crafted echo verse poem :D...This is one brilliantly crafted echo verse poem :D<br />Beautifully executed.<br /><br />Lots of love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-1574346090275327842015-08-20T16:15:37.465-04:002015-08-20T16:15:37.465-04:00The beginning haiku is stunning. The rest of the ...The beginning haiku is stunning. The rest of the poem uses the echo most wonderfully. You do this form much good.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-88839567065518140552015-08-20T16:03:26.247-04:002015-08-20T16:03:26.247-04:00Oh my! That is one mean-spirited echo. Nice use of...Oh my! That is one mean-spirited echo. Nice use of this form for an engaging story/conversation. Peace, LindaAnotherFearlessYear.nethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11189052349065089513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-73521451115836538402015-08-20T16:03:20.433-04:002015-08-20T16:03:20.433-04:00beautiful Grace and love images:)beautiful Grace and love images:)Gloria Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03055543111865966546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-42509912155700711832015-08-20T16:01:20.694-04:002015-08-20T16:01:20.694-04:00Now THIS is an awesome echo poem. Brilliant spin, ...Now THIS is an awesome echo poem. Brilliant spin, integrating Echo/Narcissus into the poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-53502777920070859622015-08-20T15:43:47.354-04:002015-08-20T15:43:47.354-04:00Ah you finally picked up last week's form - ni...Ah you finally picked up last week's form - nice. I found the form very interesting too. A nice, rhyme conversation - enjoyed it. Mon.Esprithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11348192101465775124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-36977266267340199552015-08-20T15:26:16.314-04:002015-08-20T15:26:16.314-04:00This is just fabulous, you left me with a smile on...This is just fabulous, you left me with a smile on my face. I hadn't felt up to the echo challenge, but if I had imagined a perfect rendition, it would be this. Love.mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-22153684276076241722015-08-20T15:25:53.713-04:002015-08-20T15:25:53.713-04:00You certainly made me smile too, Grace. This is a ...You certainly made me smile too, Grace. This is a clever use of the form.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-50110393432070672412015-08-20T15:23:20.666-04:002015-08-20T15:23:20.666-04:00A very well crafted piece. Enjoyed reading this. A very well crafted piece. Enjoyed reading this. Miskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10280369979543928659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-42065182659448755782015-08-20T15:13:54.691-04:002015-08-20T15:13:54.691-04:00Like the infamous F-word, other fine bits of the v...Like the infamous F-word, other fine bits of the vernacular can spice up, ground poetics. This is a masterful Echo-poem, combined with the strong haiku. Most of us writing the echo form included some levity; you did not disappoint. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-27414020797122987742015-08-20T14:14:57.434-04:002015-08-20T14:14:57.434-04:00hahaha. You made me snort with horseshit. Been a w...hahaha. You made me snort with horseshit. Been a while since I have seen horseshit in a poem. Lol. The second or echo voice in this is rather callous, but I wonder if it is much truer than we would be comfortable being.Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09037544390731217891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-65250804749508740542015-08-20T14:10:32.015-04:002015-08-20T14:10:32.015-04:00First the haiku is a wonderful complement dialogue...First the haiku is a wonderful complement dialogue which is sad and hilarious at the same time.. The persuasive repulsive pair made me smile though.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com