Thursday, April 16, 2026

morning bird notes

i.

spring hides from the window 

the fog is a film

in noir


bathed in memories of tulips & blue irises

(no birds in sight)


ii.

gusts &                thunderstorms

are the weather

heavy-lidded eyes


peek from sleep delirium     & then lapse   

(a fallen feather)  


iii.

the trees

are sticks & stilts & empty 


canvas

awaiting the slight brush of      spring

(a bird song trills)


iv.

what spell is this

to wake up with bones fresh & fevered


my fingers    are running    faster

than i can           catch                   up


sage smoke & songs      

from spring rain to sloshing river

(a cardinal on the fence)


Posted for dVerse Poets Pub -Zuihitsu, hosted by Merril Smith.  Thanks for the visits and comments.

14 comments:

  1. This is beautiful, Grace. The line that stood out for me is "bathed in memories of tulips & blue irises" (Should the first iii be ii?)

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  2. A delightful following the broom, Grace. I love the way it begins with the title ‘morning bird notes’, goes from no birds in sight to a feather and birdsong, and ends with a ‘cardinal on the fence’, all woven into spring weather.

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    1. Thank you. Waiting for spring season here.

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  3. Very peaceful, bucolic. I could hear it.

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  4. So many engaging images - I could really visualise and imagine them jumping off the page - Jae

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  5. A beautiful portrait of spring, Grace...i love verse iii :)

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  6. Hi Grace, beautiful spring time and great to be back!
    - Hank

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  7. Gorgeous! I think you've caught the form beautifully.

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  8. love the form gives strength to what one sees in a beautiful waiting for spring day... still need a jacket to go outside...

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  9. A very visual piece. I have missed your creativity. - 😊

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  10. Your brush took you far, Grace. Wonderful!

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