tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post872805583534184773..comments2024-03-29T10:45:39.020-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: Caught in a dreamGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-45021410097733852662015-10-11T04:11:25.456-04:002015-10-11T04:11:25.456-04:00This is really so painfully powerful ... and your ...This is really so painfully powerful ... and your haiku is so perfect. One of the best haibun I've read in a while. BastetAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-77118704295193039472015-10-08T19:26:44.263-04:002015-10-08T19:26:44.263-04:00Beautiful and lyrical Grace, enjoyed this very muc...Beautiful and lyrical Grace, enjoyed this very much.Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07512953735819338268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-31248030985867338132015-10-08T01:42:43.785-04:002015-10-08T01:42:43.785-04:00The intricate details, the twisted sad memories, s...The intricate details, the twisted sad memories, such painfully sad images beautifully constructed. I greatly enjoy reading your words.The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-72170199408582195922015-10-07T23:05:08.872-04:002015-10-07T23:05:08.872-04:00Your use of metaphor with the bird and feathers es...Your use of metaphor with the bird and feathers especially is so powerful - speaks to a certain vulnerability. Excellent haibun, Grace!!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-4466884290335425862015-10-07T19:38:09.385-04:002015-10-07T19:38:09.385-04:00Dark, deep and filled with tension. Great write.Dark, deep and filled with tension. Great write.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-78861982602021796822015-10-07T07:39:16.930-04:002015-10-07T07:39:16.930-04:00Them that create such a history are doomed to repe...Them that create such a history are doomed to repeat it less they find a ladder out of the trench. the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-62825647324434089852015-10-07T06:54:30.225-04:002015-10-07T06:54:30.225-04:00As always, this is so beautiful and deep. Bravo.As always, this is so beautiful and deep. Bravo.Lux G.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00557863683608790087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-15839957681689862015-10-06T21:55:58.637-04:002015-10-06T21:55:58.637-04:00Good but very busy ~ Good but very busy ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-13873970126064845642015-10-06T16:40:05.728-04:002015-10-06T16:40:05.728-04:00Loved it, Grace. How are you today?<b>Loved it, Grace.</b> How are you today?Blue Grumpsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03106493133778319165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-81954226721840169852015-10-06T13:40:28.320-04:002015-10-06T13:40:28.320-04:00What a sad life for her - those empty cans, rosele...What a sad life for her - those empty cans, roseless garden. I hope she can find a way to leave that life and step into a new one - one with roses, birds, hope! Incredible haibun.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-71664006758055682492015-10-06T13:07:29.789-04:002015-10-06T13:07:29.789-04:00Wow-this is so full of images for me, and fear. It...Wow-this is so full of images for me, and fear. It feels like it is all unfolding before me with the words you chose. I really like it. <br /><br />Nato (https://chasinglifeandfindingdreams.wordpress.com/)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-31262591415956349212015-10-06T12:39:38.482-04:002015-10-06T12:39:38.482-04:00"as heartbeats of runaway prey" - fantas..."as heartbeats of runaway prey" - fantastic line. This piece is strongly imbued with mood - you take the reader right into her space. Very cool write.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-49840192150582240872015-10-06T11:14:05.738-04:002015-10-06T11:14:05.738-04:00Your prose melds well with your haiku. There is a ...Your prose melds well with your haiku. There is a seamless quality to your writing that always draws my attention. Lovely!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18337746905154922607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-75393231045429513502015-10-06T11:11:44.365-04:002015-10-06T11:11:44.365-04:00This write oozes fear. Made me think of domestic ...This write oozes fear. Made me think of domestic abuse victims, how they often live in fear with awful memories and too often they don't move out of the situation quickly enough. You captured the motion so well Grace.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-19436681082403376472015-10-06T10:15:43.525-04:002015-10-06T10:15:43.525-04:00This is so laced with hurt and fear and tension, a...This is so laced with hurt and fear and tension, and longing as well. A beautiful, vivid, dark, portrait. And that ending! Yes, tinderbox.mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-4497207438414200062015-10-06T09:02:55.112-04:002015-10-06T09:02:55.112-04:00Such ominous dream...'night - tinderbox'.....Such ominous dream...'night - tinderbox'...like 'her feet are lead, tangled in history of hurts and twigs of betrayals' ~ love the haibun matching with expressive picture, sound like a ekphrasis. Great!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-74965510997663842422015-10-06T08:11:42.936-04:002015-10-06T08:11:42.936-04:00Amazing piece, well done. Greetings! Amazing piece, well done. Greetings! Blogorattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12821621371176285384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-6102439312619733952015-10-06T07:33:57.806-04:002015-10-06T07:33:57.806-04:00When one needs to get out, sleep should sure be fo...When one needs to get out, sleep should sure be forgotten. Great story.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-61759064341832731282015-10-06T06:52:26.811-04:002015-10-06T06:52:26.811-04:00Vivid and powerful share.Vivid and powerful share.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-42290207184258790402015-10-06T05:27:23.502-04:002015-10-06T05:27:23.502-04:00Brilliantly disturbing.Brilliantly disturbing.Miskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10280369979543928659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-634127393241864002015-10-06T05:19:11.499-04:002015-10-06T05:19:11.499-04:00Vivid writing Grace... The soda cans just complete...Vivid writing Grace... The soda cans just complete that picture with the tinderbox night...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-17803678625071528762015-10-06T04:44:15.182-04:002015-10-06T04:44:15.182-04:00Very powerful Grace! In so few words, you etched t...Very powerful Grace! In so few words, you etched the painful reality of abuse, the sense of sad hopefulness, the entanglement in the past. Beautiful haiku!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-48256925679725488052015-10-06T02:18:46.325-04:002015-10-06T02:18:46.325-04:00A wonderful piece of writing about a troubling sub...A wonderful piece of writing about a troubling subject.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-20996331210138366402015-10-06T02:14:13.328-04:002015-10-06T02:14:13.328-04:00Nature desolate
of human hate..
Nature's way.....Nature desolate<br />of human hate..<br />Nature's way..<br />never culture..<br />never religion..<br /><br />JUST way..<br />aLive..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-25620374556879452672015-10-06T00:41:23.487-04:002015-10-06T00:41:23.487-04:00This is so dark and yet perfect, to escape his fis...This is so dark and yet perfect, to escape his fists.. Maybe nights are the best cloak she'll ever find. Night is tinderbox.. What a wonderful line.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com