tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post7832228276043757235..comments2024-03-27T22:12:01.201-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: The march of a caterpillarGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-21408183426210520902013-05-28T09:17:06.308-04:002013-05-28T09:17:06.308-04:00This is so clever and so beautifully written. The...This is so clever and so beautifully written. The third line or refrain of each stanza allows for one to really become the caterpillar and feel what it is feeling. Poignant for me.Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-51949976736616177722013-05-28T02:12:03.651-04:002013-05-28T02:12:03.651-04:00Thank you for the mention and reference, Grace. I&...Thank you for the mention and reference, Grace. I'm afraid I've cadged from you again and followed the cinquaine form on your piece "my plea" on my next poem. I gather it would be good form for me to figure out how to properly credit the original prompt, as well. You are an excellent muse.grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-32093605177761063172013-05-27T20:58:37.394-04:002013-05-27T20:58:37.394-04:00Oh I love this! My favorite part is the imagery in...Oh I love this! My favorite part is the imagery in the second to last stanzas. Something about them. Such a cool take on that piece of art :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13646917707699645492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-37054513217051456982013-05-27T13:45:57.066-04:002013-05-27T13:45:57.066-04:00Very well done, From perilous journey to uplifting...Very well done, From perilous journey to uplifting ending you've colorfully captured the life cycle of the caterpillar--a lovely interpretation of Leovi's photo.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-84295998955075339482013-05-26T22:12:27.749-04:002013-05-26T22:12:27.749-04:00colors, spiny bristles
moving along like spongy tr...colors, spiny bristles<br />moving along like spongy train- <br />evade, wiggle, evade<br /><br />You've taken us through a perilous journey! Soft and spongy they are vulnerable. Blends spot on with the abstract. Nicely Grace!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-24043010856752422182013-05-26T14:27:02.783-04:002013-05-26T14:27:02.783-04:00Thats so beautiful like the picture, colourful and...Thats so beautiful like the picture, colourful and lively with all its sounds...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-74514787941617328922013-05-26T12:55:06.035-04:002013-05-26T12:55:06.035-04:00Loved the journey you have captured here, Your ey...Loved the journey you have captured here, Your eye for details and expression make it an absolute delightful read Grace!TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-7244789281666823852013-05-26T12:46:18.146-04:002013-05-26T12:46:18.146-04:00Love this, and so right with the art.Love this, and so right with the art.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-65412359188003395082013-05-26T11:02:45.666-04:002013-05-26T11:02:45.666-04:00*****Grace haha I forgot who I was commenting on (...*****Grace haha I forgot who I was commenting on (red face)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-78535377197858349782013-05-26T11:01:38.663-04:002013-05-26T11:01:38.663-04:00It's really funny Bjorn my 6 yr -old daughter ...It's really funny Bjorn my 6 yr -old daughter brought home 12 cocoons (crystalix) of caterpillars from school in a terrarium that are all turning into butterflies in our home right now. This made me think I should do a post on it. Great work.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-53114496767758253982013-05-26T10:40:32.064-04:002013-05-26T10:40:32.064-04:00The photo does suggest a metamorphosis. The primor...The photo does suggest a metamorphosis. The primordal journey representing life's struggle to the light is very descriptive with the sunburst at the end. This collum lune form is great.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-90961368680162911922013-05-26T06:36:41.169-04:002013-05-26T06:36:41.169-04:00Wonderful: light, playful, cleverly composed. A jo...Wonderful: light, playful, cleverly composed. A joy.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-25722276086964317502013-05-26T05:45:44.055-04:002013-05-26T05:45:44.055-04:00...i'll soon fly, remembering nothing:
......<i>i'll soon fly, remembering nothing: <br /> earthly chaff & toil-- <br /><br /> but the sweep <br />of wind on my face, <br /> sun-colored & dazzling--</i><br /><br />...<i>sun-colored & dazzling</i>...your words wrap around this image effortlessly...enjoyed reading your words.<br /><br /><br />Abruvanamedslyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00507963633079056567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-4855174127103432782013-05-26T04:51:17.886-04:002013-05-26T04:51:17.886-04:00We would despise the caterpillar for eating what s...We would despise the caterpillar for eating what shades us then love what it becomes for the color it shows off in the sun. Maybe we should become oak leaf eaters?the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-18246018287894371742013-05-26T04:18:08.655-04:002013-05-26T04:18:08.655-04:00oooh nice form, love the way it wriggles like the ...oooh nice form, love the way it wriggles like the caterpillar and so lyrically colourful ... such a happy poem. I love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-1040796601688472112013-05-25T23:02:50.163-04:002013-05-25T23:02:50.163-04:00...the caterpillar --- ha, interesting but not exa......the caterpillar --- ha, interesting but not exactly lovely... always eating and eating leaves... but a true sign of faith & patience... it will hide & sleep for some time until it shows up back, expressing itself into a most beautiful being... ah, this is lovely Grace... and perfectly expressed in lunes... aww... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-16731058546185878952013-05-25T19:44:58.358-04:002013-05-25T19:44:58.358-04:00I love your response ~ Great work on the form too ...I love your response ~ Great work on the form too ~ <br /><br />http://grapeling.wordpress.com/2013/05/25/caterpillar-after-everyday-amazing/#respondGracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-65765277436236902262013-05-25T19:30:47.456-04:002013-05-25T19:30:47.456-04:00Between the image and your words, I had the sand w...Between the image and your words, I had the sand worm from Dune come into my mind. It's great to have a living story to go with the static image.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09589253190731511955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-57829280368173219942013-05-25T19:14:47.184-04:002013-05-25T19:14:47.184-04:00One interesting pic indeed and be nice to fly and ...One interesting pic indeed and be nice to fly and leave everything down below for a while.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-56022687133683167772013-05-25T18:39:00.227-04:002013-05-25T18:39:00.227-04:00Grace, you inspired me to follow your lead - I hop...Grace, you inspired me to follow your lead - I hope you don't terribly mind. ~ Mgrapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-34166705304252980562013-05-25T18:23:50.777-04:002013-05-25T18:23:50.777-04:00So glad to be reading your creative poetry once ag...So glad to be reading your creative poetry once again Grace. What a great description of a caterpillars life, a metaphor for ours. Let's fly.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-18862400663935114382013-05-25T17:54:51.817-04:002013-05-25T17:54:51.817-04:00nice...love how the bound to earth becomes flying ...nice...love how the bound to earth becomes flying and everything else is forgotten when he feels the wind on his face..very cool take on the pic graceClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-17528835622092776292013-05-25T16:39:47.981-04:002013-05-25T16:39:47.981-04:00I really get a little bit scared about that monste...I really get a little bit scared about that monster of a caterpillar eating the foliage (have seen examples of devastated forests) but at the end a beautiful butterfly.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-15312645205283020242013-05-25T16:11:49.860-04:002013-05-25T16:11:49.860-04:00I love the Collum Lune form, and really dug where ...I love the Collum Lune form, and really dug where you went with the Leovi abstract image. Bless Brian for finding us dazzlingly beauteous prompts; your piece pulls us sweetly through metamorphosis; thanks. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-53609038367302559732013-05-25T15:54:01.402-04:002013-05-25T15:54:01.402-04:00This is nice and special Grace, I had tell you Im ...This is nice and special Grace, I had tell you Im your fan ?? LOLGloria Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03055543111865966546noreply@blogger.com