tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post7136148582474434485..comments2024-03-28T20:37:10.663-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: thirsty for rain-slurped sky-Gracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-44616214734709922042016-07-22T19:34:18.577-04:002016-07-22T19:34:18.577-04:00waiting in slippers
by the doorway home
A nice f...waiting in slippers <br />by the doorway home<br /><br />A nice feeling very reassuring to be greeted such by a loved one upon coming home. Great tweets, Grace!<br /><br />Hank kaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-47218761768038738732016-07-22T16:21:54.838-04:002016-07-22T16:21:54.838-04:00Beautifully done!Beautifully done!Petru J Viljoenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04821468855056711841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-27871507893679271742016-07-22T14:02:08.068-04:002016-07-22T14:02:08.068-04:00No matter where we go, no matter how much fun we h...No matter where we go, no matter how much fun we have had, home, where someone we love awaits us, is always the best place. :-)<br /><br />~ImeldaImeldahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00477386880496665001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-28938608024908318962016-07-22T10:40:52.574-04:002016-07-22T10:40:52.574-04:00Love how the first 2 seem all about nature, but th...Love how the first 2 seem all about nature, but then the 3rd shows how the whole set is a longing to be together. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05126230685516232230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-63379562689181003702016-07-22T09:31:24.123-04:002016-07-22T09:31:24.123-04:00Three alone, yet together they can shine.Three alone, yet together they can shine.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-8887802927156953942016-07-22T09:05:52.002-04:002016-07-22T09:05:52.002-04:00The first one is perfection.The first one is perfection.Miskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10280369979543928659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-32747779479182214122016-07-22T04:29:13.766-04:002016-07-22T04:29:13.766-04:00Not a twit who tweets so I am only going to assume...Not a twit who tweets so I am only going to assume the poetry constraints are character count? The images are powerful in the definition of place and being Grace, especially the 3rd portion and the "i" in motion and the "you" waiting for the "i" to return to a place of comfort and known familiarity. the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-4792808569941908762016-07-22T01:55:59.515-04:002016-07-22T01:55:59.515-04:00home where all thirsts quench...gorgeous each one....home where all thirsts quench...gorgeous each one...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-17118474414372002622016-07-22T01:41:41.271-04:002016-07-22T01:41:41.271-04:00Just gorgeous, Grace.Just gorgeous, Grace.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-5705121226513050602016-07-21T23:05:02.251-04:002016-07-21T23:05:02.251-04:00These are very beautiful, Grace. I especially love...These are very beautiful, Grace. I especially love you, waiting in slippers in the doorway home.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-53723292002452635682016-07-21T20:07:46.556-04:002016-07-21T20:07:46.556-04:00All that dry place, with hardly any vegetation sto...All that dry place, with hardly any vegetation stood out for me. Happy to be back home now and enjoy some rainshower to cool the summer heat.Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-57653143527049159362016-07-21T20:06:18.081-04:002016-07-21T20:06:18.081-04:00I have now returned home after being in CA. Such...I have now returned home after being in CA. Such a dry canvas due to the drought there. Thanks Glenn.Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-78327248503696027092016-07-21T20:01:59.125-04:002016-07-21T20:01:59.125-04:00I like how you reference color in each stanza...it...I like how you reference color in each stanza...it adds just that more depth and interest.Gayle Walters Rosenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-79538137592430672362016-07-21T17:11:23.521-04:002016-07-21T17:11:23.521-04:00Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous write ...!!Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous write ...!!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-32179591081048684582016-07-21T17:02:55.312-04:002016-07-21T17:02:55.312-04:00Just beautiful, Grace. I was tempted to write abou...Just beautiful, Grace. I was tempted to write about ravens and then changed to seagulls. I love those lines:<br />'saffron-stained by blue cloudless sky-<br />thirst, a palpable heartbeat'<br />Kim M. Russellhttp://writinginnorthnorfolk.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-55204942136052734292016-07-21T16:15:29.138-04:002016-07-21T16:15:29.138-04:00Our minds plow similar poetic furrows--each one of...Our minds plow similar poetic furrows--each one of mine stands alone-though I love it that yours has a kind of travel thread in them. Are you in CA? The SW can be arid, for sure. Your first stanza hooked me. You had me at "raven".Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03913102073480393251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-2504234852180307242016-07-21T15:16:42.179-04:002016-07-21T15:16:42.179-04:00I echo Bjorn's comments - each stands by itsel...I echo Bjorn's comments - each stands by itself, but work together wonderfully well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-25105459412997055112016-07-21T14:58:47.562-04:002016-07-21T14:58:47.562-04:00I love how each part standing by itself form a uni...I love how each part standing by itself form a unity... the sky, the rocks and the person... maybe just the same connection... It does make me think of the desert actually... wonderfulbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com