tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post697375938808656853..comments2024-03-27T22:12:01.201-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: April rainGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-12575138269818489622019-04-17T03:41:51.878-04:002019-04-17T03:41:51.878-04:00Grace, this is amazing - appropriately enough! I l...Grace, this is amazing - appropriately enough! I love your repeat lines, and the journey from the badlands to a place of strength and healing is beautiful. I love your imagery of growth and calm. sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01756314170839177900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-66598219132730276322019-04-15T09:46:55.863-04:002019-04-15T09:46:55.863-04:00this is brilliance!!! those rhymes are too tough t...this is brilliance!!! those rhymes are too tough to pull off but you made it effortlessly. love this!A Reading Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12229414372642627877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-3392894957446955672019-04-14T15:35:20.806-04:002019-04-14T15:35:20.806-04:00Nice words. Apt pic.
The river of life nourishes u...Nice words. Apt pic.<br />The river of life nourishes us and makes us bloom! <br /><a href="www.anitaexplorer.com/2019/04/why-do-i-frequently-forget.html" rel="nofollow"> Why Do I Frequently Forget? - Anita </a>Anita Sabathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13365472694082398017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-3066936343177252902019-04-12T18:50:12.285-04:002019-04-12T18:50:12.285-04:00Fun. I had to look up "loosestrife" -- I...Fun. I had to look up "loosestrife" -- I thought you made up a word. Smile.<br />And I look for slant, but I guess not here. Cool plant imaginesSabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-41098913701860646832019-04-11T16:31:24.275-04:002019-04-11T16:31:24.275-04:00I love the way your Villanelle flows, Grace, and y...I love the way your Villanelle flows, Grace, and your use of colour and herbs.Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-20467646306166832752019-04-11T15:35:15.429-04:002019-04-11T15:35:15.429-04:00Reading it a second time, I enjoyed it even more. ...Reading it a second time, I enjoyed it even more. I agree that slant rhymes can liven up and add color to a poem; even though I tend to rhyme bang on. I often use the on line rhyme choices, but prefer the less obvious words.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-84227762357567221842019-04-10T17:00:15.244-04:002019-04-10T17:00:15.244-04:00Love the image of the purple loosestrife.Love the image of the purple loosestrife.SilverGardeniahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03840468159554491415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-57053137508225207602019-04-10T13:30:11.100-04:002019-04-10T13:30:11.100-04:00The rhythm of rain and beautiful images.The rhythm of rain and beautiful images.Kerfehttps://methodtwomadness.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-42008289282147907012019-04-10T10:20:54.993-04:002019-04-10T10:20:54.993-04:00Grace, I agree with Linda. I love the line "Y...Grace, I agree with Linda. I love the line "You river me with life," and though I have photographed loosestrife, I did not know what it was called. Thanks for teaching me something new, and for doing it so eloquently. :) --AbigailAbigail Gronwayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07397799031640621551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-867578426494616952019-04-10T05:20:44.781-04:002019-04-10T05:20:44.781-04:00How wonderful there are still place like this on E...How wonderful there are still place like this on Earth and in the heart.Brendanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03983584155125369291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-6641021140634972012019-04-09T21:55:50.378-04:002019-04-09T21:55:50.378-04:00I like the thought of blooming as loosestrife.I like the thought of blooming as loosestrife.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-16846285336176059872019-04-09T21:28:58.274-04:002019-04-09T21:28:58.274-04:00The water of life runs through us and around us in...The water of life runs through us and around us in every aspect of our life! Well done Grace!Dwight L. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07992133580674047782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-66164638151678423942019-04-09T20:41:47.076-04:002019-04-09T20:41:47.076-04:00This is enchanting and engaging Grace. love the us...This is enchanting and engaging Grace. love the use of river as a verb. It’s a broad expanse of action as such! Excellent!robkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-55255169784519241862019-04-09T20:32:49.407-04:002019-04-09T20:32:49.407-04:00Your metaphors were very compelling, and your form...Your metaphors were very compelling, and your form was captivating. I have a lot to learn.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07150921194357052155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-53390841540019288112019-04-09T16:31:35.924-04:002019-04-09T16:31:35.924-04:00I love "you river me with life." What a ...I love "you river me with life." What a wonderful image that creates (and sets up). A lovely villanelle, Grace.Merril D. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07208799388236948565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-73738897608845153812019-04-09T16:16:15.928-04:002019-04-09T16:16:15.928-04:00Nice of you to prep us for MTB this week. Your Vil...Nice of you to prep us for MTB this week. Your Villanelle is sturdy, and you made it work well for you. You had me at /leaving pathways of badlands/.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-21854261118365680472019-04-09T16:08:53.414-04:002019-04-09T16:08:53.414-04:00This is lovely! This is lovely! Revived Writerhttp://www.revivedwriter.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-29500331894548242722019-04-09T15:18:21.204-04:002019-04-09T15:18:21.204-04:00Grace, what a lovely flowing villanelle. I love th...Grace, what a lovely flowing villanelle. I love the line 'you river me with life'. And I had to look up loosestrife- I had never heard of it. Marvelous!Linda Lee Lyberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669367010600000396noreply@blogger.com