tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post6512314889238470204..comments2024-03-29T04:26:55.305-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: PromisesGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-8167275443077918512015-06-21T11:55:44.057-04:002015-06-21T11:55:44.057-04:00you've caught him! ~you've caught him! ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-74273476873630151502015-06-14T20:18:00.287-04:002015-06-14T20:18:00.287-04:00A women's eyes are sharp something which the o...A women's eyes are sharp something which the other has to look out for.. lest the lies be caught..! Well penned :DSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-61179810927013122152015-06-14T13:19:27.370-04:002015-06-14T13:19:27.370-04:00Faking remorse... I hate when that happens.
Hi Gr...<b>Faking remorse...</b> I hate when that happens.<br /><br />Hi GraceBlue Grumpsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03106493133778319165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-56412629349376596552015-06-14T13:18:59.626-04:002015-06-14T13:18:59.626-04:00Faking remorse... I hate when that happens.
Hi Gr...<b>Faking remorse...</b> I hate when that happens.<br /><br />Hi GraceBlue Grumpsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03106493133778319165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-20111037231212609912015-06-12T23:44:41.478-04:002015-06-12T23:44:41.478-04:00Wonderful, Grace. Love the lilac and honey-dew dr...Wonderful, Grace. Love the lilac and honey-dew drip.Sara McNultyhttp://purplepeninportland.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-16653331601405648692015-06-12T15:29:56.027-04:002015-06-12T15:29:56.027-04:00I really liked how the viewpoint shifted from the ...I really liked how the viewpoint shifted from the woman's point of view with emphasis on her suspicion to his attempt at hiding his lie. Exquisite :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14028993309576383058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-53727635478093964622015-06-12T12:42:40.272-04:002015-06-12T12:42:40.272-04:00(;.. Too them.. for well.. is empathy hell.. in li...(;.. Too them.. for well.. is empathy hell.. in live psychopaths.<br />eyes of love see eyes of lies..<br />psychopath love.. distilled.. empath of love..<br />love of empath.. distilled.. love psychopath..<br />lies of eyes see love of eyes..<br />psychopaths live in hell .. empathy is well.. for them Too..;)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-26963151255890289372015-06-12T09:21:52.904-04:002015-06-12T09:21:52.904-04:00Keen eyes sense the presence of purple danger here...Keen eyes sense the presence of purple danger here; a smashing palindrome, Grace! I also wrote mine as a unified stanza...lynn__https://www.blogger.com/profile/03991892804149727665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-49993240133557915142015-06-12T02:43:18.501-04:002015-06-12T02:43:18.501-04:00Ah, he's been found out! Well done, Grace.Ah, he's been found out! Well done, Grace.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-42535405520050743892015-06-12T01:06:17.935-04:002015-06-12T01:06:17.935-04:00I'm out of stellar comments, Grace--this poem ...I'm out of stellar comments, Grace--this poem is stunning!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-63393520888773506682015-06-12T00:27:42.367-04:002015-06-12T00:27:42.367-04:00lovely promises to keeplovely promises to keepVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-54632330241891711682015-06-11T23:59:42.443-04:002015-06-11T23:59:42.443-04:00The shorter lines are perfect for this poem and th...The shorter lines are perfect for this poem and the way it is all one, instead of separated into two separate stanzas just beyond rock this. I can feel/see her eyes flicking about, seeing all, even see her nostrils flare as she smells the falseness of his lilac scented hands...artificial lilac is just beyond nasty and perfect for this.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05470561916200090354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-9517000804488355892015-06-11T23:37:14.277-04:002015-06-11T23:37:14.277-04:00This is a true mirrored poem...because the words w...This is a true mirrored poem...because the words would not be in the same order witing the lines...well done!!Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-58468991515128102482015-06-11T21:51:53.630-04:002015-06-11T21:51:53.630-04:00Women's eyes are bewitching, the first element...Women's eyes are bewitching, the first element on the 'come hither look' to be seen. Beautifully penned, Grace! Great work on the palindrome!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-44847912958065304102015-06-11T20:06:04.576-04:002015-06-11T20:06:04.576-04:00Wow! Love this form (and what you've done wit...Wow! Love this form (and what you've done with it). I will have to give it a try. Wonderful wordsmithing (your forte, Grace). Definitely set my sleaze antennae a-tingling. Smiles.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-40561124380288857982015-06-11T18:47:06.411-04:002015-06-11T18:47:06.411-04:00Very nicely done! I like the effect of the uneven ...Very nicely done! I like the effect of the uneven lines and slight alterations, making it surprisingly unpredictable.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-15952566987569777562015-06-11T15:26:11.250-04:002015-06-11T15:26:11.250-04:00Wow, Grace...you worked this in such a way that th...Wow, Grace...you worked this in such a way that the palindrome effect seems seamless--perhaps because you wrote it in one stanza. Very nicely executed. Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-13722759096268662082015-06-11T15:13:38.403-04:002015-06-11T15:13:38.403-04:00Great take, smooth mirror poem; even harder becaus...Great take, smooth mirror poem; even harder because you reverse words positions as well as lines. I, also, had to tweak the mirrored lines a bit to even out the backward flow; excellent job on this one. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-50723673037460567322015-06-11T13:30:55.315-04:002015-06-11T13:30:55.315-04:00Brilliant and deliciously vivid.Brilliant and deliciously vivid.Blogorattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12821621371176285384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-12841322956904687732015-06-11T11:44:22.305-04:002015-06-11T11:44:22.305-04:00Those lies he ties.. I would think that that requi...Those lies he ties.. I would think that that requires a smooth operator.. something you would prefer not to get involved with. brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-82108318762397892442015-06-11T11:20:49.592-04:002015-06-11T11:20:49.592-04:00wonderfully written but i felt guilty after readin...wonderfully written but i felt guilty after reading this (lol)<br /><br />Grace-fully said<br /><br />graciasMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-79146639909784341642015-06-11T11:06:13.503-04:002015-06-11T11:06:13.503-04:00an awesome palindrome Grace...truly mirroring some...an awesome palindrome Grace...truly mirroring some truths...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-42617613713542713842015-06-11T11:05:46.206-04:002015-06-11T11:05:46.206-04:00WOW, this is a spectacular palindrome, the reversa...WOW, this is a spectacular palindrome, the reversal makes his behavior even more guilty-sounding.......loved it. Can almost see him, face all red........Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-79316287931843064452015-06-11T10:20:57.669-04:002015-06-11T10:20:57.669-04:00This is awesome!This is awesome!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-58256482681707485632015-06-11T10:10:55.927-04:002015-06-11T10:10:55.927-04:00Is a great shot Grace and nice poem!}xoIs a great shot Grace and nice poem!}xoGloria Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03055543111865966546noreply@blogger.com