tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post6388919837988891771..comments2024-03-29T04:26:55.305-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: Peace, unembroidered Gracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-19510595391994929142016-01-08T02:01:51.750-05:002016-01-08T02:01:51.750-05:00thought-provoking and powerful ~thought-provoking and powerful ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-79554679094171582192016-01-05T20:09:20.381-05:002016-01-05T20:09:20.381-05:00This is so beautifully written - an intense piece,...This is so beautifully written - an intense piece, delicately drawn.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-89319242397420012162015-12-12T00:14:56.492-05:002015-12-12T00:14:56.492-05:00A place where
peace is
price of Love..
wHere villa...A place where<br />peace is<br />price of Love..<br />wHere village<br />SinGs connecTinG<br />no longer diviDinG<br />hands of fear..<br />peace will<br />never be<br />possible<br />now with<br />illusory<br />fears..<br />Fear the<br />father and<br />mother of<br />all hate<br />related<br />humans..<br />yes fear<br />fear..<br />Love<br />Free..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-73660871114253946692015-12-10T00:03:54.917-05:002015-12-10T00:03:54.917-05:00Maybe death is the only harbinger of peace when li...Maybe death is the only harbinger of peace when living in a war zone. Brutal.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-24234372740416588602015-12-09T20:27:20.875-05:002015-12-09T20:27:20.875-05:00Tough story -- it does make me thirst for peace.Tough story -- it does make me thirst for peace.Sabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-32333675393947411242015-12-09T15:50:13.273-05:002015-12-09T15:50:13.273-05:00There is such wistfulness in your beautiful poem, ...There is such wistfulness in your beautiful poem, Grace ... many times I've asked myself, "Is death the final harbinger of peace?" hoping to hear that it's not. Well done.S.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-83866408040494639022015-12-09T15:47:28.005-05:002015-12-09T15:47:28.005-05:00Yes, perhaps death is when we finally find the ult...Yes, perhaps death is when we finally find the ultimate peace, so elusive in this life. Peace, Linda (Okay, so you know I always sign my comments that way, but it's going to be weird as I comment on poems to this prompt.)AnotherFearlessYear.nethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11189052349065089513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-55780110620786108572015-12-09T11:38:41.609-05:002015-12-09T11:38:41.609-05:00I like the use of the second person - and how you ...I like the use of the second person - and how you convey the waste of a whole generation of people who will know nothing other than war and fighting.Marina Sofiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15251903359649828285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-67365663387889070362015-12-09T01:02:55.686-05:002015-12-09T01:02:55.686-05:00To give life to save a stranger...sounds like peac...To give life to save a stranger...sounds like peacemaking to me. "Whose peace? Whose death?" are important questions to wrestle with.lynn__https://www.blogger.com/profile/03991892804149727665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-68550218505333745502015-12-08T23:18:23.737-05:002015-12-08T23:18:23.737-05:00Fully agree with this.Fully agree with this.Dr. Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07812039483229217149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-79294856310505784592015-12-08T19:08:56.499-05:002015-12-08T19:08:56.499-05:00"Your bed is now thin of sorrows" and &q..."Your bed is now thin of sorrows" and "is death the final harbinger of peace?" are lines which especially grabbed me. A highly effective work, Grace.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-22065433032265831462015-12-08T18:48:22.552-05:002015-12-08T18:48:22.552-05:00I really like that second stanza. Peace to you, G...I really like that second stanza. Peace to you, Grace.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-48477566659767650392015-12-08T18:44:47.578-05:002015-12-08T18:44:47.578-05:00True, death is final, everything is done, so that ...True, death is final, everything is done, so that is the ultimate peace. But let's avoid that for a while yet.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-62340783246949836592015-12-08T17:47:15.316-05:002015-12-08T17:47:15.316-05:00This is great. I love the third stanza.This is great. I love the third stanza.Maggiehttp://mercurialflecks.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-83195749906699442322015-12-08T17:29:00.552-05:002015-12-08T17:29:00.552-05:00Such an effective use of the second person to make...Such an effective use of the second person to make it come alive. Every line says so much but I especially like threading words etc...beautiful, sad poem.Victoria Ceretto-Slottohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11791036961620087347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-82727700627821131242015-12-08T17:18:38.427-05:002015-12-08T17:18:38.427-05:00A lovely & touching piece.
Beautifully penned!...A lovely & touching piece.<br />Beautifully penned!<br /><br /><br />Lots of love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-55047054618460142142015-12-08T16:00:12.176-05:002015-12-08T16:00:12.176-05:00"Peace on Earth, good will to men,"--a l..."Peace on Earth, good will to men,"--a lovely sentimental platitude, but Peace where is thy white wings, as War fans the air with brass lead, chopping hopes into piles of the dead. This piece about peace is strong, & equally sad. I took the same bent with mine; no Pollyanna eyes amongst us. I like your lines /as I struggle to see the serene blue<br />sky/above the ruins of scattered bricks/.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-54828528314916904222015-12-08T15:36:45.364-05:002015-12-08T15:36:45.364-05:00The ultimate final peace may be death, but we can ...The ultimate final peace may be death, but we can still work and pray for it here and many times, achieve it, if only for just a small space. Peace has to begin in each of us before we go out into the world - we can't just work for peace, we have to be peace.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-84701983094973588482015-12-08T14:59:44.568-05:002015-12-08T14:59:44.568-05:00The tragic truth is there... the ultimate peace is...The tragic truth is there... the ultimate peace is death, but maybe if you've done something with it... there could be an aftermath..brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-69621935642556202302015-12-08T14:26:01.292-05:002015-12-08T14:26:01.292-05:00Im agree with this poem Grace.
Absolutely love thi...Im agree with this poem Grace.<br />Absolutely love this .<br />Remember me San Paul : "death where is your victory "?Gloria Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03055543111865966546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-18090482521756237762015-12-08T14:25:53.704-05:002015-12-08T14:25:53.704-05:00Im agree with this poem Grace.
Absolutely love thi...Im agree with this poem Grace.<br />Absolutely love this .<br />Remember me San Paul : "death where is your victory "?Gloria Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03055543111865966546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-12666788368768542082015-12-08T14:03:17.583-05:002015-12-08T14:03:17.583-05:00In a way it is very true - the ultimate peace is d...In a way it is very true - the ultimate peace is death....<br />but hopefully we are spared from that 'peace' for a long time.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com