tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post5420412238539898947..comments2024-03-28T15:53:42.154-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: (i) click Gracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-37973864424678048902018-09-09T19:58:08.765-04:002018-09-09T19:58:08.765-04:00I can picture myself in this train ride - being in...I can picture myself in this train ride - being in one is, for me, the best time to get lost in my thoughts while outwardly looking at the passing scenery. <br /><br />Have a great week, Grace. :-)<br /><br />~ImeldaImeldahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00477386880496665001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-74849620477687025222018-09-09T11:45:03.585-04:002018-09-09T11:45:03.585-04:00You took me along with you. The tea looks good! I ...You took me along with you. The tea looks good! I would be afraid i would sleep past my station.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-82441645264727599432018-09-07T19:57:32.396-04:002018-09-07T19:57:32.396-04:00There's something so soothing about trains. Yo...There's something so soothing about trains. You've captured the serene feeling very well.Sasha A. Palmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11930602874359925520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-81281510841271884422018-09-07T15:06:24.958-04:002018-09-07T15:06:24.958-04:00Teacups to bells to doors, I love all these sounds...Teacups to bells to doors, I love all these sounds, and the orange and red hues. And the slumber they lulled you into. Mary Hoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17528465484642169618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-71806784093270259012018-09-07T14:10:53.831-04:002018-09-07T14:10:53.831-04:00Beautiful Grace. I can see you settled in on your ...Beautiful Grace. I can see you settled in on your travel and all the sites and sounds that accompany you. Renee Espriuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00690603400572426251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-76859562208836675742018-09-07T04:59:17.612-04:002018-09-07T04:59:17.612-04:00The colors, flavors, and sounds "click" ...The colors, flavors, and sounds "click" with your autumn scene!lynn__https://www.blogger.com/profile/03596502219189584715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-89183257364321575302018-09-07T04:49:33.706-04:002018-09-07T04:49:33.706-04:00i am a lover of trains and public transportation a...i am a lover of trains and public transportation as weird as that sounds it gives me a connect with life, you gave me much joy reading this, as the sounds bounced off my head and heartGinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11492243429734804802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-84305689494592904852018-09-06T23:22:16.564-04:002018-09-06T23:22:16.564-04:00So deliciously moody! I was right there with you!So deliciously moody! I was right there with you!Nan Mykelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02443309674986975824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-6550710743906786122018-09-06T20:43:13.880-04:002018-09-06T20:43:13.880-04:00The colors of the sunset in the food, the "sh...The colors of the sunset in the food, the "shush" when the ride is over...you took me there, Grace.Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-5252069262988939762018-09-06T19:47:18.537-04:002018-09-06T19:47:18.537-04:00The narrative and the descriptions are wonderful.The narrative and the descriptions are wonderful.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-56892157865754088242018-09-06T19:32:16.661-04:002018-09-06T19:32:16.661-04:00Love the "sounds" here and the finish of...Love the "sounds" here and the finish of raindrops murmuring.Sascha Darlingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10341908377333394733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-82106341585460136922018-09-06T18:44:52.589-04:002018-09-06T18:44:52.589-04:00I do like the sounds in this. Most of all like th...I do like the sounds in this. Most of all like the sound of hush as the rain begins to fall. From noisy to quite - what an amazing ridetonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-5157874237394709602018-09-06T18:43:34.278-04:002018-09-06T18:43:34.278-04:00Very nice use of Onomatopoeia. I can hear the subw...Very nice use of Onomatopoeia. I can hear the subway screeching and bumping to a halt!Dwight L. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07992133580674047782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-32683487843078763012018-09-06T18:18:18.792-04:002018-09-06T18:18:18.792-04:00Sure can change with a bang depending on where you...Sure can change with a bang depending on where you begin and end and begin againPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-86644054067048508472018-09-06T18:09:21.805-04:002018-09-06T18:09:21.805-04:00A beautiful journey in surround sounds tastes and ...A beautiful journey in surround sounds tastes and beautiful colours, soothed by the welcome [shush}.<br />Yummy write!<br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-33940836096876535852018-09-06T17:15:28.587-04:002018-09-06T17:15:28.587-04:00I like the sounds in your piece!I like the sounds in your piece!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01357805817311065042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-45887946566675482322018-09-06T16:45:17.023-04:002018-09-06T16:45:17.023-04:00The sounds are very effective for creating the sce...The sounds are very effective for creating the scene, but I particularly like the infusion of colours and fruit, countering the mechanical.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13134589375016804713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-49299869907113824552018-09-06T16:22:45.618-04:002018-09-06T16:22:45.618-04:00I like this noisy, colourful poem that ends in hus...I like this noisy, colourful poem that ends in hush.Jane Doughertyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14700193165487305298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-81596943459376795272018-09-06T16:19:42.690-04:002018-09-06T16:19:42.690-04:00an incredible onomatopoeic journey and it took suc...an incredible onomatopoeic journey and it took such an unpredictable direction from its opening - so creative GraceLaura Bloomsburyhttps://poetrypix.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-41866204500833047032018-09-06T16:13:15.360-04:002018-09-06T16:13:15.360-04:00I've never ridden in a subway, or even a train...I've never ridden in a subway, or even a train, so I took voyeuristic pleasure in your description. Come to think of it, I've never heard of a goji berry either. Am I the girl in the bubble? indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-154549375587370662018-09-06T16:01:07.351-04:002018-09-06T16:01:07.351-04:00I love the sounds in your commute Grace, especiall...I love the sounds in your commute Grace, especially 'city stations are chimes of bells as tunnel doors click, clack and announcements reel, pause'- it brings back happy memories from the London Underground :o) xxxWhippet Wisdom Bloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06620315234749039013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-81451546374376739092018-09-06T15:32:18.825-04:002018-09-06T15:32:18.825-04:00The cranberry spice, goji berries and red dates ma...The cranberry spice, goji berries and red dates made my sore mouth water, how delicious, Grace!And then suddenly I was transported to a subway train - I like the effective use of verbs in that stanza - plenty of action and at top speed.I also enjoyed the sound effects and the vivid colours!<br />Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-81396519489293443042018-09-06T15:07:16.893-04:002018-09-06T15:07:16.893-04:00Delicious word-smithing; really feel like I'm ...Delicious word-smithing; really feel like I'm sitting alongside you. I never lived in a city with subway system, but have visited a few. Love this poem.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-38557073040405625192018-09-06T15:06:12.444-04:002018-09-06T15:06:12.444-04:00Nice way of describing the sunset as "the sun...Nice way of describing the sunset as "the sun sets off"<br />Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-2570115593191432672018-09-06T14:56:16.925-04:002018-09-06T14:56:16.925-04:00The sounds of a commuter train ... and the slow a ...The sounds of a commuter train ... and the slow a awakening to a the rush of cities... love the sounds and the intensity in the end. Reminds me of Rhapsody in blue as depicted in Fantasia. brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com