tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post5097813621798844201..comments2024-03-29T04:26:55.305-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: Second thoughtsGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-41448220186197385342012-12-20T09:32:14.556-05:002012-12-20T09:32:14.556-05:00I'm a bit scared now, please hold me :)I'm a bit scared now, please hold me :) DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-84675711233772300672012-12-19T21:47:47.181-05:002012-12-19T21:47:47.181-05:00Terrific, Grace!
who says i got no backbone? ...
T...Terrific, Grace!<br /><i>who says i got no backbone? </i>...<br />Thanks for sharing your beautiful words all through the year.<br />I wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.<br />A hug,<br /><i>Dulcina</i>Dulcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09804606583762933316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-43086890629118508492012-12-19T06:45:50.880-05:002012-12-19T06:45:50.880-05:00really interesting, Grace!
♥really interesting, Grace! <br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-85214712618044693512012-12-19T05:39:57.175-05:002012-12-19T05:39:57.175-05:00Great story here! I agree that this should be a ch...Great story here! I agree that this should be a children's storybook!<br /><br />Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-30036064197960914522012-12-18T17:01:55.184-05:002012-12-18T17:01:55.184-05:00Love this short story! What an unique-looking dol...Love this short story! What an unique-looking doll!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-35408488205561295102012-12-18T11:52:59.720-05:002012-12-18T11:52:59.720-05:00..odd lookin' doll... Grace this was terrific......odd lookin' doll... Grace this was terrific... with a great reference to the sea... i think, you are getting better & better each time i read you... adorable & i feel proud... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-55020842265235735422012-12-18T11:34:33.226-05:002012-12-18T11:34:33.226-05:00She 's got a backbone! :) More of us humans ...She 's got a backbone! :) More of us humans need to learn to love ourselves for the way we are, not what the unrealistic dreams we put in our mind! Great imagery throughout. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-20293606702433755472012-12-18T09:50:20.154-05:002012-12-18T09:50:20.154-05:00Beautifully done, Grace! Choices make for a better...Beautifully done, Grace! Choices make for a better living!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-15051619039230895842012-12-18T07:08:49.604-05:002012-12-18T07:08:49.604-05:00Thank you for the fun and uplifting distraction, G...Thank you for the fun and uplifting distraction, Grace. A great tale! I love the phrase "bagful ass!"Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-59384943763759926622012-12-18T04:52:28.228-05:002012-12-18T04:52:28.228-05:00The narrative is well told and gripping, the poem ...The narrative is well told and gripping, the poem well constructed. Excellently done.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-16467853165639437592012-12-18T04:46:12.553-05:002012-12-18T04:46:12.553-05:00Such a fun read- crabby food, no backbone, sultry...Such a fun read- crabby food, no backbone, sultry vamp! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-33729882296851416912012-12-18T03:02:50.026-05:002012-12-18T03:02:50.026-05:00Choices...we have them...sometimes, tragically the...Choices...we have them...sometimes, tragically there are those who make the wrong choice.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-46122715116106992622012-12-18T00:03:55.648-05:002012-12-18T00:03:55.648-05:00I had a similar response to tragedy, raise up some...I had a similar response to tragedy, raise up some good and tender moments! What a lovely voice you have given this mer-squid! I especially like the admission of doubt:<br />"but all throughout the weedy & slimy journey <br />i pine for my solitary rock bed & holes to curl into"<br />and the turnaround it leads to, done with verve and backbone!<br />Thank you for this, Grace.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-88968178069437020852012-12-17T21:20:35.109-05:002012-12-17T21:20:35.109-05:00I enjoyed this story/poem very much, Grace. I app...I enjoyed this story/poem very much, Grace. I appreciate the respite from the sadness.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-55118620644365034642012-12-17T20:24:51.449-05:002012-12-17T20:24:51.449-05:00A fun respite from all the sadness! I love the la...A fun respite from all the sadness! I love the last line!WabiSabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2012/12/16/december-14-2012/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-58307096553914541292012-12-17T17:38:08.854-05:002012-12-17T17:38:08.854-05:00I love the last line! S'wunnerful.
KI love the last line! S'wunnerful.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-83791558500634070002012-12-17T15:13:11.956-05:002012-12-17T15:13:11.956-05:00ambitious, i want to make money of trade secrets -...ambitious, i want to make money of trade secrets --<br />when danger lurks, my nerve poison is most potent <br /><br />i am told the black sac fetches a fortune & i dream <br />of living in pearly castle and not eating crabby food --<br /><br />I loved your story, and these lines gave such character to your narrator. Lovely work, Grace.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-38260968176546493122012-12-17T14:41:37.907-05:002012-12-17T14:41:37.907-05:00Love your take on the doll!! A line that jumped ou...Love your take on the doll!! A line that jumped out at me was this: " i inhale deeply <br />and remember the power of life and death in my hands --" powerful. Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-21794185722188301452012-12-17T14:36:25.718-05:002012-12-17T14:36:25.718-05:00Thanks Shauna ~ Thanks Shauna ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-16760251454057561502012-12-17T14:35:48.867-05:002012-12-17T14:35:48.867-05:00I enjoyed the challenge of writing something diffe...I enjoyed the challenge of writing something different. Thanks Abin ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-51832887126877901862012-12-17T14:34:49.254-05:002012-12-17T14:34:49.254-05:00We are going to winter so sunnier days look good t...We are going to winter so sunnier days look good to me ~ Thanks Brian ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-47601320713130660052012-12-17T14:33:58.026-05:002012-12-17T14:33:58.026-05:00Thank you Ollie ~Thank you Ollie ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-68520047221528205362012-12-17T14:33:24.780-05:002012-12-17T14:33:24.780-05:00I wish I can rhyme like you to make it even more f...I wish I can rhyme like you to make it even more fun ~ Thanks Pat~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-67534457411754290982012-12-17T14:06:02.001-05:002012-12-17T14:06:02.001-05:00This is fantastic, Grace. I love this line: "...This is fantastic, Grace. I love this line: "limbs eager to suck me dry, witless & predictably tame"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-41022693942527232702012-12-17T13:58:45.377-05:002012-12-17T13:58:45.377-05:00this was loads of fun.loved the wit that shines th...this was loads of fun.loved the wit that shines through.such experiments suit you well.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.com