tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post4679682782980680921..comments2024-03-28T17:30:09.028-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: Doodling with wordsGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-20796167116700125102014-10-16T10:37:46.225-04:002014-10-16T10:37:46.225-04:00Made me think of the Mad Hatter and Caterpillar fr...Made me think of the Mad Hatter and Caterpillar from Alice in Wonderland sitting down to tea with you. Great write. Anne Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00741540499289419526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-63008976519715027352014-10-12T11:52:46.006-04:002014-10-12T11:52:46.006-04:00Holy Cow! This is totally "cool." It h...Holy Cow! This is totally "cool." It has made me think of Shell Silverstein and also the "Madeline" books by Bemelsman. This was just jolly and wonderful. Also, your first line about "doodling on a noodle," made me think of those tomes written upon a grain of rice. ;)Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-5305217496726305542014-10-12T11:39:35.934-04:002014-10-12T11:39:35.934-04:00Super cute, Grace. Really charming. k. Super cute, Grace. Really charming. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-44978818481304002462014-10-11T16:01:23.005-04:002014-10-11T16:01:23.005-04:00Oodles of fun!
Anna :o]Oodles of fun!<br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-85781988190673007922014-10-11T09:01:19.557-04:002014-10-11T09:01:19.557-04:00There is meaning in each line beyond the metric an...There is meaning in each line beyond the metric and mechanics, it all comes together to form a whole picture of 3 dimensions to walk around and see the story told in each pane and then the connecting of each pane to hear the statement of the piece. Idling time away can have it's own benefits.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-1587396693020693132014-10-10T23:33:24.548-04:002014-10-10T23:33:24.548-04:00oh, i love your wordplay: "English is ticklis...oh, i love your wordplay: "English is ticklish, like licorice"--you know it! such wonderful fun, this, and the last line says it all. Thank you.dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-11920370352029819292014-10-10T22:11:42.436-04:002014-10-10T22:11:42.436-04:00this was a fun read...makes me wish I could doodle...this was a fun read...makes me wish I could doodle words as elegantly.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-61045259226759674072014-10-10T22:09:57.647-04:002014-10-10T22:09:57.647-04:00A bit of cubist fun, Grace - clever pairings and i...A bit of cubist fun, Grace - clever pairings and images, nice! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-18037817395255286492014-10-10T15:43:53.267-04:002014-10-10T15:43:53.267-04:00love that last line and the whole pen, Grace. Hope...love that last line and the whole pen, Grace. Hope you have a good weekend ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-65149625752142763072014-10-10T09:16:18.342-04:002014-10-10T09:16:18.342-04:00Fun play with words! :)Fun play with words! :)humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-30104324043073526842014-10-10T07:41:34.363-04:002014-10-10T07:41:34.363-04:00This was a fun journey to go on with you. The wor...This was a fun journey to go on with you. The words flowed beautifully and brought a smile to my face. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Have a fantastic weekend!<br /><br /><a href="http://mockturtlemusings.com" rel="nofollow">Elsie</a><br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-52809835833332882002014-10-10T06:28:08.274-04:002014-10-10T06:28:08.274-04:00Great fun :)Great fun :)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-20724221303965360212014-10-10T03:29:05.676-04:002014-10-10T03:29:05.676-04:00Delicious! Lewis Carroll, eat your heart out! :)Delicious! Lewis Carroll, eat your heart out! :)Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-66424412794072810452014-10-10T02:24:18.085-04:002014-10-10T02:24:18.085-04:00loved the rhythm here..beautiful Graceloved the rhythm here..beautiful GraceArathi Hariharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142420236345157881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-37144215713084113602014-10-10T00:31:12.723-04:002014-10-10T00:31:12.723-04:00perfect take on the prompt..."Playing with wo...perfect take on the prompt..."Playing with words is swaying with birds" this best describes the joy of being a poet..lovely Grace :)Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-55146798930401807002014-10-09T23:26:08.467-04:002014-10-09T23:26:08.467-04:00smiles ... fun play with words....English is tickl...smiles ... fun play with words....English is ticklish, like licorice...ha...that is so very true...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-21193395879026873382014-10-09T18:51:21.434-04:002014-10-09T18:51:21.434-04:00loved the fun choice of words throughout... great ...loved the fun choice of words throughout... great work on thisWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-84351470940499529292014-10-09T18:38:54.193-04:002014-10-09T18:38:54.193-04:00What a groovy and fun piece. Loved the last line.What a groovy and fun piece. Loved the last line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-27024949719239820422014-10-09T18:26:44.049-04:002014-10-09T18:26:44.049-04:00I love the way this sounds! Very fun, Grace.I love the way this sounds! Very fun, Grace.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-53074595238012660302014-10-09T16:30:40.938-04:002014-10-09T16:30:40.938-04:00Nice one, Grace...you evoke so many entertaining i...Nice one, Grace...you evoke so many entertaining images and inspire new thoughts in the word combinations...love the part with licorice, hard to NOT <br />turn it into a meaningful poem as it works the mind.Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-3709195816717025802014-10-09T16:15:58.699-04:002014-10-09T16:15:58.699-04:00This is a whole symphony of sounds!This is a whole symphony of sounds!Miskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03290945518598423297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-78154653877499135502014-10-09T15:51:36.819-04:002014-10-09T15:51:36.819-04:00I had always thought English ticklish.. definitely...I had always thought English ticklish.. definitely licorice.. what a perfect way of playing with the sounds.. something to be read loud with those rhymes and gradual changes... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-71140305658907826152014-10-09T15:13:25.642-04:002014-10-09T15:13:25.642-04:00You fully captured the nonsensical bent to the pro...You fully captured the nonsensical bent to the prompt, rocking the crap out of it. Your title is trey apt; liked the line /suffocating the dark is a spark/ Oddly for me, this form overlaps, shadows, apes Flarf, nonsense verse, & several other forms; all fun though. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-5876260880854169012014-10-09T15:05:35.524-04:002014-10-09T15:05:35.524-04:00You have written a nice collection of cubist lines...You have written a nice collection of cubist lines. I love the first line, the one about Latin and the closing lines. And now I feel like having some nice apple strudel.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-59618353001752088482014-10-09T14:57:31.959-04:002014-10-09T14:57:31.959-04:00Fun. Following the Doodle as it bounces and sways...Fun. Following the Doodle as it bounces and sways ...Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.com