tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post431049336919873348..comments2024-03-29T06:55:11.868-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: late summer Gracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-49093206102536899382021-08-16T06:51:50.848-04:002021-08-16T06:51:50.848-04:00Peaceful and delightfully calming.Peaceful and delightfully calming.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-85917682643604861722021-08-14T19:43:51.778-04:002021-08-14T19:43:51.778-04:00"Let's ramble the road with daisies"..."Let's ramble the road with daisies" - an unforgettable image. purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-31766395724557746522021-08-14T10:09:09.559-04:002021-08-14T10:09:09.559-04:00a delicate and fruitful refrain
as autumn comes a...a delicate and fruitful refrain <br />as autumn comes again<br /><br />.. seems my comments are not getting through Grace, sorrycalmkatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07173077889859216652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-71993803368387134682021-08-14T03:18:20.293-04:002021-08-14T03:18:20.293-04:00The beauty of late summer glows through the repeat...The beauty of late summer glows through the repeating refrain. I love it.Marion Hortonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09928737422288639311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-60451445235432996352021-08-13T21:38:42.063-04:002021-08-13T21:38:42.063-04:00I really like the imagery, especially when the &qu... I really like the imagery, especially when the "shadows lengthen & fold."Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09054732378669659210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-46930292227170008452021-08-13T09:44:21.751-04:002021-08-13T09:44:21.751-04:00Lovely poem with lush comforting imagery. I feel ...Lovely poem with lush comforting imagery. I feel as if a similar notion was echoed slightly in my poem but I swear I've only just read yours! Catching all these feels though - autumn does seem to be creeping in already :-)Sunra Rainzhttp://www.sunrarainz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-20068027789205086042021-08-13T02:48:07.820-04:002021-08-13T02:48:07.820-04:00You paint such an inviting picture, taking us with...You paint such an inviting picture, taking us with you to these beautiful climes.paeansunpluggedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15076601569836498915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-59025194458102843112021-08-12T23:38:58.132-04:002021-08-12T23:38:58.132-04:00Your words provide a picturesque scene.Your words provide a picturesque scene.Ken / rivrvlogrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05675443009367133096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-48580327228926756532021-08-12T22:02:19.544-04:002021-08-12T22:02:19.544-04:00Grace, you took us there with you. I smelled. I he...Grace, you took us there with you. I smelled. I heard. I felt. I saw. Your two refrains are colored in gold, your pen is golden. These lines took my heart:<br />let's ramble the road with daisies<br /><br />and swap stories as birds on flight A Reading Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12229414372642627877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-4949975362137543492021-08-12T22:01:14.200-04:002021-08-12T22:01:14.200-04:00A beautifully painted world.A beautifully painted world.Alexandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13803835759945294007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-26537815301276085812021-08-12T21:53:06.081-04:002021-08-12T21:53:06.081-04:00You have captured the allure of late summer. Your ...You have captured the allure of late summer. Your refrains works perfectly. <br /><br />It's been extremely warm here and this afternoon a terrible storm rolled in. Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-23686023772530542452021-08-12T21:31:20.523-04:002021-08-12T21:31:20.523-04:00clock chimes into early autumn
i watch shadows len...clock chimes into early autumn<br />i watch shadows lengthen & fold<br />as afternoon sun rusts the skylight <br />as the maple leaves amber gold<br /><br />Love this stanza, Grace! It leads on to the next season, Autumn and alluding to the golden colour in the process!<br /><br />Hank<br />kaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-34253420949378042442021-08-12T20:08:41.416-04:002021-08-12T20:08:41.416-04:00"as afternoon sun rusts the skylight.""as afternoon sun rusts the skylight."Tzvi Fievelhttp://scripturalmusings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-54692537631934034892021-08-12T19:49:38.054-04:002021-08-12T19:49:38.054-04:00beautifully done and perfect for the seasonbeautifully done and perfect for the seasonJadeLihttp://tao-talk.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-78188086294941035972021-08-12T19:41:32.350-04:002021-08-12T19:41:32.350-04:00I'm wallowing in your words of late summer, si...I'm wallowing in your words of late summer, simply divine! Triciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07768126784133611768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-50081832030733351222021-08-12T19:38:22.048-04:002021-08-12T19:38:22.048-04:00I really enjoyed that last stanza. I really enjoyed that last stanza. Maria L. Berghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05467454995491850206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-41175440653541565902021-08-12T16:23:10.581-04:002021-08-12T16:23:10.581-04:00This is a gentle ramble through autumn light. Love...This is a gentle ramble through autumn light. Lovely.Jane Doughertyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14700193165487305298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-54816646483827751492021-08-12T15:26:39.922-04:002021-08-12T15:26:39.922-04:00Aah! I got it🙂. Beautiful Grace! 🙂
PatAah! I got it🙂. Beautiful Grace! 🙂<br /><br />PatPat Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802650408750617363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-1539099564837061912021-08-12T14:53:13.408-04:002021-08-12T14:53:13.408-04:00Oh Grace this is absolutely STUNNING!💝💝 You have...Oh Grace this is absolutely STUNNING!💝💝 You have composed the perfect atmospheric refrain to really give the reader a taste of the change in seasons. I especially love; "i breathe in - scents of late summer roses,fading mint leaves, seedheads fluffy & white as the maple leaves amber gold/as afternoon sun rusts the skylight." Sigh!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-65886710897362622272021-08-12T13:20:41.808-04:002021-08-12T13:20:41.808-04:00This is wonderful! I love so much about it....the...This is wonderful! I love so much about it....the refrain is just perfect! Afternoon rusting the sky....what a perfect verb to describe those changing colors and to fit in with the autumn season as well! "clock chimes into early autumn" what a wonderful phrase to describe the coming fall!!! <br />I will ramble a road with daisies with you any day! :) LOVE it!lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-83982601500435593432021-08-12T12:27:54.619-04:002021-08-12T12:27:54.619-04:00Wherever, whenever .... I'll be there.Wherever, whenever .... I'll be there. Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-30801502049719769992021-08-12T10:48:19.269-04:002021-08-12T10:48:19.269-04:00Beautiful words!Beautiful words!ashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.com