tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post3995038326943227601..comments2024-03-27T22:12:01.201-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: FearGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger50125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-20619650063644488002013-01-21T01:12:01.810-05:002013-01-21T01:12:01.810-05:00I'm glad you saw this leaf, did not forget it ...I'm glad you saw this leaf, did not forget it and was inspired to write this poem! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-29873118025880133112013-01-19T11:06:49.734-05:002013-01-19T11:06:49.734-05:00you definitely weaved a spell with this piece. th...you definitely weaved a spell with this piece. the imagery was stunning. I felt a bit crushed like the cigarette at the end—to be forgotten stung.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-89993190985423801152013-01-19T00:53:21.163-05:002013-01-19T00:53:21.163-05:00"The old city burns"
fabulous opening l..."The old city burns"<br /><br />fabulous opening line!<br /><br />have a wonderful weekend, Grace!<br />♥my heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-71644887413491886872013-01-18T21:13:43.015-05:002013-01-18T21:13:43.015-05:00i love the building squats like sumo wrestlers
qu...i love the building squats like sumo wrestlers<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2013/01/18/quantum-kisses/" rel="nofollow">quantum kisses</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-31378383243673949042013-01-18T15:05:19.021-05:002013-01-18T15:05:19.021-05:00"sin-tarred" Why so I love this so much?..."sin-tarred" Why so I love this so much? <br /><br />The imagery of the sumo wrestling buildings was perfect. I look at the monolithic structures around me and can't help but picture it. <br /><br />"Your fear tinders like Last Rites.<br />To be squished like cigarette butts. To be forgotten like a leaf."<br /><br />Good stuff there.Raivennehttp://wp.me/pPury-MGnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-59874284346196930242013-01-18T13:07:06.419-05:002013-01-18T13:07:06.419-05:00i really like: "Exhale the lake’s leftovers.&...i really like: "Exhale the lake’s leftovers." wow. Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-62225166208406116302013-01-18T12:56:53.224-05:002013-01-18T12:56:53.224-05:00..Grace, this was really wonderful to read... Enj.....Grace, this was really wonderful to read... Enjoyed your attempt at this form... it fits you well...smiles ....kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08116213800655914273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-43290999552969797572013-01-18T10:30:50.662-05:002013-01-18T10:30:50.662-05:00This is wonderful. The imagery is vivid, and your...This is wonderful. The imagery is vivid, and your similes are quite powerful.Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-64846776619845090232013-01-18T09:16:29.022-05:002013-01-18T09:16:29.022-05:00Powerful imagery with perfectly selected metaphors...Powerful imagery with perfectly selected metaphors. Just stunning.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-65643457933584954902013-01-18T09:09:44.802-05:002013-01-18T09:09:44.802-05:00do like the wrestlers around the gardens... smiles...do like the wrestlers around the gardens... smiles... what a visual that bringsWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-40418739536171883402013-01-18T07:04:26.288-05:002013-01-18T07:04:26.288-05:00Grace, this is so powerful! To be forgotten like a...Grace, this is so powerful! To be forgotten like a leaf would be something to fear!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-62754987562996651392013-01-18T06:26:57.481-05:002013-01-18T06:26:57.481-05:00Good to see beauty and cleverness rolled into one....Good to see beauty and cleverness rolled into one.<br /><br />Buildings squat like sumo wrestlers - particularly impressive.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-24204607354265993362013-01-18T04:11:33.206-05:002013-01-18T04:11:33.206-05:00awesome poem- love how the buildings squat like su...awesome poem- love how the buildings squat like sumo wrestlers and the 'lake's leftovers'.rashmenonhttp://rashscribbles.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-85424953079700235442013-01-17T23:35:45.379-05:002013-01-17T23:35:45.379-05:00Powerful = I especially like the sumo wrestler lin...Powerful = I especially like the sumo wrestler line - a wonderful comparison - and your use of the weave is super subtle but creates a quiet music. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-54796204099190963792013-01-17T21:10:06.718-05:002013-01-17T21:10:06.718-05:00"Your fear tinders like Last Rites."
sha..."Your fear tinders like Last Rites."<br />sharp goodness, like a word razor.Evelynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03773200135330787188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-29881713921277811722013-01-17T19:32:45.210-05:002013-01-17T19:32:45.210-05:00This is great...love buildings squatting like sumo...This is great...love buildings squatting like sumo wrestlers...you really nailed this prompt... in awe!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-20756870405138902762013-01-17T18:31:42.230-05:002013-01-17T18:31:42.230-05:00Interesting images you created. Yes, surely like l...Interesting images you created. Yes, surely like life. Please have a good Friday.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-50668011149827928572013-01-17T18:19:07.903-05:002013-01-17T18:19:07.903-05:00Stark images, enjoyable read. The first stanza was...Stark images, enjoyable read. The first stanza was especially powerful.Frank Watsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11512960953837979822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-55081822814949276852013-01-17T17:58:42.242-05:002013-01-17T17:58:42.242-05:00Ha..ha..that is why I stopped but I did think of a...Ha..ha..that is why I stopped but I did think of antlers (hung up on wall) ~ Smiles ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-19575415834534428512013-01-17T17:36:53.562-05:002013-01-17T17:36:53.562-05:00The imagery contained in this piece is just so evo...The imagery contained in this piece is just so evocative of our urban landscape and completely hides the weave form it is written in. Now for a question: If you were to continue to a third stanza, how would you to rhyme wrestlers?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-19598680272530510402013-01-17T17:16:06.508-05:002013-01-17T17:16:06.508-05:00Loved especially the triple whammy of similes that...Loved especially the triple whammy of similes that finished this like three boxing blows leading to knockout :-)ND Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16510971525209549921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-23959106749234240112013-01-17T16:32:46.202-05:002013-01-17T16:32:46.202-05:00This is a very impressive piece of writing. I fel...This is a very impressive piece of writing. I felt it and I did not like what I felt (that is not an insult ;)) Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-61248118101256946002013-01-17T16:21:52.689-05:002013-01-17T16:21:52.689-05:00Very cool blog. Interesting posts. ;)
Nice atmosph...Very cool blog. Interesting posts. ;)<br />Nice atmosphere guests with you here on the blog. ;]<br />Yours. Have a nice day. !<br /><br />Follow me on facebook fanpage<br />I'm very concerned about this, please. :)<br />https://www.facebook.com/pages/In-another-light/413836138693856<br />Patrycja (photoopassion)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14804502869020832592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-29856535452012860102013-01-17T15:47:36.707-05:002013-01-17T15:47:36.707-05:00Thank you for introducing his form to us Gay ~ Ve...Thank you for introducing his form to us Gay ~ Very interesting challenge for today ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-27123880457942489342013-01-17T15:46:24.180-05:002013-01-17T15:46:24.180-05:00Thank you MZ ~ Thank you MZ ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.com