tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post3661940012392674064..comments2024-03-29T08:01:55.910-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: the moon, the sole witnessGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-29650380766095535002019-10-31T20:01:24.235-04:002019-10-31T20:01:24.235-04:00Mysterious and chilling, Grace. What are the brok...Mysterious and chilling, Grace. What are the broken promises? I love, "growing smaller as a candle light".purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-16983132609866279992019-10-30T08:14:46.868-04:002019-10-30T08:14:46.868-04:00Creepy--filled with atmospheric darkness and myste...Creepy--filled with atmospheric darkness and mystery. Like others, I want to know more. I agree with Sarah that it's like a film trailer because it evokes a visual, but we don't really know what happened or will happen.Merril D. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07208799388236948565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-80258151433023099362019-10-29T13:14:20.996-04:002019-10-29T13:14:20.996-04:00A wicked tale about we know not what! "Growin...A wicked tale about we know not what! "Growing smaller as a candle light" … I like that phrase. indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-88124718248344110952019-10-29T05:29:18.516-04:002019-10-29T05:29:18.516-04:00Hmmm not sure she has the best intentions. Wonder ...Hmmm not sure she has the best intentions. Wonder about the bones. Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-34437746920130592782019-10-29T04:26:55.935-04:002019-10-29T04:26:55.935-04:00I like how the title suggests something untoward, ...I like how the title suggests something untoward, Grace, and the way you build suspense with the straining backpack and the faster pace, and the asides in parentheses. I also like the threatening ‘giant roots climbing out of boulders’ and the shadows draping every crevice. I especially love the ending, with your protagonist ‘growing smaller as a candle light’. I;d like to know more about the bones. I agree with Sarah about its similarity with a film trailer. Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-81666325268398613752019-10-28T20:10:36.871-04:002019-10-28T20:10:36.871-04:00Your imagery is hauntingly beautiful!Your imagery is hauntingly beautiful!Dwight L. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07992133580674047782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-28981342693206972552019-10-28T17:05:16.671-04:002019-10-28T17:05:16.671-04:00I want to hear the before and after. Haunting, yet...I want to hear the before and after. Haunting, yet freeing.Mary Hoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17528465484642169618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-77001766832829795812019-10-28T16:17:34.508-04:002019-10-28T16:17:34.508-04:00A sad tale, the small buried bones. A sad tale, the small buried bones. tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12299970145155468689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-85520931293000263312019-10-28T16:10:29.117-04:002019-10-28T16:10:29.117-04:00It's like the trailer for a movie - what happe...It's like the trailer for a movie - what happened before, what happened next? You've plunged us right into the heart of the story, really atmospheric, with just enough information to allow the imagination to run wild.sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01756314170839177900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-62038621371510695172019-10-28T16:03:36.710-04:002019-10-28T16:03:36.710-04:00An atmosphere thick with whirling emotions -- with...An atmosphere thick with whirling emotions -- with the plunge of knife breaking the spell. I like the idea of ancient trees burying the secrets.Jade Lihttp://tao-talk.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-30824570068908454522019-10-28T15:54:00.382-04:002019-10-28T15:54:00.382-04:00This was so dark with only a few hints of the back...This was so dark with only a few hints of the backstory.. his knife... the small bones... I am not sure I want to know what her broken promises are, but you open up so many opportunities, and many of them are quite sinister.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-30266069536565375972019-10-28T15:18:04.951-04:002019-10-28T15:18:04.951-04:00Absolutely chilling Grace. I love 'only the wi...Absolutely chilling Grace. I love 'only the wind hears his whispers.'Linda Lee Lyberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669367010600000396noreply@blogger.com