tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post1587289522355712195..comments2024-03-27T22:12:01.201-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: Five lighthouses on darknessGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-84884721725804779112017-03-14T18:39:21.764-04:002017-03-14T18:39:21.764-04:00I imagined the lighthouse itself, melancholy. What...I imagined the lighthouse itself, melancholy. What darkness it must witness. Beautiful expression, Grace. Angela Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14399426558625855571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-39526988732683286172017-03-13T08:44:37.022-04:002017-03-13T08:44:37.022-04:00iii.
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teeth of unforgivin sin...iii.<br />brittle stone of ice-<br />teeth of unforgivin sins<br />claw deep, darkness,<br />a seed<br /><br />Wonderful works of 'darkness', Grace. But above #3 sways from everything else!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-75900739083541037252017-03-13T08:24:25.581-04:002017-03-13T08:24:25.581-04:00Love the contrast between the title and the poems ...Love the contrast between the title and the poems themselvesAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05126230685516232230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-45058210898795517822017-03-13T08:18:16.923-04:002017-03-13T08:18:16.923-04:00Deliciously dark poem.Deliciously dark poem.Paul John Dearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08976172444697072142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-34102103234226435672017-03-12T20:14:11.228-04:002017-03-12T20:14:11.228-04:00A collection of nightmares from the dark side of G...A collection of nightmares from the dark side of Grace. I like it!Bekkie Sanchezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16300001421561443693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-45425144732503998602017-03-11T19:15:30.852-05:002017-03-11T19:15:30.852-05:00This feels like a chilling departure from sunnines...This feels like a chilling departure from sunniness... as if the coming darkness of night and depression is both inevitable and necessary. Fascinating, enjoyable to read. The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-75644105131555999552017-03-11T12:15:56.557-05:002017-03-11T12:15:56.557-05:00Dark and impressive images, Grace!Dark and impressive images, Grace!Edithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18060115820682797613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-52096793967384067692017-03-10T23:55:11.449-05:002017-03-10T23:55:11.449-05:00... its guuud and safe to be directed by a light h...... its guuud and safe to be directed by a light house, but where is it, friend Grace?^.^https://www.blogger.com/profile/17422876955246850636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-65374206147276192052017-03-10T23:50:44.804-05:002017-03-10T23:50:44.804-05:00Always loved lie houses, oops did I really say tha...Always loved lie houses, oops did I really say that ? Your poem gives me new hope, friend Grace ... as long as its not gonna be your soldier son/daughter or my soldier son/daughter ... lets see them pitch in, eg: Trudeaus son/daughter and Trumps son/ daughter and Putins son/daughter and Nethanyahos son/daughter and Kims son/daughter ... they will feel no love and compassion for us ... Always, cat. ^.^https://www.blogger.com/profile/17422876955246850636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-20697372893435965432017-03-10T20:45:07.159-05:002017-03-10T20:45:07.159-05:00Wonderfully constructed ... intriguing and mysteri...Wonderfully constructed ... intriguing and mysterious.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-36015348638329738612017-03-10T18:54:30.354-05:002017-03-10T18:54:30.354-05:00The structure of this -- 5 parts, separated-- lend...The structure of this -- 5 parts, separated-- lends to a haunting feeling of disconnectedness that works well with the tone of your words. Wonderful, Grace. ~ Peace, JasonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-12532851211967050372017-03-10T17:12:20.552-05:002017-03-10T17:12:20.552-05:00The sea beside these lighthouses runs deep - very ...The sea beside these lighthouses runs deep - very well crafted Grace ��Xeniahttp://www.whippetwisdom.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-7094329578267184032017-03-10T14:17:40.210-05:002017-03-10T14:17:40.210-05:00Dark, very dark, Grace. But the more I read of yo...Dark, very dark, Grace. But the more I read of your work, the more I like it. The darkness here throws oneself into serious contemplation. JaneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-89115712654816967492017-03-10T08:31:48.465-05:002017-03-10T08:31:48.465-05:00There's a darkness around things that one has ...There's a darkness around things that one has done that seem to need forgiveness, but are not forgiven. In that case, the lighthouse makes one aware of these, at least, that is how I am reading it. I assume the other lighthouses support that middle one.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-92185883799973932172017-03-10T01:17:55.935-05:002017-03-10T01:17:55.935-05:00brittle stone of ice-
teeth of unforgivin sins
cla...brittle stone of ice-<br />teeth of unforgivin sins<br />claw deep, darkness,<br />a seed.......great! loved all the haikus...!Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-1035679819347972032017-03-09T22:38:15.205-05:002017-03-09T22:38:15.205-05:00Those are pretty scary Grace. Towers, bats and de...Those are pretty scary Grace. Towers, bats and dead men's fingers are really cool.Waltermarkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619428258264938946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-50195129134762395642017-03-09T21:38:22.493-05:002017-03-09T21:38:22.493-05:00Grace all are dark and mysterious, but I have to s...Grace all are dark and mysterious, but I have to say iv is my favorite. Weeping Willows will always speak to me.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-33026345565800037682017-03-09T20:58:03.215-05:002017-03-09T20:58:03.215-05:00These were guided by words and a marvelous imagina...These were guided by words and a marvelous imaginationAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-67007249561813737522017-03-09T20:53:33.305-05:002017-03-09T20:53:33.305-05:00Super poem, Grace! I love anything dark and eerie....Super poem, Grace! I love anything dark and eerie. Love the line...'wind picks up howling lament...' I do love to hear the wind howling. :) ghostmmnchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16463509569970002409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-84877983881844451122017-03-09T20:30:48.679-05:002017-03-09T20:30:48.679-05:00Deep and dark. Lovely write.Deep and dark. Lovely write.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-46889858625508473532017-03-09T17:49:02.356-05:002017-03-09T17:49:02.356-05:00Economically evocative Grace and what a finish - e...Economically evocative Grace and what a finish - especially loved "darkness reefed..."scotthastiepoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266153714529613752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-78520870343096874312017-03-09T16:35:41.917-05:002017-03-09T16:35:41.917-05:00Lighthouses are magnificent but also a little eeri...Lighthouses are magnificent but also a little eerie in the way way they mostly stand alone, throwing their light out to sea. Your poem reflects the eeriness so well, Grace.Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-54540960882013380042017-03-09T16:33:19.619-05:002017-03-09T16:33:19.619-05:00Deep and dark, intriguing verses. I trust the ligh...Deep and dark, intriguing verses. I trust the light will overcome darkness.lynn__https://www.blogger.com/profile/03991892804149727665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-6382520200274161462017-03-09T16:14:08.272-05:002017-03-09T16:14:08.272-05:00Love the loneliness of the lighthouses, bringing s...Love the loneliness of the lighthouses, bringing some much-needed light into a dark, dark world. And I read these verses:<br /><br />claw deep, darkness,<br />a seed<br /><br />a bit inverted<br /><br />Claw seep, darkness<br />a deed<br /><br />which also worked for me. At least, it set my brain running in all sorts of directions, perhaps not intended by you.Marina Sofiahttp://findingtimetowrite.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-59770799024665739822017-03-09T16:07:16.776-05:002017-03-09T16:07:16.776-05:00Interesting choice of a title, with each haiku, be...Interesting choice of a title, with each haiku, being a lighthouse, for the soul, in the spreading darkness, of our world.Therisa's Worldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14158009488213815860noreply@blogger.com