tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post1321228612861324497..comments2024-03-09T20:15:08.336-05:00Comments on everyday amazing: A state of mindGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-54189106361737087852014-07-01T20:13:11.639-04:002014-07-01T20:13:11.639-04:00There is a DADA Poem Generator? Who knew?! I am po...There is a DADA Poem Generator? Who knew?! I am positive your polishing what was generated is what made this so freaking amazing. It is an amazing ekphrasis of the image. The line about the beehive made me sad, as we have had four mass bee die-offs in our area in the last week, as a result of tree-sprayers (and likely clueless homeowners) using an insecticide with ingredients that kill bees. I like your image so much better. Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-61111117676836049512014-06-28T00:00:17.536-04:002014-06-28T00:00:17.536-04:00Kissing a place full of mistakes - will be good if...Kissing a place full of mistakes - will be good if it is like a mother kissing a child's wound to make everything.<br /><br />I like the images her particularly those you drew in the second stanza. They do look like a Picasso painting in words. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-54232363670861897182014-06-27T20:41:16.756-04:002014-06-27T20:41:16.756-04:00I relly enjoyed reading this. I love how you use w...I relly enjoyed reading this. I love how you use writing symbols and punctuation to create breaks! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-78067420710588403922014-06-27T20:07:54.660-04:002014-06-27T20:07:54.660-04:00I hate it when sharks reverse the dead sea :-) G...I hate it when sharks reverse the dead sea :-) Great fun in this piece!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-42927413570382824202014-06-27T17:15:58.770-04:002014-06-27T17:15:58.770-04:00Feathers belching...now that is an amazing image! ...Feathers belching...now that is an amazing image! Amazing Dadaism poem Grace!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-48736410090977875152014-06-27T12:55:47.743-04:002014-06-27T12:55:47.743-04:00Gets to be running around. That's where the fu...Gets to be running around. That's where the fun is in Dadaism. Great write Grace!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-90461876337985860962014-06-27T11:08:43.998-04:002014-06-27T11:08:43.998-04:00Kissing a place full of mistakes... lovely. Just l...Kissing a place full of mistakes... lovely. Just lovely. For me, it's hard to appreciate abstract forms like this. It's difficult for me to make the mental leap sometimes. But to me, it feels like the totality of your poem orbits the line above and gives me a compass to appreciate this stellar poem. Really well done. The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-22370741926932552252014-06-27T10:04:11.569-04:002014-06-27T10:04:11.569-04:00liked the flow in this, Grace - the final lines -&...liked the flow in this, Grace - the final lines -' Angel i...' I particularly liked - KAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-32574809187675545402014-06-27T09:13:34.696-04:002014-06-27T09:13:34.696-04:00i am smiling at a dada poem generator ...'I am...i am smiling at a dada poem generator ...'I am my wreath;' draws my whole mind to it...a beautiful poem Grace :)Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-22640990564383357682014-06-27T08:38:05.178-04:002014-06-27T08:38:05.178-04:00Very cleverly done.Very cleverly done.Roslyn Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-22879801621121475402014-06-27T05:24:04.652-04:002014-06-27T05:24:04.652-04:00I love your broken lines here-especially the disco...I love your broken lines here-especially the disconnect- I almost don't know what to say it's so cool-the whizzing, the spinning-dadaism is super fun-no limbs to complain :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01921287017261619201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-32948878042990631122014-06-27T04:21:30.517-04:002014-06-27T04:21:30.517-04:00That was very interesting, and finding the sense m...That was very interesting, and finding the sense made great reading.PirateGunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02619759991219830629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-64439525716713685542014-06-27T03:50:14.933-04:002014-06-27T03:50:14.933-04:00very nice picture of sounds..making sense at the s...very nice picture of sounds..making sense at the same time..loved it:)Arathi Hariharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142420236345157881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-84808843556207541512014-06-27T03:23:24.985-04:002014-06-27T03:23:24.985-04:00I had no idea there was such a thing as a dada poe...I had no idea there was such a thing as a dada poem generator - thanks for making me aware of it! But the stuff that comes out is only as good as the stuff you put in - so credit to you!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-37173766822703613272014-06-27T02:09:38.400-04:002014-06-27T02:09:38.400-04:00Wow... this works so well... holds together a stro...Wow... this works so well... holds together a strong thread.sharonleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13606000428878000878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-82821656312212143332014-06-26T20:32:20.061-04:002014-06-26T20:32:20.061-04:00Thank you for your lovely response ~ Some credit ...Thank you for your lovely response ~ Some credit goes to the dada poem generator, smiles ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-64435349398147171292014-06-26T19:18:36.404-04:002014-06-26T19:18:36.404-04:00The whole "point of your poem," not &quo...The whole "point of your poem," not "point of your point." :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-15184173811584675482014-06-26T19:17:08.422-04:002014-06-26T19:17:08.422-04:00This is crazy awesome. I loved every word, especia...This is crazy awesome. I loved every word, especially these:<br /><br />"I<br />am kissing a place full of mistakes <br />you"<br /><br />"Must be no justice <br />no little teeth <br />Wilting"<br /><br />"To feathers belching.<br />Beehives gab like rainy rain."<br /><br />"I am my wreath"<br /><br />"street life hell deep from mannequin so blue"<br /><br />Most people don't like this "form" because it seems to not make sense. But think about it: Amidst all the craziness, you made the profound statement, "I am my wreath." If that is the whole point of your point, hidden under what seems like nonsense, then you've passed along a lot of wisdom. What does a wreath do? It decorates, adorns, makes festive. So if we rely on outside things to do this for us, we will never attain true beauty and inner peace. But if we rest in the fact that we ourselves, our inward spirits, are our outward adornments, then we've learned a vital lesson. To me, that is what Dada, or nonsense poetry, is about ... hiding something profoundly wise and deep in the middle of silliness.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-79437755426376357472014-06-26T19:05:56.177-04:002014-06-26T19:05:56.177-04:00Cool and lovely Grace, always I love yours poems:)...Cool and lovely Grace, always I love yours poems:)Gloria Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03055543111865966546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-48399121323675992192014-06-26T18:37:05.511-04:002014-06-26T18:37:05.511-04:00I love kissing a place full of mistakes, mind latc...I love kissing a place full of mistakes, mind latching onto another. A thoughful patchwork of intrigue and images.author.nara.malonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07159847596372441526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-38831009485350883072014-06-26T18:24:26.734-04:002014-06-26T18:24:26.734-04:00Your imagination always continues to evolve into m...Your imagination always continues to evolve into many places in the universe.<br /><br />This poem is awesome! and incredible. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-89641844357490396692014-06-26T18:21:27.086-04:002014-06-26T18:21:27.086-04:00A fake summer would be bad, such stabbing, that ma...A fake summer would be bad, such stabbing, that mannequin had to be mad hahaPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-37399991641701308582014-06-26T17:33:16.555-04:002014-06-26T17:33:16.555-04:00'kissing a place full of mistakes' - subli...'kissing a place full of mistakes' - sublime. What a great piece, Grace!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-59833982252292075352014-06-26T16:57:25.060-04:002014-06-26T16:57:25.060-04:00I love the first lines, Grace, and "fake sum...I love the first lines, Grace, and "fake summer"...and the ending is divinely sad..or sadly divine>>Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-27600696844467586932014-06-26T16:17:09.165-04:002014-06-26T16:17:09.165-04:00A noisy car running a flower is a must on the supe...A noisy car running a flower is a must on the superhighway.. .really loved the flow of your words here.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com