tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post1076920454848666657..comments2024-03-28T21:42:05.069-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: jamming to strawberries fields foreverGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-73688930385519515192017-11-16T19:35:20.038-05:002017-11-16T19:35:20.038-05:00elegant lines filled to bursting.elegant lines filled to bursting.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-18877859649247891862017-11-12T02:44:39.351-05:002017-11-12T02:44:39.351-05:00Oh, hey. I suddenly sing the song.Oh, hey. I suddenly sing the song.Lux G.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00557863683608790087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-44795249254217227622017-11-11T15:38:54.396-05:002017-11-11T15:38:54.396-05:00What a tribute to such a legend-worthy fruit. And ...What a tribute to such a legend-worthy fruit. And I hear the Beatles in my head, again! :)Frank J. Tassonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11034177573832896440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-83880312726300039702017-11-11T07:01:05.904-05:002017-11-11T07:01:05.904-05:00omg, everyone else gets poetic but reading this ju...omg, everyone else gets poetic but reading this just makes me really hungry for strawberries! yum!MNL (Cactus Haiku)http://cactushaiku.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-85936421245055483032017-11-10T17:06:16.541-05:002017-11-10T17:06:16.541-05:00So delicious this- I especially liked "what w...So delicious this- I especially liked "what will we do with all this juice stuck in our mouths." Swoon!Nosainthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05807730653175525468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-83055574042953425802017-11-10T11:44:21.857-05:002017-11-10T11:44:21.857-05:00oh this is such a delicious song of praise "d...oh this is such a delicious song of praise "dipped in petticoats<br />of cream" yummy!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-42993010209023613982017-11-10T11:34:12.265-05:002017-11-10T11:34:12.265-05:00I love what you did for strawberries, Grace. They ...I love what you did for strawberries, Grace. They are my favorite. I like that they have petticoats at times. I can still get fresh ones but they cost more! Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-36842553067403425032017-11-10T08:13:46.020-05:002017-11-10T08:13:46.020-05:00Makes me long again for the fresh strawberries! Wo...Makes me long again for the fresh strawberries! Wonderful!Mary Hoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17528465484642169618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-31415407595244426952017-11-10T05:06:08.952-05:002017-11-10T05:06:08.952-05:00becomes honeycomb
of sweetness
So nice to think ...becomes honeycomb<br />of sweetness <br /><br />So nice to think something sour can turn out sweet!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-71400605733927531732017-11-09T22:39:44.146-05:002017-11-09T22:39:44.146-05:00I love the way you play with layers of meaning and...I love the way you play with layers of meaning and use such scrumptious, tactile language in your ode!<br />Annahttp://www.chromapoetica.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-85395954294409099582017-11-09T21:45:40.362-05:002017-11-09T21:45:40.362-05:00LusciousLusciousJudy Dykstra-Brownhttp://judydykstrabrown.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-4095549337809069422017-11-09T19:46:32.673-05:002017-11-09T19:46:32.673-05:00If I knew strawberries were like that, I'd hav...If I knew strawberries were like that, I'd have eaten them long ago.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-90550274657949887222017-11-09T19:37:27.841-05:002017-11-09T19:37:27.841-05:00Such a good point. I want REAL field strawberries,...Such a good point. I want REAL field strawberries, warmed by the sun. Grocery store berries, like you said, taste like nothing.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-91615063430424094822017-11-09T18:11:24.685-05:002017-11-09T18:11:24.685-05:00Clever, clever title & I just love every lusci...Clever, clever title & I just love every luscious bite of this ode!Jillyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14971432705586726610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-50196498156271747552017-11-09T17:06:56.805-05:002017-11-09T17:06:56.805-05:00Love me some strawberries--smothered in whipped cr...Love me some strawberries--smothered in whipped cream, or with chocolate or caramel hats. This is, as noted, a delicious ode, with duplicity & metaphoric splendor too.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-41766958714733661442017-11-09T17:04:51.524-05:002017-11-09T17:04:51.524-05:00Ha. I think you brought the heat with those strawb...Ha. I think you brought the heat with those strawberries. I like how you use that lone action verb to start each stanza as well. Very nicely done grace.Xhttp://www.xpoet.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-79130488982362655412017-11-09T16:58:36.325-05:002017-11-09T16:58:36.325-05:00sensual strawberries..sensual strawberries..Alison Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08215158863724691355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-11443285098710262422017-11-09T16:24:54.601-05:002017-11-09T16:24:54.601-05:00I have memories of when strawberries tasted of som...I have memories of when strawberries tasted of something. This brings them back :)Jane Doughertyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14700193165487305298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-75604005290710195192017-11-09T15:47:43.617-05:002017-11-09T15:47:43.617-05:00Such a delicious and evocative poem!Such a delicious and evocative poem!adcitlalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17758244859851276015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-30425693677888444092017-11-09T15:17:39.188-05:002017-11-09T15:17:39.188-05:00I liked those strawberries associated with the &qu...I liked those strawberries associated with the "purest kiss" at the end. Nice poem of praise.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-82249741969549317272017-11-09T15:13:05.261-05:002017-11-09T15:13:05.261-05:00A wonderful title, Grace, riffing on The Beatles! ...A wonderful title, Grace, riffing on The Beatles! That is a delicious image of strawberries dipped in petticoats<br />of cream and singing a siren song. The ending is sweet with moon, juice and kisses.<br />Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-71490529169843642592017-11-09T15:09:28.616-05:002017-11-09T15:09:28.616-05:00So great, and what a good summer memory... we stil...So great, and what a good summer memory... we still have jam that I cooked when they were at it's best. And it works well in so many ways.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-82507430032458633902017-11-09T15:06:35.520-05:002017-11-09T15:06:35.520-05:00I love this delicious ode. On one hand it is so in...I love this delicious ode. On one hand it is so innocent and on the other, it is so erotic. I like the innocent side better with the whipped cream aprons. I like that image a lot and reminds me of my grandmother's ruffled aprons she often wore.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-86891137348679479542017-11-09T14:58:19.476-05:002017-11-09T14:58:19.476-05:00I cannot come up with anything to say that will no...I cannot come up with anything to say that will not get me kicked out of here.<br /><br />Your erotica is so damn hot.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-64102135661368830692017-11-09T14:05:53.791-05:002017-11-09T14:05:53.791-05:00Oh how I LOVE this! And YES to strawberries with ...Oh how I LOVE this! And YES to strawberries with chocolate skirts, whipped cream aprons, sour cream mustaches. All that juice and oooooh that kiss :) Delectable! <3lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.com