tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post1009662188893186971..comments2024-03-29T10:45:39.020-04:00Comments on everyday amazing: when the muse is in/out of sync with the moon-Gracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-10512894770527372582020-01-10T20:18:52.682-05:002020-01-10T20:18:52.682-05:00Outstanding, Grace!
"i got passionfruit
...Outstanding, Grace!<br /><br />"i got passionfruit<br /> road-raging my throat"<br /><br />"splutters ink, burns the air<br /> with bright bluish green flames-<br /><br />zinc <br /> of all my silvery dreams "purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-21723709229566890382020-01-09T18:36:25.778-05:002020-01-09T18:36:25.778-05:00love the rhythm and the originality of the languag...love the rhythm and the originality of the language in this..JIMJIm Feeneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754509821434474479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-64971673942942109832020-01-09T17:47:12.793-05:002020-01-09T17:47:12.793-05:00The last two lines really close out the poem. Won...The last two lines really close out the poem. Wonderfully, written Grace. Zinc - is also very good for healing.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-58772090744675890062020-01-08T22:42:18.363-05:002020-01-08T22:42:18.363-05:00haha-- lovely!haha-- lovely!Alexandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04087069977867729538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-32211175324743879612020-01-08T14:25:24.967-05:002020-01-08T14:25:24.967-05:00I love those first two lines, and the zinc explodi...I love those first two lines, and the zinc exploding with colour at the end. A wonderful write. Carol J Forresterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00723804583353892863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-11970370239699991512020-01-08T13:36:31.236-05:002020-01-08T13:36:31.236-05:00Wonderfully done, Grace. Lovely to read you.Wonderfully done, Grace. Lovely to read you.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-23071863983077098152020-01-08T12:49:47.818-05:002020-01-08T12:49:47.818-05:00Very nice. Love the imagery you've created.Very nice. Love the imagery you've created.Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-6385707660113986672020-01-08T11:18:29.345-05:002020-01-08T11:18:29.345-05:00A moon and muse. One certainly affects the other. ...A moon and muse. One certainly affects the other. And dreams are seldom the real thing.Mary Hoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17528465484642169618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-49244473012396888962020-01-08T05:35:13.923-05:002020-01-08T05:35:13.923-05:00All this inspiration, choked by zinc-stained persp...All this inspiration, choked by zinc-stained perspirations! I think every hardworking poet well understands the fickle nature of muse wine. Well done. Brendanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03983584155125369291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-2445410092787606412020-01-08T03:32:33.280-05:002020-01-08T03:32:33.280-05:00You saw a target and hit it Grace, Though not a pa...You saw a target and hit it Grace, Though not a particular fan of the beat school you did find a way to encapsulate its discordant road to imagery. <br /><br />One day I do surmise that "passion fruit" will be more easily digestible. Perhaps the gluten free will aid its journey to comestible.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-82058032606638296722020-01-07T22:55:35.051-05:002020-01-07T22:55:35.051-05:00this poem is delicious. the last stanza is a dream...this poem is delicious. the last stanza is a dream.A Reading Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12229414372642627877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-75001119259647442672020-01-07T22:14:03.515-05:002020-01-07T22:14:03.515-05:00"zinc
of all my silvery dreams"... ..."zinc <br /> of all my silvery dreams"... Grace that is marvelous! Debi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-80103967165494833062020-01-07T17:25:18.385-05:002020-01-07T17:25:18.385-05:00That bile sure can build up and be nothing more th...That bile sure can build up and be nothing more than zinc.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-38148040366154880122020-01-07T16:45:50.285-05:002020-01-07T16:45:50.285-05:00Out of sync … leads to zinc! (Sorry, couldn't...Out of sync … leads to zinc! (Sorry, couldn't resist!) Loved your poem.indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-68230107453531908142020-01-07T16:40:44.058-05:002020-01-07T16:40:44.058-05:00You lit up the place with your beatnik beat, Grace...You lit up the place with your beatnik beat, Grace!Jade Lihttp://tao-talk.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-48070764475103589902020-01-07T15:27:05.815-05:002020-01-07T15:27:05.815-05:00My fave line is 'zinc of all my silvery dreams...My fave line is 'zinc of all my silvery dreams'- perfection!Linda Lee Lyberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669367010600000396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-77849321045223032522020-01-07T15:13:41.869-05:002020-01-07T15:13:41.869-05:00Your poem has a touch of beat and a massive twist ...Your poem has a touch of beat and a massive twist of passionfruit road rage, Grace! It is vibrant and vivid, and I love the way it appeals to the senses. I have no idea where Rasmi’s bakery is, but I like the sound of the gluten-free vegan cake. My favourite lines:<br />‘…ignites<br />all my anxieties, stirs up<br /> seasonal blues as crystal moon’<br />and<br />‘splutters ink, burns the air<br /> with bright bluish green flames’.<br />Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-83772781166376740662020-01-07T15:09:38.074-05:002020-01-07T15:09:38.074-05:00Oh that concluding line... the false hope of silve...Oh that concluding line... the false hope of silver only being zinc. The buildup of bile just makes that concluding line so much stronger.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-87539152341391859782020-01-07T15:07:10.249-05:002020-01-07T15:07:10.249-05:00Ah, Grace, amazing as ever! I love that road-ragin...Ah, Grace, amazing as ever! I love that road-raging passion-fruit, and the burning bile - a great cascade of imagery, and an unexpected element at the end. Lovely stuff. sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01756314170839177900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-82506955719273659572020-01-07T15:03:01.415-05:002020-01-07T15:03:01.415-05:00Thank you and I hope you get back to writing poems...Thank you and I hope you get back to writing poems! Missin you!Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4856662679041828863.post-73185482097196291642020-01-07T14:51:34.716-05:002020-01-07T14:51:34.716-05:00I’m so thankful you’re here to channel the past — ...I’m so thankful you’re here to channel the past — you, Claudia, and Brian had such connected writing styles. You were the Trinity of Poetry. I will never forget that inspiring/inspired leadership.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.com