Thursday, May 20, 2021

Waltz

 

Scribble a summer day

Lilacs scents in the air

Birdsongs fill morning steps

Serene blue is the sky


Paint me a carefree noon

Blue iris blooming joys

As children's red balloons

Buckle kites, straying toys


Compose an evening tune

Setting sun on my tea

The rising flower moon

Pink star we hope to see



Lilacs



Posted for dVerse Poets Pub - MTB hosted by Bjorn Rudberg.   I tried to waltz in my poem.  Thanks for your visits and comments.

18 comments:

  1. Beautifully done Grace. I lover your lilacs.

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  2. You have waltzed ~ beautifully ~ to your poem.

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  3. Lyrical and rhythmic! Well done.

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  4. Beautiful rhymes and blooms: I imagine those flowers waltzing in the summer breeze. Lovely!

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  5. Beautiful, Grace! I love all the colors, and those lilacs.

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  6. I love all the colors you have, made me the think of the waltz of the flowers by Tchaikovsky

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  7. I love the idea of a rising flower moon as dessert for the entree of the lovely day.

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  8. Very pretty: “The rising flower moon“ ... makes me think of the moon with a flower wreath in her hair :)

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  9. On my daily walks the lilacs are in full bloom and they smell heavenly. I do look forward to the flower moon.

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  10. splendid. Nice to the ear and pleasant to the eyes. Love it. thanks.

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  11. You have a wonderful rhythm running through your poem, Grace, and I was hooked by the opening line ‘scribble a summer day’, the use of colour and the setting sun on tea.

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  12. As Kim says, the colours draw you in. It feels like a wonderfully wistful and relaxing dance.

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  13. So beautiful and delicate Grace. 🙂

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  14. Love the presence of flowers that put colour into the fray, Grace!

    Hank

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  15. Love how you scribble, paint, and compose your vision of a perfect day here!

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