Wednesday, July 17, 2013

Where we will sit & dine


Spanish Banks, Vancouver, BC
Grace @ Everyday Amazing



Sit beside me
Where the sky blows, cools fresh as pines      
Sit beside me
Where fine sands melt into the sea
Wind, forest, sun - these we will dine  
And bottle summer days to wine 
Sit beside me


Posted for Poetry Jam - Summer Heat - Enjoying the summer heat in BC ~ 
Poetry form:   Rondelet -Seven lines with the rhyme scheme of AbAabbA ~

23 comments:

  1. and bottle summer days to wine...love that...
    hey you know i would too...i love the beach...smiles...glad you and the fam
    are having fun.

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  2. Hmmmmm I love the freshness in your words
    Great capture, Grace

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  3. What a wonderful and romantic description of a summer day! Thank you for posting.

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  4. Oh, if only we COULD bottle those summer days as we bottle wine. Looks like a beautiful place to dine, Grace.

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  5. Quite the long log line, hope you enjoyed your dine

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  6. If only it could be bottled up and sipped nightly! I'll take that and sit where the sky blows for a perfect summer night!

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  7. An ideal post in keeping with the heat of summer - short struts here and there. Nicely Grace!

    Hank

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  8. Love your poem, love this form too. So nice.

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  9. I could bottle up these summer days.

    Beautiful poem.

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  10. Sit beside me - What a great thought and lovely invitation. Wonderful emotion.

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  11. Oh what a pretty poetry form, first time I've seen this. Thanks for sharing. Lovely poem, Grace. Sounds like you're enjoying your vacation :)

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  12. OOOOO. I'll be there in a minute. Save some for me. Short and astonishingly inviting.

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  13. Feeling of close person, sitting beside and sharing these beautiful days...nice, Grace :)

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  14. Grace, I love this!! A wonderful invitation and you gave me such a smile--thank you :-)

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  15. this is lovely! I like it! Cheers!

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  16. Love this and your photos, too!

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  17. ...and bottle summer days...love that!

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