Monday, September 24, 2012

Sleep



your words like
warm chocolate cup,
evening lullaby

~0~0~

your lips tasting of cinnamon,
turns me into a
restless tide

 
~0~0~

folding wings,
you nestle close to me -
black butterfly




picture credit:   here

34 comments:

  1. I loved Black Butterfly..Lovely Haiku all Grace..

    I am here: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/09/no-sleep-in-her-eyes.html

    RS:)

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  2. How perfectly romantic. I really liked the words like chocolate.

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  3. Such a sensual run, as you boil the cup and then some.

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  4. A nice warm poem for a chilly autumn morn.
    Thanks
    ~rick

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  5. Love the combination and contrast here, with a natural progression too. A busy night!

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  6. nice...love the chocolate and cinnamon...and the butterfly...lots of subtle intimacy in this one grace....

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  7. Sounds like a cozy and romantic evening, lovely imagery :)

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  8. Awesome ... sweet dreams ... very well written triplet of haiku.

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  9. Grace--you caught sleep here so elegantly. Loved these.

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  10. Sensuously real! You made sleep to be a luxury! Nicely Grace!

    Hank

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  11. Love this set! And especially the images of hot chocolate before bed! Lovely.

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  12. So beautiful, Grace! Right now the warm cup of hot chocolate is so inviting!

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  13. I'd love a cup of chocolate for a lullaby. Lovely lines; I enjoyed them all.

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  14. Oh, delicious passion. Sleep will have to wait!

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  15. A prelude to a lovely evening and a peaceful sleep, I believe!

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  16. Lovely haiku set...First one...My favorite!

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  17. I am in love with the warm chocolate cup... nice set of haiku

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  18. Such diverse takes on a single prompt!!! Lovely!


    Building Lego Dreams!

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  19. chocolate: lullaby; cinnamon: tide; and wings: butterfly. Safety, affection, Sleep!!!

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  20. Romantic, soft, sensuous, spicy, you've captured so many nuances in a few lines.

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  21. Very sweet:)

    ~Sayantini Bhattacharya
    http://sayantini-bhattacharya.blogspot.in

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  22. Wowww... delicious haiku with the sweet touch of chocolate.
    :)

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  23. SO beautiful, especially the folded winged black butterfly......lovely.

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  24. fel like having one of those...

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  25. Perfectly romantic and sensual.

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