Sunday, September 9, 2012

Pepper




her laughter
like black whole pepper,  
crinkled over bowl of noodles  

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his lecture 
woke up the sleepy audience, 
slice of orange zest 

~0~0~0

spicy sauce
dotted the conversation, 
as a lace strap falls   


Posted for Haiku Heights - Pepper - Thanks for the visits ~

picture credit:  here

29 comments:

  1. haha that last one is a bit naughty i think...smiles...the first is a really cool way to use pepper...it works...

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  2. Wonderful composed series Grace. Thank you for sharing.

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  3. These are good. I really like the peppery spice in the last one. The first made me hungry(the picture looks like Vietnamese pho).

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    1. Yes it is ~ Thanks for the visit ~

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  4. The last one woke me up (I've just been out for a meal) and was a leap from the first two! I think the imagery in the first is the strongest.

    Thanks for this prompt, and all your visits to my blog. You have kept me enthused!

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  5. Terrific threesome, Grace! I think I love the third one best!

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  6. Oh what some seasoning can do to those that catch them in their view and up their nose curling up their toes, in a good way haha

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  7. Loved all three of these. My favorite is the one about the lecture awakening the sleep audience. (He must have been good! Smiles)

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  8. All three haiku are a delight to read but the third haiku has a naughty surprise!

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  9. I really enjoyed your haiku set today. The last one is my favourite,

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  10. I like lectures that keep me awake. Nice set. I love the third one.

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  11. spicy set of haiku..nice . :)

    Thanks for all your visits to my blog and sharing your thoughts..

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  12. Wonderfully written ... the last one indeed is spicy ;-)

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  13. Laughter like pepper! I see it, I've heard it!
    Orange zest! so necessary to listening
    spicy sauce! I can see how this kind of conversation could lead to the lace falling.

    Most original and delightful, Grace.

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  14. A nice set of three, with a bit of fun in the last one.

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  15. Yum for that photo :) and a LOL for the last. ;) Loved all three, Grace.

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  16. loved the last one ;)
    interesting use of pepper in all three haikus !

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  17. First one is my favorite! A very good prompt suggestion... liked it :)

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  18. Very lovely...especially the last.
    Thank you for sharing,
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine, USA

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  19. Hi Grace! Thank you for your sweet comment on my blog. :) Love your suggestion for a prompt, pepper! Spicy and strong like your haiku :)

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  20. I've heard very few peppery lecturers, and many more of the other variety!

    Pepper Tree

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  21. I always enjoy your haikus. I especially enjoy the first section with the black whole pepper imagery. BTW, that photo makes me hungry.

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