Friday, May 25, 2012

Joy



pink petals
cleaving fragrant drops,  
joys of spring 

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music sheet
full of heart shaped notes, 
song of joy 

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wrapped in pink, 
she swivels and turns, 
mother's gem 



Commentary:   I was specially touched by Tarun's haiku for me ~ Thank you

Calm like a mother
you taught me this enchanting art
my haiku mother.

(I dedicate this haiku to you Grace for you have taught me and at times corrected my haiku. I have never seen you but I know that we have a heart-to-heart bond like a mother and son.)

Posted for Haiku Heights and Haiku My Heart 


Picture credit:   Reena of Missing moments 

33 comments:

  1. Gorgeous! I have a special spot for Bleeding Hearts..they've been a favorite since I was a wee girl!

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  2. and i - our fence is filled with their pink joy and yes i hear music!

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  3. Joy indeed just from the simple things, nicely written.

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  4. Beautifully done - especially the second one.

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  5. Lovely use of the haiku. Quite original. I agree with Anthony - especially the second one.

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  6. smiles..the middle one made me smile, kinda playful...and romantic

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  7. You've explored joy from several perspectives. I think the sheet music is my favorite.

    Cultivating Joy

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  8. Wonderful crafted haiku ~ my favorite is 'mother's gem' ~ have a wonderful weekend ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  9. Great haiku,Grace! To be able to create great haiku from ordinary things is just amazing!

    Hank

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  10. amazing :) the last one is soooo amazing! loved it!

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  11. This is really beautiful Grace! Second one is my favorite:)

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  12. Beautiful all. The second one is a heart-stealer; makes me want to run to the piano and play Cavatina.

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  13. what a splendid set Grace... you are amazing...

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    1. Thank you for the lovely haiku dedication ~

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  14. Each, a beautiful creation and exuding joy profoundly. I admire your haiku, Grace.

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  15. Absolutely lovely set....and who doesn't love bleeding hearts!?

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  16. Just what my heart needed ... it brings a smile to my spirit. :) Lovely, lovely, lovely, Grace!! Have fun on your continued tour!!!

    Joyous Heart

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  17. Bleeding hearts are one of my favorites, such a pretty little flower and they do look like a line of music notes, great insight and lovely haiku!

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  18. dear grace,
    h how i love bleeding hearts, delicate and encouraging with their dancing joy. your haiku are especially beautiful as are you. thank you for being an endearing part of haiku my heart.

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  19. Very beautiful set....Would like to play with those fragrant drops...
    Beautiful dedication from Tarun :)

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  20. You set of haiku today r very very pleasing to my eye.. a beautiful picture it paints..! :)

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  21. Very well done, nice haiku to read and a joy to re-read.

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  22. How sweet that Tarun dedicated a haiku to you. :) You do have a way to evoke so many different emotions with your haiku and vivid images through your words. Lovely as always :)

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  23. lovely, lilting poems. i am particularly fond of heart shaped notes.

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  24. like and love both of them!, HH feels like a family Grace :)

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  25. Second one made me sing with joy...what a lovely haiku..wow..

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  26. NO words .. its simply amazing ..

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