Thursday, February 2, 2012

Dusty road





heavy wooden cane
scrapping the red dusty bowl,
   louder than child's cries    

~0~0

she edges slowly
towards door of no return,
white windows open


Written for Few Miles Haiku Challenge 2012 for the month of February:   Day 3- Picture Prompt 


14 comments:

  1. A bit of an end and a new beginning, sad and happy, ying and yang, frik and frak, Pat and cat, enough of that..haha

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  2. This touched me! Deeply! You write so well. Especially haiku. :)

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  3. A new life begins and another one walks toward the white window...lovely haiku

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  4. Touching and beautiful take on the image.. :-) Grace :-)

    Someone is Special

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  5. Poignant take on the prompt. Lovely.

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  6. scrapping the red dusty bowl

    this paints such a powerful visual image ... well done!

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  7. Yeah, I like the way you got inside her head with the second one. Great description on the first!

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  8. That second one gave me a bit of a chill. Beautiful work, Heaven.

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  9. haiku is cute to read,
    you never fail,

    charming write.

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  10. Wow, this is so poignant. Beautiful!

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