Friday, January 20, 2012

Tiptoe

orchestra waltzing
white belles tiptoe and dance, 
snowflakes whirling mad  






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the clock hand tiptoes
one minute before midnight ,
moonrise by the sea 

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snow threw a tantrum  
loud thunder and crashing sounds,
i held my tea cup  






Posted for Haiku Heights:   Prompt is Tiptoe
and Haiku My Heart


Poetry form:   Haiku and senryu forms -  3 lines of 17 syllables.

22 comments:

  1. Tiptoed through and a great haiku or two or three by you..haha

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  2. These are beautiful haiku...You created such beautiful art with your words.

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  3. I tiptoed into this beautiful blog today
    cheers
    Sush

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  4. Enjoyed them all but the one to accompany the pic was best, I think.

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  5. beautiful loved the movement in the picture too thank you x

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  6. Beautiful haiku tiptoeing in all three instances.

    Hank

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  7. nice haiku....i like the snow as dancers for sure...had a night of snow and sleet last night here...

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  8. lovely photo and dancing haiku ~namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) linked w/HMH

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  9. Love these verses on the prompt tiptoe. The picture at the first is very lovely and makes the haiku stronger.

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  10. You've really set the standard high. I absolutely love the first one.

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  11. applause for the last one.Super stylization. :)

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  12. I could use a little moonrise by the sea right now. I like that image!

    Shadowy Path

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  13. I cannot stop thinking of Tiny Tim.

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  14. "The clock hand tiptoes"
    Fantastic line. My ultimate compliment: wish I had thought of it.

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  15. What an artful blog.
    I shall comment in haiku.
    I will follow you!

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  16. gorgeous dance haiku and picture.

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  17. your grace and love of words paints my heart like a new morning.
    so glad to find you here. hoping for your beauty every haiku my heart friday.

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  18. Oh my ... I cannot decide my favorite between the first and the last. Great set!!

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