Thursday, September 22, 2011

Boat ride



boat coasting over 
blue water shimmering sky
rippling quiet day



daybreak horizon
preparing to sail away
to waters unknown




Posted for In Tandem # 11 and Haiku Heights - prompt is water.


Picture credit:   Jinksy 

13 comments:

  1. Sea journeys are quite amazing and exciting indeed albeit a little long!

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  2. Coasting, shimmering, rippling ... I'm floating along in your lovely Haiku.

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  3. Took me the Jack Sparrow way :) reading the last line!!

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  4. i would love to be on that boat! sailing away somewhere new!
    lovely, thoughtful haiku :)

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  5. How well you daybreak dawned for my night boat! Lovely haiku...

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  6. Beautiful words.
    Made me yearn for still waters and a gentle boat trip.

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  7. A boat ride can be tantalizing. It would be fun! Nice write!

    Hank

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  8. Waters unknown, does it for me!

    Nicely!

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  9. I'm ready for an adventure. Some unknown waters would suit me just fine right now!



    My Watery Haiku

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  10. Grace~ Beautiful haiku... you incorporated Jinksy's picture into the water prompt with seeming ease.

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  11. I really like the last two lines. It's what boating should be all about.

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